Please give some advice from the poetry masters, and help with the poetry class

The three rhymes should be in tune.

Placing affection on the scene, the first 2 sentences are bold, and the last 2 sentences are a little small, but they contrast with the name of the Buddha's top, which is just right.

Cangfeng is both ten thousand and has repetition. 2 sentences Seeing Yujing from afar, is it the imagination in my heart? Or the actual scene, if it is, slightly inappropriate.

Climb to the top of the Five Buddha Mountain Spires.

Cangfeng Qitian touched his shoulders and saw Yujing Towers in the distance.

Hongchen may not be sad, and the clouds can be full of hearts.

En, yes, the vast mountain peaks are towering into the clouds, straight into the clouds, looking at the buildings in the distance, there is a sense of floating clouds and looking at the eyes, nostalgic for the red dust, but lamenting the insignificance of life, only feel that they are like a drop in the ocean, the body of an ant, but they are also leisurely, happy. How to say it, the general meaning is good, but there are places that need to be revised and modified, and the wording needs to be pondered again, and it would be best to add some more scenery words, I think.

The first sentence is in the same rhyming style, the word "connection" should be in a different tone, and the first two words of the third sentence should be in a certain tone, so as to stick to the second sentence. The rest of the rhyme in the format is no problem, in the artistic conception of the scene lyrical, the second sentence I have not heard of the twelfth floor of Yujing, so I don't know what the meaning of writing this scene, and I don't comment on it, the third sentence is slightly insufficient, this sentence should be connected to the next, but the inheritance is somewhat lacking in momentum, the last sentence is a wonderful pen, and the lyrics are in line with the topic.

1. D is low.

2, a This little word describes the scene of a beautiful woman dressing up hairpins 3, d Han Le Fu.

4, No 5, Yes.

6, b Yan Shu.

7. A "Word Synthesis".

8. D language.

9 is 10, yes.

11. B Extravagant faction.

12D Beauty.

13d "Words of Bai Yu Zhai".

14 No 15, No.

If you are not sure, please bring it up if there is a mistake.

Four quasi-ancient songs, the third of which is the lotus picking song (Wu Jun of the Northern and Southern Dynasties).

The brocade is mixed with flowers, and Luo Yi hangs down the green river. Ask where the son is going now, and go out to pick Jiangnan lotus.

Three thousand miles in western Liaoning, there is no cause to send it. May you return as soon as possible, and this lotus is fresh.

Lin Xia its fourth (Qing Sun Yuanxiang).

The golden years are like water, and the red spider sends the magpie to patrol the eaves. The spring marks are like a double skirt, and the autumn shadow is clear and the moon is a curtain.

Spell lamp flower Jia Bu, regular script bay leaf small name sign. The place where the heart is entrusted to eliminate the soul is only on the tips of the eyebrows and fingertips.

The Bodhisattva is very slow (Song Luo Zhiren).

Xiaoying urged. Ask who you are cooking for. After saying goodbye, the screen covered Wu Mountain, and the building Yan Yuehan was cold, and the sideburns were cloudy.

There is no basis for the brocade word, pay the silver candle, and burn a thousand papers. For Han Hong Jingbi, he washed away the Hong and hate.

Now you don't have to stick to the ancients, but for the rhyme, the sense of language, the artistic conception or to pay attention to, I personally think the landlord wrote is still good, but for some words, it feels jerky, it may be the landlord made it, so that the sense of reading, rhythm and rhythm have an impact, but also affect the artistic conception and the theme of the will.