Modify the sentence language, modify the sentence how to modify

The types of sick sentences include improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete or redundant components, confused structure, unclear meaning, illogical, ambiguous, mixed sentence structure, improper classification, and example sentences as follows

1. China's cotton production cannot be self-sufficient for a long time.

Modification: The position of the definite and the central language is reversed, and it should be: The cotton produced in China cannot be self-sufficient for a long time.

2. The vast number of rural youths have shown incomparable enthusiasm for socialism.

Correction: The adjective "incomparable" is misplaced in the position of the adverbial and causes a sick sentence, and the "incomparable" should be placed before "enthusiasm".

3. In the cause of socialist construction, the broad masses of intellectuals should play a full role.

Modification: The adverbial "sufficient" is misplaced in the position of the definite sentence and should be placed before the word "play".

4. If we don't work hard to do a good job in our own domestic affairs, then it will be difficult for us to have a say in the international community.

Modification: The negative adverb of the "no" sentence should precede the word "put".

5. If you don't check the farming work as soon as possible, you will not be able to hoe well in front of you.

Amendment: "No" should be moved before the word "take advantage of".

6. Not only do he study hard, but also help other students.

Amendment: "he" should be moved before the word "not only".

7. Pavlov, a famous Soviet physiologist, was busy doing animal conditioning tests all day long, tying animals to the test shelves with ropes.

Modification: The phrase "put" should be next to the verb "bind".

8. In the early morning, the students participating in the long-distance run galloped quickly on the highway.

Modified: "Students" can not be changed to "gallop", but "run".

9. The torrent of feelings is rolling, and the blood is whistling.

Modification: "Hot blood" can only "boil", not "whistling".

Changed: In the activity class, the teacher asked Xiaoli to sing the song "We love you, China" solo, (although) although Xiaoli's voice was a little hoarse, she sang very seriously. At this time, some people discussed it softly, but Xiaoli didn't (care) and continued to sing.

After singing the song, the teacher (the first) applauded, and we applauded, and the room burst into warm applause.

Analysis: There are four errors in the original sentence.

1. The "because" in the original sentence is not properly matched, so it is changed to "although".

2. The word "discussion" in the original sentence is inappropriate, and it is changed to "discussion".

3. The word "attention" in the original sentence is inappropriate, and it is changed to "care".

4. In the original sentence, "first" and "first" are repeated with this, so the first should be removed.

In the activity class, the teacher asked Xiaoli to sing the song "We Love You, China" solo. Because *** Although, the match is not appropriate) Xiaoli's voice is a little hoarse, but she sings very seriously. At this time, some people discussed softly (changed to discussion, inappropriate words), but Xiaoli did not pay attention at all (changed to care, inappropriate words) and continued to sing.

At the end of the song, the teacher was the first to applaud (remove the word 'first' or 'first', repeat the word), and the classroom burst into applause.

In the activity class, the teacher asked Xiaoli to sing the song "We love you, China" solo, although Xiaoli's voice was a little hoarse, but she sang very seriously. At this time, some people discussed softly, but Xiaoli didn't care and continued to sing. After singing the song, the teacher (the first) applauded, and we applauded, and the room burst into warm applause.

Dear teachers. Dear student 1:

I accidentally lost a wallet2 on campus yesterday evening with a bank card in it. One ID card for each one. RMB a number of yuan3. If you find one, please contact me4 and I will give you a reward5.

Zhang Shan 6, August 6, 2010 7

Missing Items: Teachers. Dear student 1:

I accidentally lost a wallet2 on campus yesterday evening with a bank card in it. One ID card for each one. RMB a number of yuan3.

August 6, 2010.

1. The "Finding Notice" should be centered.

I accidentally lost a wallet on campus yesterday evening. (Let's talk about the time and then the place) 5. The returner will be rewarded!

6. The characters and time should be written in the lower right corner of the text.

Missing Thing Notice. 1. Teachers and students, 2. I accidentally lost a wallet in the school yesterday evening, 3. There are several yuan in it, an ID card, a bank card, and a copy each.

4. If you find it, please.

If you can contact me, 5. You can give a reward!

Zhang Shan. August 6, 2010.

To modify a sentence, there are several ways to do it:1Change word or word order:

You can try changing certain words in a sentence, or adjusting the word order to make the sentence more accurate or expressive. 2.Change sentence structure:

Restructure sentences to make them more concise or grammatical. 3.Add or delete parts:

Some things can be added or removed from a sentence to make the sentence more complete or concise. 4.Rephrase the meaning:

Sometimes, some sentences may be ambiguous or imprecise enough, and you can try to rephrase the meaning to make it clearer. When revising sentences, you need to take care to keep the original meaning unchanged and follow the grammar rules to make them more accurate and clear. You can practice more to improve your language skills.

You should write a manuscript for our "Young Forest Literature Society" for the upcoming school celebration [soon]! There is no restriction on genres, poetry and prose sketches are acceptable. Please also encourage your classmates to submit more papers in the class. You see, [about to repeat and right away].

More than a dozen students in our class [including me] have submitted their manuscripts. You can directly hand over the manuscript written by Li Yanchang to me, [even me should be placed at the beginning of the sentence].

I'll give you [Dial Dial]. Please note that the deadline for submission is the end of this month. [The date is a specific time, which should be said to be at the end of the month, or remove the date and replace it with something else].

It should be right! Hope! Thanks pull!

You should write a manuscript for our "Young Forest Literature Club" for the upcoming school anniversary! The subject matter is not limited, poetry and prose sketches are acceptable. Please also encourage your classmates to submit more papers in the class.

You see, more than a dozen students in our class have already submitted their manuscripts. You can just give me the manuscript you have written, and I'll give you a little bit of it. ④：

Please note that the deadline for the submission of the letter is due at the end of the month.

Problem: The words are repeated, i.e. the words Pitcha will and immediately are repeated. : Even me shouldn't be there. : No mistakes! : The words are reversed.

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You should write a manuscript for our "Young Forest Literature Society" for the school celebration that is about to arrive in Zaoma Town! There is no restriction on genres, poetry and prose sketches are acceptable. Please also ask your classmates to submit more articles in the class. You see.

You should write a manuscript for our "Young Forest Literature Society" for the upcoming school celebration of Sanhighal! There is no restriction on genres, poetry, prose, and sketches. Please also encourage your classmates to submit more papers in the class.

More than 10 students in our class have submitted their manuscripts. You can just give me the manuscript that has been written and blinded.

Analysis: This narrative paragraph uses the overall structure of the total score. Three examples of Beethoven, Sima Qian, and Li Ning are cited to prove the argument.

The problem is the lack of analytical language between examples and arguments. So how do you talk about it? Reading the passage, we find that "the results of the tribulation of the three people" have already told us, and there is no mention of the cause, so we can add the analysis text of "reason**" to better bridge the gap between the case and the conclusion, and achieve the purpose of "narrative" serving "discussion".

Causal analysis": It is an analytical method that grasps the facts stated in the argument and deduces the cause of the formation from it.

Method: Directly state the reason].

Modification: Sometimes tribulations can just experience life and shine. Beethoven was deaf in both ears, but he was able to create an immortal symphony in the face of such an ordeal, and it was because he did not succumb to the pressure of fate, and stubbornly resisted doom, that he composed the song of the human heart; Sima Qian was tortured by corruption, but he was able to write "Historical Records" in such a humiliation, and it was because he had a firm belief like a mountain, a will as strong as iron, and insisted on his ambition in the midst of slander and ridicule, so that he broke through and became a "historical saint"; After Li Ning, the prince of gymnastics, shed tears in Seoul and withdrew from the sports world, he opened up his own business and made Li Ning brand series of sporting goods popular in China's sporting goods market, because he knew how to bear failure and not be intimidated by failure, so as to open up a new path in failure.

Tribulation is both a curse and a blessing. For the strong-willed, it's just a curtain of wind and rain on the road of life, as long as you walk bravely through it, there is another blue sky ahead.

A large number of green plants will be planted on the roof of the theme pavilion, which will not only provide shade and cool down, but can also be seen from the foot of the mountain, and is expected to become a symbol of the World Horticultural Exhibition.

At the "June 1st" celebration meeting, the list of outstanding Young Pioneers was read out, and Liu Hua's advanced deeds were especially carried forward (changed to "praise"). After hearing the news, the students congratulated him (changed to "congratulations"), Liu Hua was very excited (delete "extreme"), and he expressed his (delete "mysterious") determination: in the future, we must make persistent efforts (should be changed to "make persistent efforts"), study hard, and strive to climb the peak of science.

Lingnan architecture is known for its concise, simple, transparent, and elegant style.

Lingnan architecture is very distinctive in terms of ventilation, heat insulation, trapping, windproof, rainproof, moisture-proof and so on.

Lingnan architecture is unique among the forests of Chinese architecture.

The tree was full of large, red apples.

Sentence with indirect quote instead:

1) The father said, "Yes." This is my hope for your disbelievers. ”

The father said, yes, that's what he wants for them (the children).

2) Cortana said to Xiao Gang: "I'm going to check the wheel after finishing my homework, and then I'll go out with you." ”

Cortana told Gang that she was going to finish her homework before going out with him.

You should know that the blind man is also disabled, and he must be in pain.

The "isn't it" in the original sentence is a rhetorical question, which is actually known, and emphasizes that one should know.

If it's not a family, shouldn't you be eager to help? --It's not a family, but you should be eager to help. (This original sentence omitted should be "shouldn't you be enthusiastic about helping", isn't it a rhetorical question, in fact, it should be).

How can you do it at such an age? - You are so old, it is impossible to do it.

How to ......Yes, is a typical rhetorical question, equivalent to "no").

1. Beautiful and beautiful should delete one, the meaning is repeated!

2. Some flowers. Flowers in both places should be deleted and repeated!

3. Change one by one.

4. Choose one next to each other and in clusters.

5. A young beauty-loving little girl, adjust the order.

6. The comma behind the little girl.

7. Raise up and add them.

8. After hugging together, it is changed to a full stop.

A No, you can't change the meaning of the sentence casually You see, flowers are like a group of young girls who love beauty. Some flowers are draped in fiery red scarves and smeared with heavy makeup; Some flowers are dressed in white dresses, one by one, with beautiful faces raised, and some flowers are like a group of young girls who love beauty smiling to welcome the arrival of spring.

Flowers are like a group of young girls who love beauty, with heavy makeup and glamorous makeup, and some flowers are draped in fiery red scarves; Some flowers are dressed in white dresses, and you can see them clustering next to each other, raising their beautiful and beautiful faces, smiling at the arrival of spring.

I think it should be changed like this:

You see, the flowers are like a group of young girls who love beauty. Some flowers are draped in fiery red scarves and smeared with heavy makeup; Some of the flowers were dressed in white dresses. They huddled together, raised their beautiful faces, and smiled at the arrival of spring.

First, there are two repetitions in this sentence: "next to each other, clustered", "beautiful, beautiful", and the meaning of the two is repeated in the mountains.

Second, it can be found in "...White skirt" followed by (. Then add (they) to "one by one" to be the subject of the subsequent personification sentence.

B is good, it should be right, the original sentence is to pay attention to the repetition of flowers.

Change a You see, some of them are dressed in fiery red scarves and wear heavy makeup; Some of them put on white dresses, huddled together one by one, raised their beautiful and beautiful faces, like a group of young girls who love beauty, smiling to welcome the arrival of spring.

b You see, the flowers are like a group of young girls who love beauty, some of them are dressed in fiery red scarves, and they are covered with heavy makeup; Some put on white skirts, huddled together one by one, raised their beautiful and beautiful faces, and smiled at the arrival of spring.

The meaning of this sentence is that "flowers are like a group of young girls who love beauty" is a general description, and the two situations "have" show two characteristics respectively, so it is not a big problem to say first and then separately. But it is necessary to break the sentence and list the total and sub-statement.

Therefore your change should be like this:

You see, some of the flowers are draped in fiery red scarves and are covered with heavy makeup; Some flowers put on white dresses and hugged each other, (they) raised their beautiful and beautiful faces, like a group of beautiful little girls smiling to welcome the arrival of spring.

Your change b should be like this:

You see, the flowers are like a group of little girls who love beauty, some of them are dressed in fiery red scarves and wear heavy makeup; Some put on white dresses, huddled together, raised beautiful and beautiful faces, and smiled to welcome the arrival of spring.

All need last year's repeated part of the "young" "next to each other". Otherwise repeat.