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In fact, many people are like this, and you are not a special case. Maybe you are a person with a strict personality, don't be afraid, you can usually pay attention to cultivating some liveliness and self-confidence in your personality. You can tell yourself that others aren't perfect every problem either.

Teachers don't punish a student for being imperfect or incorrect.

Haha, that's easy to do. Write to your parents, ask your teachers, write to your teachers, ask your parents, write to yourself, copy composition books. Don't like to speak?

No student dares to speak at first, but if you take your time, you can find something that interests you to do first, and you will definitely become bold. Wrong? Haha, the teacher won't blame you, even if it's ridiculously wrong, your classmates laugh at you, that's a good kid who doesn't have the quality and no one despises the enthusiastic speech.

Composition, to practice more, the first day, write a word, can write the topic? The next day,,, the way to write an essay on an improvised basis, you can think of it yourself, oh, I can't hold back the words, I have made up the number of words.

Does the child have a voice at home? Are you free to speak your mind? If the child is afraid to say something wrong, this habit should also be manifested at home, so it is important for parents to express their opinions to their children.

Encourage children, to believe in themselves, even if they are wrong, it's nothing, if you have concerns, you can find your own hands that you know, as long as there is one time, you will know, in fact, the problem is far less terrible than imagined, many psychological problems, we think too much, so cause our psychological burden. Parents can also communicate with the teacher, explain the child's problems, and let the teacher give him more opportunities, and he will get better slowly.

Yes. But don't write too badly. ok

How many words? I'm afraid I won't have time for too many words.

If you don't write well, if you are already in the second year of junior high school, this essay is not written at the level of the second year of junior high school. It's not like the upstairs said that you have to write a narrative or discuss ** or something, this kind of prose is also very good, but the words are mediocre, there are many sick sentences, and there are no bright spots.

For example: 1. When I was a child, I was just able to babble sentences. Changed to when I babble.

2. I felt too tired from studying at that time. Instead, I just felt that I was too tired to study.

Another example: So I dream of becoming a professor, teaching and educating people, cultivating talents for the country, and doing my best for the construction of the country. In order to realize my dream, now I must redouble my efforts to study hard and be admitted to an ideal university.

This sentence is simply a failure, vulgar and unbearable, why don't you write about working hard to realize the four modernizations of the motherland and being the master of the 21st century, these are the words written 15 years ago, and you will not score points if you use them now.

The third paragraph is the central paragraph, you have to write it delicately, you write too roughly. For example, when I was a child, I dreamed of being a teacher, whenever the white chalk Kainu waved, it wrote not only knowledge, it conveyed not only preaching and teaching, it depicted a cup of hope, it left a good story, it let us in the era of knowledge, forever in the heart of that waving moment, the teacher showed us confidence and nobility.

The last paragraph is not good, so let's try to make a comparison.

I just expressed my opinion, I am a cram school teacher who teaches composition, I hope it can help you a little.

Yes, I'm a high school Chinese teacher.

The last paragraph still has to be changed, well, it can be written that 12-year-old me is constantly growing, dancing in the wind and rain, although the previous childishness has not been eliminated, but I have an extraordinary dream, 12 years old is a glorious period, I am still growing, constantly pursuing my dreams, that 12-year-old - different me.

It should be Little Red Riding Hood and the Big Bad Wolf, and it's best to write went tobed when you go to bed

The idea and structure of this essay are still good, first of all, it is written about the beauty of nature, and then the destruction of human beings, expressing the author's appeal for the protection of nature, but the fly in the ointment is that the ending is a bit hasty, describing the destruction of nature by human beings is too short, not too indignant, not enough to resonate, it is best to use a sentence to count the crimes of human beings, and the last sentence of the article must be strong! Don't ask for thanks, just for adoption...

Very well written. It shows the characteristics of nature from multiple angles, and at the end, it calls on people to protect nature, which sublimates the theme. The structure is rigorous and the sentences are coherent.