Please comment on how these two poems are written, thank you

First of all, the landlord's 2 poems are very well written. I have a classmate in college who also loves to write modern poetry. Because of my high school composition, he was fond of ancient style.

Some people don't like modern poetry. That's because what they see, sometimes, is not so beautiful, but vulgar, and they get tired of reading it. At that time, my classmates wrote something that I never got tired of reading.

I don't think it's poetic and don't talk about it. Just read it and never get tired of it. In this regard, first of all, I am worthy of myself.

The landlord's head. After reading it, I don't get bored. Of course, the realm is only a little limited. But at least your mind will move after reading it. I still like it.

In the language of poetry. I think (in my opinion) maybe it could be more concise?

Because the landlord is a little backward when answering the overall poetic conception.

After reading it, I feel that the center of gravity is in the back. But it's not an epiphany. But the landlord has a lot of effort in language connection. Because reading without annoying is already difficult in itself.

I love you", what a cheesy three words.

But unless you've heard it, unless you've said it, you can't know how much helplessness is contained in these three words? How much bitterness and bitterness? How much sweetness? How much pain?

What a long, painful journey you have to go through before you can say these three words.

After saying these three words, you must accept that the unknowable future, is it sweet? Is it more painful? Is it helplessness? Or is it more poignant?

Thousands of years ago, many people said these three words.

A thousand years from now, there will still be many people who say these three words.

Whether you are speaking or listening, you can only understand the helplessness of these three words by experiencing it yourself.

She saw him.

He felt the movement of her body, and knew she was awake, and he hung his head

So he saw her, too.

The feeling of this glimpse is that all the lyricists and writers have tried their best to chant it through the ages, but they have not been able to chant it.

For there is no language or word in the world that can describe the subtlety of this glimpse.

This is a casual example. This is certainly not poetry. But in it, there is a taste of poetry.

I think it's simple, flavorful, and refreshing. It's a good pace. The above is the so-called:

Analysis". It's nondescript, and it's good that the landlord can have some understanding. What do you want in life?

When you have a dream, just dare to chase it. Over time, even if the gains are compared with the hopes, the gains are slightly less. But there are no regrets.

Hehe. I believe that the landlord will have no regrets if he goes down.

The language of the poem. I think it's kind of sweet.

1. This poem expresses the revolutionary pride of the revolutionaries who "have a long tassel in their hands" and must "bind the dragon". It's an exhilarating read;

2. The original poem is presented:

Qingpingle Liupan Mountain".

The sky is high and the clouds are light, and the geese flying in the south are broken.

If you don't get to the Great Wall, you are not a hero, and you can only travel 20,000 yuan.

On the peak of Liupan Mountain, the red flag swept the west wind.

Today, the long tassel is in hand, when will the dragon be bound?

3. Appreciation: MZD led the Workers' and Peasants' Red Army to climb the main peak of Liupan Mountain, facing the high sky and white clouds in the west, the clear autumn air, and then gazing at the geese flying south, expressing the feelings in his chest, and looking at the new campaign that is about to start with leisure and joy.

This poem is written in a neat and clear manner, and it is clear. The upper and lower halves are both.

One or two sentences write the scene, and three or four sentences are written. The scenes are intertwined and integrated. .The whole poem is full of the pride of the victory of the revolution, and the tone is high-pitched and majestic.

Mulan poems Mulan poems.

Chirp and chirp, Mulan is a household weaving.

I didn't hear the sound of the machine, but I heard the woman sigh.

Wei Wentong: Only) ask the woman what she thinks, ask the woman what she remembers.

Women don't think about anything, and women don't remember.

Last night, I saw the military post, the Khan ordered a large number of soldiers, and the military book was twelve volumes, and the scrolls had the name of the master.

Grandpa has no eldest son, Mulan has no eldest brother, and he is willing to be a saddle horse for the city, and from now on he will fight for his grandfather.

The east market buys horses, the west market buys saddle sheaths, the south market buys bridles, and the north market buys long whips.

When I leave my grandmother and go, I stay by the Yellow River at dusk, and I don't hear the voice of my grandmother calling a girl, but I hear the splashing of the Yellow River.

As soon as he left the Yellow River, he went to the head of the Black Mountain at dusk, and he didn't hear the voice of his grandmother calling the girl, but he heard the chirping of Yanshan Hu Qi.

Thousands of miles to the plane, Guan Shan is like flying.

Shuoqi spreads the golden watch, and the cold light shines on the iron coat.

The general died in a hundred battles, and the strong man returned in ten years.

When I returned to see the Son of Heaven, the Son of Heaven sat in the Ming Hall.

Twelve turns, rewards hundreds of strong.

Khan asked what he wanted, Mulan didn't need Shang Shulang, he was willing to gallop thousands of miles and send his son back to his hometown.

A work: I am willing to borrow a thousand miles of camels) The grandmother heard that the girl came, and Guo Xiang helped the general;

When my sister heard that her sister came, she took care of her red makeup;

When the younger brother heard that his sister was coming, he sharpened his knife and went to the pigs and sheep.

Open the door of my east pavilion, sit on my bed in the west pavilion, take off my wartime robe, and put on my old clothes.

When the window is cloudy sideburns, the mirror appliqué yellow.

went out to see the fire companion, and the fire companion was busy: I have been with me for 12 years, but I don't know that Mulan is a girl.

Sticker: Post;

Panic One work: panic;

Panic companion: Guy) male rabbit feet fluttering, female rabbit eyes blurred;

Twin rabbits walk on the ground, can Ann tell that I am male and female?

A rose. In summer, the roses compete for beautiful makeup, and the light red thick stacks are charming in the morning sun.

There is a lot of faith in the lying branches, but there is a courtyard of roses and incense.

2. Go out and return late.

Pink willow green reflects the sun, leather head.

Xinyan Shuangfei looks for the painting beam.

Take advantage of the spring to leave half of it, and return to the late love year.

3. Loch Ness Tour.

The deep ravines are slim, and the thousand-year-old majesty reflects the waves.

It is known that the lake monster is a legend, and the lake monster is hard to forget.

Fourth, the summer is full of joy.

The sun is sunny and the summer is clear, and the cicadas are noisy and sleepless.

If you know that the people are suffering in the summer, you will be relieved of the suffering.

5. Remembrance. In the past, the village and countryside were ploughing, and the future was bumpy and the road was difficult.

Today, I walk leisurely on the flat road, but I remember a love in the village.

6. Feelings. In the past, the south acres of industry were cultivated, and the scholars were only injured.

Today, the East Building is idle, and he is willing to sing the waves.

7. Hometown. People smoke three or two of them, and the begonia trees and rice flowers are pitiful.

Today's scenery is not the past, and the old Nanshan guards the tea fields.