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You wrote: After I was separated from Runtu, I always remembered him in my heart, and I always wanted to go to the beach to find him. [The nostalgia for the leap soil is written later, about a natural paragraph].
Later, when I grew up, I wanted to go to [so-and-so] country to study, I was reluctant to go to my hometown, and I was reluctant to let him send me, but this matter was known to my father, and my father asked busy with the moon to bring the leap soil over, I saw the leap soil at the [what] site, he was still like that, with a purple round face, witty and brave temperament, but he didn't have the silver collar around his neck [here is written appearance, expression] Runtu looked at my departing back, and tears couldn't help but shed on his purple cheeks [farewell scene plus some language description] I am also silently sad in my heart, I have just reunited with Runtu, and now I am leaving.
This is the scene where I returned to China after studying abroad for three years [the book does not say that the young master "I" is Lu Xun, so "I" is not Lu Xun, not necessarily according to Lu Xun] I looked hard at the site--- dash explained] My eyes searched for the leap earth, and I hoped that he would pick me up. [Later, it depends on whether you want to let the leap soil appear, the appearance is to describe the scene at that time, the haggard appearance of the leap soil, and then you sympathize with the suffering people, hate the old society, and start writing articles, [If it doesn't appear at that time, you will go to find the leap soil yourself, and the back will be the same as just now].
I'm just writing the main body, you can expand a little bit, I'm working hard.
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This is the intercalary earth. Although I knew it was leap earth at first sight, it was not the leap earth I remembered. He doubled in stature; The round face, which had been purple, had turned grayish-yellow, and had been deeply wrinkled; His eyes were like his father's, and they were swollen and red, and I knew that those who farmed by the sea were probably like this when the sea breeze blew all day long.
On his head was a tattered felt hat, and only a very thin cotton coat on his body, and he was covered in tears; He carried a paper bag and a long pipe, and it was not the red round hand I remembered, but it was thick, clumsy, and cracked, like pine bark.
I was excited, but I didn't know what to say, I just said:
Pander to! Brother Runtu,—— are you here? ......
Then I had a lot of words that wanted to pour out like beads: horned chickens, jumping fish, shells, and ,......But I always feel like I'm being blocked by something, and I just swirl in my head and can't spit out.
He stood still, a look of joy and desolation on his face; His lips moved, but he didn't make a sound. His attitude finally became respectful, and he exclaimed clearly
Master! ......I seemed to have a shudder; I knew that there was a sadly thick barrier between us. I'm speechless either.
He turned around and said, "Shuisheng, kowtow to the master." Then he dragged out the child who was hiding behind him, this is exactly a leap earth twenty years ago, but he is yellow and thin, and there is no silver ring around his neck. "This is the fifth child, who has never seen the world and is dodgy ......”
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Runtu has become a poor peasant of Mune. If you want to see the details, go and check out "Three or Five Buckets Overcharged", which has a detailed description of the leap soil. As for Lu Xun himself, you can refer to Xia Yu in "Medicine" and the protagonist of "Diary of a Madman".
You'd better write it yourself. If I need to write it badly, at least 100 points. Because I'm so tired.
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When I say goodbye to Runtu, he is already a vagabond.
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