Want a 500 word essay, preferably with reviews?

Is it an elementary school student or a junior high school student or a high school student?

Be a moral person.

Tao is your perception on the road of life; Virtue is a precious quality that you have in the world; Morality is the fine tradition of our great Chinese nation! Be a moral person.

In the vast world, the sea of people is surging, and we exist together. But maybe it will occur to you at that moment that there are different people in different parts of the world. Some live in villas by the sea; Some live in cumbersome city mansions; And some live in ordinary rural areas; Even living in the deserted mountains.

No matter how different all this is, no matter how high or low, we must be moral people together. Morality, narrowing the distance between people, morality, so that we are no longer worlds apart.

Not all celebrities with great achievements value fame and fortune, in the 5,000-year cultural history there are many celebrities whose noble qualities have been passed down to this day, in our eyes they are not only celebrities, but also respected great people!

In that chaotic and dark era, there has always been a moral force, and this power comes from the beloved Mr. Lu Xun. Mr. Lu Xun has done countless good deeds, the most impressive is that once a coachman was injured and his shoes were worn out, it was Mr. Lu Xun who went home to get gauze and medicine to carefully bandage him, and first showed love. When he came home, his brow furrowed.

Because he's worried about people......Without affectionate language to describe, nor with complex situations to reflect, Mr. Lu Xun is upright in our hearts, and integrity is the foundation of morality. Heng Mei coldly pointed at Qianfu, bowing his head and being willing to be a son of a cow. This famous sentence from the mouth of Mr. Lu Xun has always been engraved in our hearts.

Lei Feng is a great comrade who helps others without leaving a name, and he is always helping people. Once, when he saw a thick pole about to fall towards a man, he did not hesitate to help him block it. It was on this day that Comrade Lei Feng left us.

Morality is not something that only great people can do, it is not out of reach, but it is close at hand, and we can do it. On the bus, it is moral for one to get up and give up his seat; Seeing trash picked up is moral; Helping an old grandmother cross the street is a moral ......

As long as you really want and do it, morality will be shown in you! A moral person is a "man with a capital letter"! Let's be a moral person together!

Well, it's okay overall, the first paragraph goes straight to the topic below, and the last sentence of the second paragraph is very well written and vivid.

The third paragraph compares this scene to a landscape.

The rhetorical question in the fourth paragraph could also be changed to "but, but they could not find a reason for them not to make a sound".

Five or six paragraphs are fine, I think the seventh paragraph should emphasize the word "no", "The heavy word of my father resounded in my heart, my eyes were a little blurred, and I quietly lay on the window, and I couldn't help but look at the scene at this moment: a father who is over half a hundred years old is about to give his dignity for his daughter!"

The last paragraph could be changed to a paraphrase:

This day, that moment. Maybe I'll never forget that moment! Because this day contains my father's love, my neighbor's understanding and concern, and my careful interpretation of the term "love"!

Also, add some descriptions of the father's demeanor as appropriate.

The rest is okay (of course, just personal opinion).