Please help me find a poem to have an appreciation 5

Hehe, my favorite. Liu Yong's autumn is longing.

Jade Butterfly" Looking at the rain and clouds, relying on the quiet, watching the autumn light. The evening scene is sparse, and Song Yu is sad. The water breeze is light, and the apple blossoms are getting old; The moon dew is cold, and the sycamore leaves are yellow.

Where is the deceased? The smoke and water are vast. Unforgettable, the literary drinking party, a few lonely wind and moon, repeatedly changing star frost.

The sea is wide and the mountains are far away, I don't know where is Xiaoxiang? Reading Shuangyan, it is difficult to rely on the message; Refers to the twilight sky and the return of empty knowledge. Looking at each other, in the sound of the broken hong, the sun is setting.

This poem expresses the thoughts of the deceased and the sorrow of the detention caused by the autumn dusk. Set off the sorrow with the autumn scene: take the whole article with "lookout", first write the evening scene sadly, and write the real scene of the old Wuhuang, which naturally transitions to the sense of long-term thought.

The joy of the past highlights the loneliness after parting, and further expresses the deep affection of the people and the melancholy of being unable to get through the news and hope. The last sentence "In the sound of the broken hong, the sun is exhausted" echoes the beginning of the article, full of infinite grievances of the wanderer at the end of the world.

Bu Operator Author]: Li Zhiyi [Dynasty]: Northern Song Dynasty [Genre]: Song Ci.

I live at the head of the Yangtze River, and you live at the end of the Yangtze River.

Every day, I don't see you, and I drink the water of the Yangtze River.

When will this water stop? When has this hatred ended?

I only hope that your heart will be like my heart, and I will live up to my love.

I live in the upper reaches of the Yangtze River, and you live in the lower reaches of the Yangtze River.

I miss you every day and can't see you, but I drink the same river water together.

This river

When will the flow stop?

When will this parting sorrow and hatred end?

I hope that your heart is the same as mine, and you will definitely live up to this lovesickness.

Very detailed references.

Categories: Art >> Poetry and Poetry.

Problem description: When will the partridge go south and return, and the empty nest will only be left in the past. How could the old man go by the wind, and the slight frost on the sideburns was nowhere to be seen. Sigh for a hundred days, read a thousand nights, and have a few thoughts and sorrows. When Yan returned to the side of the rice bridge, the sadness turned into a clear stream.

Wednesday, 13 September 2006.

Analysis: Friends, fill in the words according to the case, not only according to the sentence structure, but also the flat and rhyme. It is recommended that you learn a little bit of knowledge about phonology and rhythm, and slowly fill in the words according to the grid, and you will definitely improve.

Partridge Days.

仄平平 仄平 (rhyme) 平仄仄平平 (rhyme).

Ping Ping Ping Ping (sentence) Ping Ping (rhyme).

Ping (sentence) Ping (rhyme) Ping (rhyme).

Example: Song-Xin abandons disease.

Mo on the soft mulberry buds at the beginning of the bud, the east neighbor silkworm species have given birth to some.

The grass in Pinggang chirps yellow calves, and the cold forest dots the crows in the slanting sun.

The mountain is far and near, the road is horizontally oblique, and there are people who touch Luqing Qigu wine.

The peach and plum in the city are sad about the wind and rain, and the spring is in the creek and the cauliflower.

Look at your work, the words in () are out of rhythm, and "return", "trace", "night" and "stay", "sorrow" and "flow" have different rhymes.

The wild goose finch south (go) to return (time), and the empty nest only has the past (shadow) left.

How could the old man go by the wind, and the slight frost on the sideburns was nowhere to be seen.

Sigh for a hundred days, read a thousand nights, and have a few thoughts and sorrows.

When (Yan) returns to the edge of the bridge, the sadness (affection) (full) (belly) turns (clear) flow.

Slightly changed as intended:

Partridge day When the geese fly south, the autumn is over, and the empty nest is only a trace.

How could the old man ride the wind, and his sideburns were slightly frosty and empty tears.

Sad days and nights, thoughts are difficult to collect, and several thoughts and sorrows.

When you return to the long bridge, you will be full of sorrow and start hugging your head.

This passage describes the scenery in descending order, first writing about the grass, then looking at the whole meadow, and then the small flowers, through which the bees and butterflies fly around, drawing the eye to the higher birds. All the scenery and animals are described with rhetorical techniques, the grass sneaks out, this secretly describes the silent growth of its shy answer very vividly, the weeds are like eyes, like stars, it is a metaphor, and the back of the blink is anthropomorphic, using two rhetorical devices to make people easily think of the weeds dotted everywhere in the grass, and the blinking is also in harmony with the breeze of the last sentence, showing the appearance of the weeds swaying with the breeze. The bees in the third sentence are reminiscent of the scene of children playing, and butterflies flying around are written together with the bees, presenting a happy and harmonious scene.

Birds"Rejoiced, grossed his throat, and sang tunes"They are all anthropomorphic techniques, and they vividly reflect the cheerful chirping of birds. The whole text describes all kinds of things in the environment through artificial rhetorical methods in a cheerful and lively way, which fully reflects the author's mentality when writing is joyful and sunny, and everything is beautiful.

I'm talking about my personal opinion:

The whole poem is written with the word "thought".

There are many words in the word, which can be seen as "lovesick bitter", such as "broken, severe, falling, and dew......From "repetition, regret, and haste", we can see the author's "sweetness of memory" and "the fragrance of ink books in the past."

Drink wine today and wait for the son to return. This sentence is more specific about the author's "thinking".

However, "the water is clear and the moon is shadowy, the blue waves are falling flowers, and the rain is tear-jerking." With "Hate the son in service, I don't know where it is, how can there be a resumption date?" "There seems to be a contradiction in writing.

Let's just say that since it is raining, the water will not be "clear". The word "hate" in "hate" seems to be better to use "resentment", and if the word "he" in "he has a resumption period", it is more appropriate to use "or" if you don't remember it. There is a sense of anticipation.

If you can't understand it, there are a lot of it. What I don't understand the most is that I hope this 'service' can be explained.

I don't really understand the mediocrity of this poem. It's just a little bit of thought that I personally see. Everyone has their own opinions and thoughts, not necessarily the same feelings. Hehe.

It would be nice if someone also wrote a poem for me, this poem is too sad, it has a retro taste, there are too many images and a bit of accumulation, scattered, the artistic conception is still good, a classic of sad poetry.

Words are not acceptable? I think this sentence is pretty good, can you kiss it?

Cut constantly, the reason is still messy, it is sorrowful. Don't just have a general taste in mind. "

Cut constantly, the reason is still messy, it is sorrowful. "Using silk to metaphorize sorrow, novel and chic. For example, Li Shangyin's "spring silkworm to the end of the dead silk, the wax torch turns to ashes and tears begin to dry" ("Untitled") is a well-known sentence.

Li Yu uses "silk" as a metaphor for "sorrow", which has a new meaning. However, the length of the silk can be cut, and the silk mess can be sorted out, but the inextricable "sorrow" is "cut constantly, and the reason is still messy". The sorrow and parting in the heart of the former Southern Tang Dynasty queen is to recall the glory and wealth of "after the red sun has been three feet high, the golden furnace is the first golden beast, and the red brocade lichen is wrinkled with the steps" ("Huanxi Sha"), it is the hometown of the hometown of "Fengge Dragon Tower Lianxiao Han, Yushu Qiongzhi as a smoke" ("Breaking the Array"), and it is the emperor who regrets the loss of "the family and country in the past 40 years, 3,000 miles of rivers and mountains" ("Breaking the Array").

However, time has passed, and now Li Yu is a slave and a prisoner, and his glory and wealth have become a thing of the past, so the national garden is also unbearable, and the emperor is ruined. has experienced the warmth and coldness of the world, the heat and coldness of the world, and the painful torture of the destruction of the country and the death of the family, and these many sorrows and hatreds are choked in the hearts of the poets and are difficult to discharge. The author has tasted the taste of sorrow, and this taste is indescribable and difficult to say.

The last sentence "Don't have a taste in your heart", closely following the previous sentence, writes Li Yu's experience and feelings about sorrow. Taste is a metaphor for sorrow, and taste is not sweet and sour, it is rooted in the depths of people's hearts, and it is a unique and real feeling. The word "don't be" is excellent, the former self-respecting son of heaven has now become a prisoner, humiliated, traversing sorrow, and his heart is full ......of thoughts, suffering, regret, or hatredIt is difficult for the lyricist himself to explain, and ordinary people can't understand it.

If it were an ordinary person, he could cry and confide, but Li Yu couldn't. He is the king of the dead country, even if he is full of sorrow, he can only "go up to the west building alone without a word", looking at the waning moon like a hook, the sycamore in the autumn, and the sorrow, sadness, pain, and remorse in his heart are forced to the bottom of his heart. This kind of silent sorrow is better than weeping.

If you can, please laugh at Naha!

Go listen to Jay Chou's songs, his words are written by Fang Wenshan, very poetic I love you, love you, just like a mouse loves rice. You don't need to parse it, right? Be the gift of your life! "Ate mine.

The water is more flowing when the knife is drawn, and the glass is more worried. "Xuanzhou Xie Guanlou Farewell School Shuyun" This sentence, the language is bold and natural, the rhythm is harmonious and unified, it is the most wonderful sentence in the poem, which profoundly expresses the irreconcilable contradiction between the poet's ideal and reality, and is also a famous sentence that depicts sorrow for thousands of years. I hope to cut off the water freely, but the past days are like flowing water entanglements that can't be shaken off.

Therefore, the poet can only raise a glass to dispel his sorrows, and cannot extricate himself from the growing sorrow. The most apt description of the poet's depression, the intensity of his anger, and the turmoil of his mind at that time.