I want to ask if the Wizard s Journey is good looking, and how to evaluate the novel The Wizard s Jo

At the beginning, he borrowed the idea of "Wizarding World" from rolling away, and borrowed the idea of infinite flow in the later stage.

The text drags on, and there are still some brain holes, but the description is boring. A large number of boring descriptions of the background, really fighting, a few tricks can be done, and the big fight scenes are basically not described.

The upgrade is slow, there is no cool point, I have been doing an experiment for hundreds of years, I don't upgrade whether I live or die, I can't drag it out, and then I don't know why I accidentally upgraded. The place that should be cool is not happy, and he always deliberately describes that Green is an ordinary person, who relies on hard work to get promoted, not luck, but in fact, he is promoted by luck.

It advertises that wizarding civilization attaches great importance to knowledge, but there is nothing to say, and it does not explain what the knowledge of wizarding civilization is? The success of an experiment for hundreds of years depends on luck, not systematic knowledge. flaunts knowledge, but in fact, no one knows what knowledge is in the wizarding civilization described in the book.

So-and-so wizard has many NBs, but why is it so NB, in fact, no wizard knows. The author himself doesn't know what the so-called knowledge system of wizarding civilization is, it's just a blind writing, and then he still thinks how strict the wizarding system is.

When I wrote a book for the first time in the early stage, I didn't write well and didn't have enough knowledge. In the later period, it fell into the dead cycle of civilization war, which was the same, making people drowsy to watch.

The author is also very self-conscious, thinking that he is writing a masterpiece.

Chicken ribs, eat without meat, discard taste.

All in all, this is a book that you can read a few times as a pastime when you are fine, and you will also find some of the brain holes in it quite interesting, but you can put it at any time, and you will never think about chasing it every day.

Dark National Art Online Game Three Kings Dominate the Wilderness.

Lei Shu, the protagonist is so mad that there is no bottom, countless times to describe the little girl cute or something, and there is no threat to the protagonist, and then he was killed by the protagonist, many times, many times, this author is simply worse than a dog to write these disgusting people.

For this kind of thunder book, I went to search for the content behind it.,Sure enough, garbage is garbage.,Dead heroine.,Hehe。。。

The sense of substitution is too bad In the dozens of chapters I read alone, there are three descriptions of the little girl's cuteness and kindness And then she was killed Nima is simply a disgusting person** Author: This is more than You can't make money, it's inevitable that you're not hot, it's not that you don't work hard enough.

To be honest, if you're in contact with the wizard class for the first time**,You can barely take a look.,If not, don't read it.,The author's imagination is limited.,The whole book is dry and not interesting.,It's recommended to go and see the wizarding world that rolls away.,It's also the originator of this kind of book.。

The advantages are as follows: 1. The imagination, creativity, pattern, and setting of this book are infinite;

2. The background and the main tone of the excitement are very clear, and the overall direction of the story is also very clear"A sense of purpose"；

3. The description of the characteristics of the entire race of wizards is also flesh and blood, showing the vastness and colorfulness of the endless world;

4. The perspective is macroscopic, and I think from a certain height;

5. The content setting is rich and complete.

The disadvantages are as follows: 1. The author's skills are very limited;

2. The rhythm of the story is average;

3. The description of friendship and relatives is not delicate and real enough.

The advantages are as follows: 1. The imagination, creativity, pattern, and setting of this book are infinite;

2. The background and main tone are explained very clearly, and the overall direction of the story is also very clear"A sense of purpose"；

3. The description of the characteristics of the whole Zen and boring race of wizards is also flesh and blood, and the vast and colorful Hehan of the endless world is perfectly displayed;

4. The perspective is macroscopic, and I think from a certain height;

5. The content setting is rich and complete.

The disadvantages are as follows: 1. The author's skills are very limited;

2. The rhythm of the story is average;

3. The emotional description is not delicate and real enough.

To be honest, the front of this book is really good, very inspirational, tells the story of a little boy who accidentally became a wizard, and worked hard because of it, but the back is really making up words, okay, two people can write ten lines in a dialogue, this is really irresponsible, hehe, the most hateful thing is that the author's logic is very good, but you don't want to be so good, so many "proper nouns" invented by you are difficult to understand, do you understand?

The author's thinking is very clear, because the author will think carefully and analyze, but most of these useless proper nouns will actually affect the reader's thinking, because under normal circumstances, no reader will take notes for a small white text**, so this idea is actually very confusing to read, if you see a thousand chapters, do you remember that there is a collection of pearls or what and then change to what spring water to enhance the ability of the one?

That's a particularly confusing idea.,It's been swapping between reality and fantasy.,It's very confusing.,And the writing is really 666.,Elementary school level ..........Overall: Writing Idea Clarity of Thought Overall Evaluation The above are not my personal opinions, just for reference, trolls just go away, thank you.

Give me endless knowledge, and I will use myself as a fulcrum to pry the endless world. The story tells the story of a wizard named Grimm, who relies on his wits and luck to learn his own unique wizarding knowledge, travel to foreign worlds, and participate in wars between different civilizations. I've always wanted to write a rational work with a very different style from wizards.,The so-called rationality can be understood as pseudoscience.,So there will be a lot of witchcraft reasoning and pseudo-scientific experiments.。