Please help me revise my clumsy work, please revise it for my clumsy work Thank you!

This benevolent brother Mandala Hua is not a white flower, is it? It seems to be completely different from another plant ......There are ...... recorded in the Compendium of Materia MedicaI went to the library to look up ......

Moreover, Manzhu Sawa is a flower and a leaf that does not meet, not two flowers that do not meet, hehe.

The pair should pay attention to the corresponding words and phrases, but you are still generally right about the pair; There is a problem with the number of words in each sentence of the old style poem, it should be all five words or all seven words, of course, your artistic conception is still good. The specific is limited to mobile phone reply, can not be explained in detail, I hope forgive me....

The last one is beautifully depicted! Very good, top it!

1. General Provisions.

In order to promote the cultural exchanges of domestic DJs and provide them with opportunities and stages to display their talents, the first championship in China was held in 2011, hoping to promote the vigorous development of China's cultural undertakings and strengthen the exchange and innovation of international culture and art.

Second, the purpose. Build a DJ brand, promote cultural exchanges between China and the West, and promote the development of domestic DJ. Discover new Chinese DJ talents and new works, and provide a good creative environment and display stage for Chinese DJ culture.

The meaning of the content remains the same, just help me correct the wrong words Thank you!

The sea of hearts is boundless, and the flowers compete for beauty and empty hearts. Closed doors thank the guests for thinking about their own mistakes, and the sludge is not stained and returns to the mountains and forests. There is no ink pen in the chest, and the dragon and phoenix dance are helpless, and the boat book mountain road is against the current, and it is as cold as a cicada.

Reading "Root Bird" has a feeling.

During the winter vacation, I read Mr. Cao Wenxuan's ** "Root Bird" in one go, and realized the profound meaning in between.

The gist of the story is: A young girl went to the cliff to pick flowers and fell into the canyon. She appears in the dream of a teenager named Root Bird.

The root bird sets off to find his dream. Deserts, grasslands, mountains, villages, canyons, small towns, ......The scenes are like a dream. Growing up between reality and dreams, Root Bird decided to use dreams as a horse to spend his formative years.

Trance, confusion, swaying, sobriety, persistence, indomitable, he tastes all kinds of tastes in pain. Doesn't all this reflect the perseverance of the root bird to never give up? I was deeply touched by the deeds of the root bird and benefited me a lot.

I feel that this spirit of never giving up is not like a tumbler that never falls?

It has taught us that we can't do things halfway. In ancient times, wasn't it precisely because Mengzi's mother encouraged Mencius not to give up halfway in his studies that Mencius's achievements were achieved?

Aren't these all successful people who do things persistently? To sum up: "A person must have perseverance, must have perseverance, everything needs to do his best, and those who give up halfway will never achieve it."

Reading "If You Give Me Three Days of Light" has a feeling.

If You Give Me Three Days of Light" is about Helen. The events of Keller's life. The heartfelt stories in the book always encouraged me not to back down when I encountered difficulties and setbacks.

Helen. Keller lost his hearing, sight, and sweet voice at an early age. She had also given up on her own terms, but she quickly picked herself up.

This American girl, with the help of Teacher Sullivan and with superhuman perseverance, not only learned to speak, but also learned five languages! She has spent a total of eighty-eight springs and autumns in her life, but eighty-seven of them have been spent alone in silence, speechlessness, and lightlessness!

After reading this book, I have a puzzle in my heart: we are only children, and since childhood, our parents have regarded us as the pearl of our palms, and we have opened our mouths and stretched out our hands in our clothes all day long, like a "little emperor". The slightest difficulty, setback, will collapse, and Helen.

The difficulties and setbacks that Keller encountered are unimaginable to ordinary people!

As long as a person has great ambitions and works tirelessly towards the goal, and is not bound by some objective conditions, he will have unlimited power to achieve it!

This can only be seen in the computer store, it seems that there is no need to change it, it is more cost-effective to buy a new one;

Well, I also think that you just haven't found the person you really love, my previous thoughts are similar to yours, I also think, oh my God, will I be the kind of three-minute heat for the opposite sex for the rest of my life, then how many times will I divorce in my life, hehe, but now I meet me A person who I want to really want to be good to him for a lifetime, there is no feeling like before, I wish you to find the person who loves you and you love him as soon as possible Sweet and sweet, happy, happy, happy and happy for a lifetime!

You haven't found the person you really love, and you haven't opened your mind yet, it's good that fate has arrived.

One relies on subjective change, the other relies on objective help, the subjective aspect is to do what you are interested in, and second, you establish a belief that you are not convinced by your cowardly self Objective help First find a close person around you Tell him about his shortcomings and then slowly change himself with his encouragement The premise is that this person has to choose the right one Give some points Poor to death.

Later needs to be modified: starting with the fragments of living together and moving forward.

There are too many simple sentences, it would be better to use more complex sentences, and the article would also add highlights.