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Anonymous users2024-02-06Hao Duan: After sitting for a long time, he got tired of it. Neither dared to go out, but there was nothing to do, and he felt as if the weather had become a habit of not being able to get along with him.
No, he can't give in. He has been pulling the car for more than a day, and this is not the first time in the summer, he can't just "soak" for a day. I want to go out, but my legs are really too lazy to move, and my body is very soft, as if I haven't taken a bath, and although I sweat a lot, my heart is not happy.
After sitting for a while, he couldn't sit still anymore, and he was sweating while sitting anyway, so it was better to go out and try it.
Walking for a while, sitting for a while, he was always too lazy to buy and sell. Until noon, he didn't feel hungry. I want to eat something as usual, and I feel sick when I see food.
The stomach was almost filled with all kinds of water, and sometimes there would be a soft sound in it, like a mule and a horse, and the stomach would sound like a mule and a horse.
Appreciation: What is written here is the scene of Xiangzi pulling the cart under the scorching sun, which is delicate and realistic, and makes people empathize. The narrative and metaphor are vivid and vivid, and they powerfully highlight the hardships and misery of Xiangzi's life as a cart.
Good Duan: After two or three weeks, he slipped his leg out. He knew he was running well.
The running method is evidence of the driver's ability and qualifications. The one who was slapping his feet, like a pair of cattails on the ground, was undoubtedly a novice who had just come up from the countryside. The head was very low, his feet rubbed against the ground, and he ran at the same speed as he walked, and it was the old men over fifty years old who were quite running.
The experienced and the weak, but there is another way; thorax inward, very deep; The legs are raised very high; One walk and one probe; In this way, they come out of running very hard, when in fact they are not at all faster than others; They rely on "style" to maintain their dignity. Of course, Shoko would never take such gestures. His legs are long and big, his waist is very stable, he doesn't make much noise when he runs, his steps are a little stretched, and the handlebars don't move, so that the seat feels safe and comfortable.
When it comes to stopping, no matter how fast you run, you will stand by rubbing your big feet on the ground twice; His strength seemed to reach all parts of the car. With his back slightly bent and his hands loosely gripping the handlebars, he moved, neatly, and accurately; Running fast without seeing hurry, fast without danger. Even in the chartered car, this must be considered very expensive.
Appreciation: This paragraph of character description, from the costume, posture, and figure, to the pride of the person who eats by strength, physical strength, and character are all wonderfully written, presenting a living Xiangzi in front of us. The author praises him loudly - he is robust, unpretentious, and full of life, let's enjoy this old Chinese Beijing rickshaw driver with the author!
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Anonymous users2024-02-05Ba Jin: Sunrise over the sea.
The sky is still a light blue, very light in color. In the blink of an eye, a red glow appeared on the horizon, slowly expanding its range and intensifying its light. I knew the sun was going to rise from the horizon, so I looked there without turning my eyes.
Sure enough, after a while, a small half of the sun's face appeared in that place, and it was really red, but there was no light. The sun seemed to be carrying a heavy load, slowly and slowly, and at last it finally broke through the clouds and jumped completely out of the sea, and the color was very lovely. In an instant, this crimson round thing suddenly emitted a dazzling light, which made people's eyes hurt, and the cloud next to it suddenly became bright.
Appreciation: This paragraph describing the sunrise describes the sunrise from the color, line, action, and light to the sunrise out to sea, grasping the characteristics of the rising sun red but not bright, gradually rising, and rising relatively slowly, the description is meticulous, the writing is unique, and the Chaoyang writes the lovely and rich people's actions, expressions and even feelings, and in the description of the rising process of the rising sun, it also shows that the author's mood is also changed with the rising sun, sometimes excited, sometimes anxious, and finally as relieved as the rising sun, This paragraph directly describes the rising sun, and finally uses contrast and contrast, writing about the changes in the surrounding clouds, so as to highlight the characteristics of the rising sun, making the passage unrestrained and full of changes.
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Anonymous users2024-02-041 Appreciation: This passage uses metaphor, association, imagination, exaggeration and other rhetorical methods to describe Tolstoy's appearance, and shows Leo Tolstoy's loyalty, gentleness, kindness, and sharpness and depth. Although it is written about his appearance, it blends with Tolstoy's life, allowing people to see his life from his appearance.
The author admires Tolstoy and expresses infinite reverence for Tolstoy.
2 Appreciation: This part of the expedition from the underwater forest tells a magical experience. Using vivid and vivid descriptions of appearance, the otter is vividly written from various aspects such as size, value, skin, color, head, ears, eyes, etc., making people feel like they are on the scene and full of appeal.
3 Appreciation: Then we ushered in the mackerel. From my movements, demeanor, and psychological description, I showed the ferocity of the mackerel, and then described the appearance of the mackerel, especially the writing that the gums can bite people into meat sauce, which is vivid and expressive, showing the author's rich imagination and expressiveness.
It was as if we could really see the very powerful mackerel swimming towards us and tearing people apart.
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