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This essay is written on a total score. The first paragraph always writes about the feelings and views on growth, and uses three pairs of antonyms throughout the whole text. In the second paragraph, I write about the rising stars on the road to growth, my mother and teacher, expressing my gratitude to them.

The third paragraph briefly describes my growth experience, expressing the author's yearning and pursuit for the future.

The article is straight to the point, fresh and open-minded.

PS: I'm a shallow one.

Not bad, not bad, worthy of encouragement.

That's good! It's just that I think I can write a little longer!

I guess you are a junior high school student, remember not to write this kind of infantile essay in high school, think of some materials that must impress the teacher, this kind of material is too indiscriminate. It is recommended that the ending be a little lyrical, more metaphorical and more arranged.

Add one paragraph 1.

You now put paragraph 1 in paragraph 2.

Paragraph 1 would have been preferably concise.

The ranking ratio in the back is okay.

But there is one thing written later.

You can be specific.

The summary is strong

The first paragraph uses a lot of pen and ink to explain what the path of growth is like, the sentences are neat, and the sentence structure is very concise. But it lacks literary color, and if some rhetorical devices are used, the expression effect may be better.

The second paragraph uses rhetorical methods such as analogy and metaphor to perfectly integrate the mother's love for herself and her mother's help for her growth into the article. But for some remote topics, you can write a little bit about it to express the author's meaning. And add declarative statements to express your inner feelings.

After the article, write the teacher and classmates in two sentences, and the detailed arrangement is more appropriate.

The third paragraph highlights the center of "stumbling on the road to growth" with a small thing. It is better written than the first two paragraphs, and it can be called the finishing touch of the whole text.

Nevertheless, I hope that the author's article will win an award. Don't be discouraged even if you can't, as you said the road to growth is not smooth.

The sun is only beautiful after the storm. Life is the same, only after going through the wind and rain will you understand: what is the real life.

ps:369water

You have to ask something, or I'm going to fix it.

Who wrote this? What is your name? How old is it?

In the years when I was in primary school, I learned a lot of knowledge and my thinking has improved greatly compared to before, and I hope that in the future, I can do well, have a career, educated people, and do my best to build a socialist China.

Of course, I am also deeply aware of my own shortcomings, learning is very hard, enthusiasm sometimes only does things for three minutes, I think to solve these problems, I can do better.

My students consciously abide by the code, actively participate in various activities, respect teachers, students in harmony with nature, concern and love for collective helpfulness, willingness to work hard, conscious exercise often participate in various courses of organization-based organizations, activities both inside and outside the school.

I have a cheerful personality, love life, and have strong hands-on and organizational skills.

After studying, after leaving school, I cherished every opportunity to exercise, get along with different people, get in close contact with society, experience life, and appreciate the ups and downs of life.

Away, I have a brief summary of the six years of study and life in primary school. First of all, let me understand the role of rote memorization in primary school learning, but entertainment, love life, my learning progress is not fast, but I know that learning is a lifelong struggle, I love learning life in primary school. Second, I have developed a good habit of independent thinking.

I know that there is a long way to go in the future, I want to think independently about the pain and happiness of life, the philosophy of life, I have learned a lot of teachers are not exaggerated, just from the heart of feelings, have the courage to face mistakes, I am young, but I want to think independently about my future, my own destiny, go my own way, let others say it. Finally, I would like to thank my parents, who gave me a bigger perspective on learning and life, and I knew that it took my stamina and perseverance to finish primary school and later learn the sea, and the elders gave me this belief, to believe in myself, that I can speak, that I can do this, and that I can live in my primary school life for a long time.

1.This article uses specific examples, vivid and beautiful language, and novel and unique writing to express sincere praise for the beautiful soul.

2.Pious praise, deep mourning, word by word, sentence by sentence, pouring out joys and sorrows, measuring gains and losses, the little author tailors the classroom with the language of a poet and the vision of a philosopher. The whole article is like a sculpture full of artistic courage, broad and heavy, strong and robust, simple and natural, reflecting the author's superb language control ability, thick mind and keen aura.

Exquisite language, rigorous structure, deep speculation, and broad insight are all pleasing to the eye.