The beginning and end of the narrative essay should echo the beginning and end

When the rain dripped on my shoulder, his face came back to my mind at this moment. He is an ordinary and extraordinary person. He is ordinary in the pursuit of a happy life; He is also extraordinary in a different heart:

When he falls, he will stand up without hesitation; When he sees others sad, he will be more uncomfortable than others; When I have low self-esteem, he will be there for me.

He is such a person, a person who always thinks about others. In his dictionary, there has never been a word for retreat.

I wrote it myself, with a lot of light!!

The days slipped away quietly, and we all grew up before we knew it. When I close my eyes and look back, it seems as if it happened yesterday, and it seems to have happened in front of my eyes so much more that when I open it, I can't find the slightest trace. There are more things in childhood than the stars in the sky, and I can't count them.

Some make people happy, some make people their mouths, some make people cry "wow", and some make people. In my mind, there was a silly thing that happened to me that I never forget.

Time flies, and in the blink of an eye, five years have passed. How much bitterness, bitterness and joy, success in five years. All of them have disappeared into the deepest part of their memories.

Everyone has a pair of hands, but everyone's hands are different, the hands of scientists --- hands of wisdom; The hand of the painter --- the hand of Danqing; The doctor's hand --- rejuvenation magic hand ......And I want to have a pair of hands like my mother--- skillful hands.

I remember when I was a child, my mother's dexterous hands were always sewing and mending, sometimes sewing fashionable clothes for me, sometimes sewing a few animal motifs on my torn clothes, just like new.

I remember one late autumn, my mother bought a few balls of yarn, picked up the shiny sweater needle, and knitted a sweater for me. In less than two days, my mother had knitted me a beautiful coat. I put it on happily and stood in front of the dressing mirror and danced and turned.

Not only is the coat woven from a variety of coloured wool, but it also has a panda embroidered on the chest. The next day, when I wore it to school, many of my classmates asked me curiously, "Where did you buy this dress?"

It's beautiful! I proudly said, "This is my mother's weaving."

My classmates all looked at me with envy. From their eyes, how much they wish there was a piece of me. Everyone has a pair of hands, but everyone's hands are different, the hands of scientists --- hands of wisdom; The hand of the painter --- the hand of Danqing; The doctor's hand --- rejuvenation magic hand ......And I want to have a pair of hands like my mother--- skillful hands.

I remember when I was a child, my mother's dexterous hands were always sewing and mending, sometimes sewing fashionable clothes for me, sometimes sewing a few animal motifs on my torn clothes, just like new.

I remember one late autumn, my mother bought a few balls of yarn, picked up the shiny sweater needle, and knitted a sweater for me. In less than two days, my mother had knitted me a beautiful coat. I put it on happily and stood in front of the dressing mirror and danced and turned.

Narrative, first of all, must explain the events clearly and the narrative of the events completely, which requires that the "six elements" (time, place, people, causes, processes and results) must be grasped in writing

Time. Generally speaking, at the beginning of the article, it should be explained. Time can be expressed by a certain year, a certain month, and a certain day, or it can be expressed by natural seasons or festivals, and can also be expressed by scenery and objects.

For example, "the fifth day of March", "the evening of the weekend", "after the rainstorm", "the first day of the new year", "when the lotus blooms", "the moon climbs the treetops", etc., are all explanations of time.

Place. The location should also be explained at the beginning of the article.

Figure. The characters must be explained clearly, because everything is done by people, and characters are one of the main elements that make up the narrative.

Cause. Everything has a cause, and it is the "head" of the whole process of things, and it is indispensable.

Elapse. It is the main body of the narrative essay, the most important element of the "six elements", the main part of the theme of the article, and the focus of pen and ink. Therefore, it is necessary not only to explain clearly, but also to write clearly and completely in detail and concretely.

Outcome. "Results" play an important role in the article, and it is a significant sign to distinguish whether the article is complete or not.

The main thing in the narrative essay is that the writing ideas should be "organized", the transition of the paragraphs should be echoed, the narrative techniques (sequence, flashback, interludes) should be flexible, the context of events should be clear, the lyricism and arguments can be rendered, and it is not advisable to "dominate the crowd".

The beginning and end are based on the content of your proposition.

The role of argumentation: It is used at the beginning of the article to lead the whole text, point out the center, and lead to the following, and can make the theme of the article be clearly expressed, and at the same time can make the article well-organized and clear. It is to reveal the truth and meaning of the things that are described.

It is used at the end of the article to improve the understanding of the object being narrated, deepen the theme of the article, point out and deepen the meaning of the object being narrated, and play the role of the finishing touch. Such as "One Step, One More Step".Some arguments are used at the end of the essay to match the beginning of the essay and make the essay more rigorous.

It is used in the middle of the article to play the role of connecting the previous and the next, so that things are closely connected with each other, and the structure of the article appears rigorous. In short, arguments are generally used at the beginning of a narrative essay to solve the problem of why the narrative is being written; It is used in the middle to play a cohesive role and strengthen the contextual connection; It is used at the end of the article to shrink the whole text, deepen the center, and add the finishing touch.

The role of lyricism:

It refers to the author's expression of his thoughts and feelings in his work. There are two main ways of lyricism: one is direct lyricism and the other is indirect lyricism. Its role is to highlight the character characteristics of the characters, deepen the central idea of the article, and enhance the appeal of the article.

The lyricism in the narrative is both direct lyrical and indirect. Direct lyricism is to directly express one's thoughts and feelings about things on the basis of narrative. Indirect lyricism includes lyricism through scenes, placing affection on people, things, and things, and naturally penetrating the author's feelings between the lines of the narration.

When reading, pay attention to the influence of infection and beauty.

On the whole, the arguments and lyricism in the narrative have the functions of highlighting the theme of the text, putting the finishing touch, deepening the theme, sublimating the theme, and revealing the meaning of the events recorded.