Please help me revise the prose poems I wrote

I think it's already very good, after all, this is your wedding, and only what you write yourself is the most in line with the mood you want to express, and if other people are in different circumstances, what you write will be different.

Do you know? The most touching thing is not how beautiful the mood is or the flowery rhetoric.

It's an expression of sincerity and sincerity.

Only in the moment of looking back" was changed to "only in the moment of looking back with low eyebrows".

Already like an old friend, not like a living person" was changed to "like an old friend, not like a living person".

but it is like a spring breeze and a clear spring" was changed to "but it is like a spring breeze and like a clear spring".

It's very well written, I only changed a few words, it should be more gentle.

You have to be happy.

First of all, bless me!

It feels light and comfortable. Some of these details are only known to him, and only he is most moved.

Be brave enough to read it! It's too late for others to envy in their hearts, how can they laugh at you.

This poem stems from your inner happiness and contentment, and it is a poem that is completely your own. Others are not qualified to change!

Upstairs is a master!

It's very well written, the text is not important, the important thing is your feelings for him, the writing is really good, he will be very moved, bless you.

In the twilight. The birds were gone.

on dirt roads. Only the little shadow of the shepherd boy and the old cow was left tired.

In the shadows came a piccolo without a rhythm.

Sound. Slowly.

They disappeared in my eyes.

It's like my book slipping silently.

I think. Should I go with it?

Look into the distance. I could see the mountains.

I could see the sea of clouds.

But there was no way home.

Write it yourself, I hope it will be useful to you.

South of Beijing Agricultural Exhibition Center.

Number. Poetry Exploration:

North West Third Ring Road, Beijing.

Number. Chinese Poets:

Middle Huaihai Road, Shanghai.

Do. Number. Kyushu Poetry:

Yingze Street, Taiyuan City, Shanxi Province.

Number. Selected Poems:

Huaibei Road, Shijiazhuang City, Hebei Province.

Number. Poetry Tide: Sanjing Street, Heping District, Shenyang City, Liaoning Province.

Number. Shilin: Tiandi Street, Daoli District, Harbin City, Heilongjiang Province.

Number. Huaifeng Poetry Magazine:

East Street, Huaiyuan County, Anhui Province. Yellow River Poetry Newspaper:

Jinan City, Shandong Province, Jingliu Road.

Number. Huaxia Poetic Sales:

Wenming Road, Guangzhou City, Guangdong Province.

Number. Prose poems:

East side of Yiyang City Stadium in Hunan Province. Nanguo Poetry Newspaper:

Municipal Road, Nanning City, Guangxi.

Number. Star Poetry Magazine:

Section 2, Hongxing Road, Chengdu, Sichuan Province.

Number. Green Wind Poetry:

Ai Qing Poetry Museum, North 2nd Road, Shihezi City, Xinjiang.

Vineyard: Yingtao Road, Yingge Town, Taipei County, Taiwan.

Lane. Do. Mr. Taike on the fourth floor.

Can you tell us about your age and the content of the article?

If you want to pay to see it, the first recommendation is Feilu (most of which you don't pay for are hard to see outside).

If you want to get off to a fast start, it is recommended that you go to the starting point of the Vertical and Horizontal.

If you want to write whatever you want, Jinjiang 17k or some general **** is fine.

When you write about the audit and sign the contract, you will naturally be paid (don't care too much about the remuneration at first, if you write it, you will naturally be popular, and you will naturally be rewarded).

Specifically, according to the process operation instructions of **, you can do it.

Good luck in addition to poetry-related publications.

And every year, there are a lot of calls for poetry themes, and it's expected that there are dozens or hundreds.

Go to the "Call for Submissions Club" ** to see if it may be able to help you.

Guidelines for Submission of Teaching Articles: "China Education News", "China Teacher Daily", "People's Education", "Fujian Education", "Jiangxi Education", "Shanghai Education", "Education and Research", "Primary and Secondary School Management", "Beijing Education", "Modern Education News", "Shaanxi Education", "Shanxi Education", "Jiangsu Education", "Teaching and Management", "Zhejiang Education", "Hebei Education", "Heilongjiang Education", "Sichuan Education", "Liaoning Education", "Mathematics Bulletin", "Language World".

One is to find the ** about prose on the Internet, such as under the banyan tree, etc., and contact how to submit it. The other is to find the local Federation of Literary and Art Circles or the Writers' Association to contact how to submit the essay.

I really don't know, do you sit down as a video, or record a segment, put it on the Internet, youtube or ** channel, for everyone, listen. Or go to a piano shop or something.

Stories, magazines.

Anything goes.

It's good to try more.

Make it to the plug.

Wang Wei wants to ask the side, and the subject country lives in the extended.

Zheng Peng out of Hanse, return to the wild goose into Hu Tian.