A beautiful essay should have a central idea and writing characteristics

Compare everywhere: 1. Compare the magnanimity of the rich children with the author's own poverty.

2. The comparison between the superior learning conditions of the students and the inferior learning conditions of the authors themselves.

3. The contrast between the teacher's severity and his own humility.

4. Comparison of the author's learning attitude and learning conditions.

The role is to draw conclusions from the stool in contrast, clear and convincing. It can highlight the preciousness of hard work, perseverance and pious study under the conditions of poor life.

"Sending Dongyang Horse to Life" is a gift preface created by the Ming Dynasty writer Song Lian. In this preface, the author recounts his experience of humbly seeking advice and diligent study in his early years, vividly and concretely describes the difficulty of borrowing books to seek teachers, the hardships of hunger and cold, and compares it with the superior conditions of Tai students, which strongly illustrates whether he can achieve academic achievements.

The main thing is to focus on subjective strength, not the level of talent and the quality of conditions, so as to encourage young people to cherish a good study environment and concentrate on studying. The structure of the whole text is rigorous, detailed and subtle, with contrasts and reasoning, interspersed with details in the narrative, and it is vivid and touching to read.

1. Subheadings (fine and ingenious layout).

The author organizes the material by the qualities and deeds of the characters, and organizes the material under subheadings. Features: clear and clear, focused; The sentences are delicate and neatly structured; The content is profound and the form is flexible.

2. Narrative-based, interspersed with description, discussion, and explanation.

A variety of flexible expressions. For example, when explaining how Yuan Longping discovered the truth, he used flashback techniques to trace the process of Yuan Longping's scientific practice (it was one day in July 1961 - a challenge): discovering special rice (joy) caring for special rice (full of hope) trying to grow special rice (disappointed) analyzing and researching (self-confidence) discovering the truth (harvesting).

1. Vivid image. Not only is the language of description figurative, but the language of narration and argumentation is also figurative. The visualization of narrative language and argumentative language makes the essay vivid and appealing.

2. Concise and subtle. The word "say" is very ordinary, but the author gives it a variety of meanings. The "say" in Wen Yiduo's self-description quoted at the beginning means to announce to others what he wants to do or confess what he has done; This kind of expression that flexibly gives different meanings to the same word in combination with a certain linguistic environment is intriguing.

3. Be emotional. The narrative and description of this article are lyrical, making it difficult to distinguish which ones are narrative and which ones are lyrical. It doesn't feel ordinary. Because the author has the strong feelings of Sun Eggplant, he can turn ordinary sentences into unusual.

4. Rich in beauty. The author is good at using idioms or imitation idiom structures, and these pairs of sentences are some of contrast, some are juxtaposed, and some are more neat and dual. These sentences are catchy, sonorous, and beautiful.

5. Use the form of couplets, some of these paired sentences have the nature of contrast, some are juxtaposed, and some are dualistic sentences with more neat macros.