Can anyone help me write an essay on visiting the temple fair, preferably with a little more punctua

Today is the fifth day of the Lunar New Year, and my father and I went to the Ditan Temple Fair to play. Although there was a strong wind, there were still many people carving the altar of the earth, and this strong wind could not resist the enthusiasm of the people at all.

There are all kinds of entertainment items in the temple fair, selling snacks, selling all kinds of handmade products, etc., which is really dazzling. I walked around the altar of the earth, and when I looked at my watch, wow, it was 10 o'clock, and the ground sacrifice ceremony was about to begin, so I immediately took my dad and walked there with me. The honor guard was the first to walk in, followed by the Jinyi Guard, and then, the emperor and ** both walked in.

The sacrificial performance is carried out in strict accordance with the worship procedures of Emperor Qianlong, and is divided into nine parts, including welcoming the gods, laying jade silks, entering the figurine, first offering, sub-offering, final offering, withdrawing food, and sending the gods. The ceremony was solemn and solemn.

After reading the sacrifice ground, we went to the snack street together, there are all kinds of rich snacks, fried liver, belly, skewers, etc., drooling when I see it, I quickly shouted at my dad to buy it for me, my dad is also generous, I want to eat what I buy for me, so I bought a lot, I am so happy to eat!

We walked and walked to the main street, which had all sorts of stuff in it. All kinds of handicrafts, daily necessities ......I fell in love with a hat, that kind of cowboy hat, brown, handsome to look at. I bought one. It's quite chic to wear a hat.

The most interesting thing is to play, all kinds of amusement projects, so interesting. I like basketball more, so I played shooting first. Maybe it's because the basket is too high, and one of the five misses, which is unlucky.

Then we played the ring again, so the harvest was not bad, 5 traps won 1 small police car, and those who didn't hit me was still very lucky. Then we played a game of football, as long as you kicked more than 3 cans there will be prizes, the first time I accidentally kicked crookedly, one missed, but I was not discouraged, insisted on kicking the second time, and finally I kicked all 6 cans down, won a grand prize, so happy!

There were more and more people at the fair, and my father and I decided that we were going home, or we would have to be squeezed to death. I had a great time this day, and I hope this happiness will last forever.

We walked over and took a look, and felt that this year's Ditan Temple Fair was different from other temple fairs. Temple fairs like Red Mansion, Longtan, and Changdian are all stalls that sell food, but the temple fairs in Ditan sell everything. There are rings, guns, souvenirs, flowers and other stalls, and I recently heard that a Xishuangbanna Butterfly Ecological Park was opened in the Ditan Temple Fair.

I played with a gun and shot four balloons, and they gave me a little grimace mask. After I also (deleted) cracked the gossip array, people rewarded me with a pony's key chain, and the hard work paid off, and we finally walked to the Xishuangbanna Butterfly Ecological Park in the crowd.

We bought a ticket and when we went in it it was still crowded. Although there are many people, but there are also many butterflies, in the greenhouse, we can see butterflies everywhere, lying on the leaves, lying on the wall of the greenhouse, lying on the flowers, and lying in the artificial nest, very cute. Butterflies come in several colors such as green, yellow, purple, black, white, etc.

Seeing such a beautiful butterfly dancing in the air, I couldn't help but pick up the camera and prepare to take a picture, but when I just picked it up and was about to aim, I saw a blur, and as soon as I wiped it down, it was a pity!

With a happy heart, we left the Temple Fair.

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