The Butterfly Effect in Youth helped revise the story

Hello, classmate.

I was a little dazed after reading your text. Don't understand what kind of central idea you want to express?

Your topic is very literary, but it is different from the topic of the article.

Butterfly effect: refers to a dynamic system, small changes in the initial conditions can cause a long-term and huge chain reaction of the whole system. It's a chaotic phenomenon.

This effect shows that the result of the development of things is extremely sensitive to the initial conditions, and the slightest deviation of the initial conditions will cause great differences in the results.

Example: The most common description of this effect is: "A butterfly flapping its wings in Brazil can cause a tornado in Texas a month later." ”

The above is the definition of the butterfly effect, which mainly means that a small detail is amplified by the development of events, and finally leads to an amazing outcome. It's kind of like a "snowball", the more it rolls, the bigger it gets.

And the main line of your story is to fall in love, which triggers two major one-line reactions: affecting friendship and affecting family affection. It's not a chain reaction.

Explain with a simple diagram:

Your story is: A leads to B, A leads to C ...

The butterfly effect is: A leads to B, B leads to C, C leads to D... Among them, A is not reflected in your story, and the above is the first problem with your story.

The second problem is that your central idea is not clear.

If I had to summarize it, it would be to express that the root cause of unsatisfactory college life is that I talked about a girl that my friend liked in college. This is a very negative theme, which directly reflects the harm of falling in love in college, and can even ruin the entire college life. This affects the reader's fear of falling in love in college.

With such a topic, it is already very euphemistic for the teacher to say that it is "not enough to see". The most important thing in writing is to have a good theme, and when you can't grasp the tragic drama, it is best to choose a positive and optimistic theme, which is easier to control.

The third problem is: love, family affection, and friendship are all emotions that people need, and they are all equal.

The conclusion of the last paragraph is very bad. Do you think none of this would happen without knowing that friend?

The logical relationship is not rigorous.

1. If you don't know that friend, you will know other friends, and similar things will happen. People are born without the ability to predict, so such a conclusion is not practical, and the conclusion that cannot be used as a later life experience is meaningless.

2. If you don't know such a friend, you will still be in love, and falling in love will lead to family affection, which has nothing to do with that friend.

On the whole, your story is not literary, philosophical, or empirical, and even less logical. Readability is low.

I suggest you re-imagine!

Some words may be too heavy, I hope you don't mind, you can ask**, satisfied!

The butterfly effect refers to a dynamic system in which small changes in initial conditions can lead to a long-term huge chain reaction of the entire system. It's a chaotic phenomenon. A butterfly flapping its wings in the tropics can cause a hurricane in a faraway country.

A butterfly flapping its wings on this side of the Atlantic, a hurricane in the Pacific Ocean, and the world is interconnected and influential

The movie tells the story of Ivan (played by Ashton Couch) who experienced a series of bad things as a child, which damaged his otherwise perfect life. Tormented by terrible memories of his childhood, Ivan enlists the help of a psychiatrist, who encourages him to write down what happened in detail, but things get worse and worse.