Can anyone help me change my essay and who can change my essay?

The details, the details when he hears it, there is a lot of talent, how can he just say that he plays the piano? Let's change it again, but it's still good.

"Safety first" is a truth that everyone knows, as young people in the 21st century, they should also know and know some relevant legal knowledge in life to protect themselves, and then protect their rights and interests from infringement.

Today, I read the "Reader of Law Popularization Education" and gained a lot. This book mainly takes the three growth environments of teenagers, namely family, school, and society as the background, and teaches us the laws and common sense of life to protect ourselves and stay away from illegal crimes.

For example, from this I learned: primary school students are also citizens, personal portraits are protected, and hatred of iron into steel will be the method (?? I don't know what it is) and a series of legal common sense.

Each article in the book gives an example to make it easier for us to understand.

One of the cartoons called "Fractions Are Not the Last Word" impressed me the most!

The cartoon in the book mainly talks about: a student who did poorly in an exam, was scolded by his father when he came home, and couldn't figure it out for a while, so he left a letter to his parents. The letter was to the effect that their parents only cared about their own learning, and the teacher also asked them to do so much homework all day long, and they had to make up classes during the holidays.

Reading this letter, I can't help but be shocked, this classmate, just because of a failure in an exam, actually thought of dying, how sad it is!

In today's real life, if a failure in an exam changes a student's personality, making him feel inferior, dull, lose self-confidence, and lose his enthusiasm for learning, how can such a student's grades improve?

Nowadays, many schools judge heroes by scores, students also judge by scores, and parents also judge success or failure by their own children's grades (this sentence is very good), thus ignoring the importance of all-round development of morality, intelligence and body.

This way of judging heroes by test scores does not truly reflect a person's overall quality. In my opinion, both teachers and parents should not only focus on scores, but also pay attention to cultivating students' independent thinking ability, innovation ability and practical ability, so as to promote the all-round development of minors.

Young people are the pillars of the future of the motherland. We must know, understand, and abide by the law from an early age. For your own tomorrow and future, start from today, start from now, start from this moment.

Don't talk to strangers casually, obey the law, know how to protect your interests reasonably, and don't act blindly!

We must do: "Popularize the law first, care for tomorrow!" ”

I can only help you change it like this, you can take a closer look at it yourself, and there is, there is a place above that is not very clear:: Hate iron into steel will be the method (?? I don't know what it is).

The first paragraph: "safety first", people have long been accustomed to this sentence. As young people in the 21st century, they should know some basic legal knowledge to protect their legitimate rights and interests.

You're writing so well, you don't need to change it.

1.Missing questions.

2.There should be 2 spaces in front of the natural paragraph.

You can add a piece of your real experience to it.

You can go to see an article: Bingxin's Memories of Reading.

Meet the book.

Books are like a clear spring in the vast desert, nourishing the dry heart; Books are like a breeze in the hot summer, blowing away the oppressive heat; Books are like a ray of sunshine in a cold winter day, a warm and cold body...

I vaguely remember when I first came into contact with books, I took over those colorful "villain books" from my mother's hands".Although I didn't know what the little black square meant, I was still lying on the table and watching obsessively. Since then, I have formed an indissoluble bond with the book, and the beautiful pictures and beautiful stories in the book are displayed in front of my eyes - the powerful Monkey King, the witty and brave Lion King, the clever and witty Three Little Pigs, the beautiful and kind Snow White... Books open up a magical world in front of me, it makes me cry, it makes me laugh, it makes me cry, it makes me uplifted, when I am lonely, when I am lost, when I am afraid, there is always a friend who will never leave me.

That's the book, and the book is about it, just when I was still ignorant.

Holding the book quietly and looking at it obsessively, I couldn't let go of the book in my hand at this time. I don't know what kind of story it will bring to me. The fascinating book made me feel like I was walking into Notre Dame Cathedral and listening to the bells there; It was as if I had come to Paul Kochagin again, touching his iron will... Every day, I inhale the sweet rain in the book, absorb the essence of the book, and absorb the truth in the book.

In the sea of books formed by the stream of books, I walked through the time of elementary school, and made an appointment with books, just as I was growing up.

Gradually, I grew up and entered secondary school. Books are still with me, and in addition to my busy homework, I pick up the book and chew it carefully, and in the dead of night, we are confidants. I weep for the sorrow of the book, I laugh for the joy of the book, I let myself be one with the book.

Sighing softly at the words in the book, making an appointment with the book is in the process of my growth;

With books, I listened to the wisdom of my predecessors in the quiet fragrance of ink;

With the book, I saw the greatness of human nature in the world of black and white;

With the book, I grew up in a clear dream...

Holding the book all the way, the childishness has subsided, in exchange for growth and happiness, and the line is strong. Meeting books is a lifelong commitment.