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Your teacher should not be a monk, otherwise he would not have a common family name. If it is Jiangxi Baofeng Temple, it is a thousand-year-old temple! Although I'm not a master, but your first two poems, the rhyme is quite noteworthy, but some of the words are weird First, the word Linggong is too mysterious, followed by wax lamp red, what do you say is wax lamp red, it is clearly the land of green lights and yellow rolls, where there will be the excuse of this wine order?

Second, if your teacher is not a monk, why is there a moonlit monk shadow at the end? And they are all shadowed by the moon, and the clouds are hazy? The meaning is incoherent Thirdly, bowing and piety are different attitudes, can you put Kong Ming and Hong together?

Fourth, the layering of the poem is still okay. However, the artistic conception embodied in the content may not be far-reaching enough. As for the couplet, I don't know your social identity, so I don't make any comments.

Generally, the couplets of ancient temples are full of fame, and there is no need to add anything. You and your teacher have the same religious beliefs, so let's change your meaning below!

The peach and plum outside the mountain are verdant, but the heart is towards Baofeng.

Once the dust of Fanyu sounded, only to see the green lantern accompanied by the twilight bell. "

The latter one was changed to five words, okay?

The glow of the gilded roof, the dome is sincere.

All words are blue, and the heads are endless. "

Baofeng visited Lan Gong at night. Look up and see the red candle shadow of the Spirit Palace.

Fanyu is majestic and hears the dusk drum. The moon of the Qinghui monk's house is hazy.

At dusk, go to the temple to pay homage to Lan Gong. Bow with your palms together. The ancient temple is surrounded by the front hall of the Sanskrit sound. The teacher recited silently and lived forever.

The couplet is not badly written. The second link was changed to: Blessed land promotes the present and carries forward the ancient merits.

FYI.

The gentle breeze blows Juanmei's hair charming, toasting with a three-legged tin pot, the beauty blushing out is so delicate, how I want to spend this life with the beauty, love Juanmei's heart is like the sea of waves and can't be calm, you want a piece of priceless jasper to be as beautiful as Shih Tzu. . .

Tibetan poem: Xu Xijuan, I love you.

I send my sorrow and the bright moon, and follow you until the night is long.

Don't worry about the road ahead, no one in the world knows you.

Persuade the gentleman to have a glass of wine, and there is no one in Yangguan in the west.

Luoyang relatives and friends asked each other, and a piece of ice was in the jade pot.

The sky moves flowers to welcome the moon, and the people in the deep courtyard return to the moon with flowers.

Although it is hard to find thousands of sands, the sand is blown to the gold.

The spring grass will be green next year, and the king and grandson will not return.

The husband is all over the world, and he is still next to each other for thousands of miles.

There is a confidant in the sea, and the end of the world is like a neighbor.

There is no distance between each other, and thousands of miles are still neighbors.

Young people enjoy new knowledge, and they miss old friends in the twilight.

Friends are often met with literature, and only virtue is a neighbor.

Thousands of sails passed by the side of the sinking boat, and ten thousand trees were spring in front of the sick tree.

The snow pressure bamboo head is low, and the low wants to stick to the mud, and a round of red days is still with the sky.

1. Although it is hard to find thousands of waters, the sand has been blown away and the gold has arrived.

2, Xiongguan Mandao is really like iron, and now it is stepping forward from the beginning.

Hagangneung Li Bai.

Between the white emperor and the clouds, thousands of miles of Jiangling will be returned in one day. The apes on both sides of the strait could not stop crying, and the light boat had already crossed the ten thousand mountains.

There is no way out of the mountains and rivers, and the willows and flowers are bright and another village!

This poem can express the meaning of your two questions! It's all used!

Dapeng rises with the wind one day and soars to 90,000 miles!

There is no way out of the mountains and rivers, and the willows and flowers are bright and another village!

There will be times when the wind and waves will be long, and the clouds will sail into the sea.

There is no way out of the mountains and rivers, and the willows and flowers are bright and another village!

Riding the wind and waves will sometimes hang straight on the clouds and sail into the sea, which is more atmospheric.

The mountains and rivers are poor and there is no way out, and the willows and flowers are bright and spring.

The green poplar smoke is light and cold, and the red apricot branches are in spring.

Thousands of rivers and thousands of rivers flow eastward.

Dream back to my hometown and cry.

Not seeing Chang'an makes people worried.

But the soul goes to the heart and stays for a long time.

The water of those great rivers is rolling to the east, but the wanderers who have left their hometowns in the west can only shed tears and worry in their dreams, and the absence of Chang'an makes people sad, but even if the soul is far away, the heart flows for a long time.

The yellow flowers are empty and thin, the people are still the same, thousands of mountains and rivers, and the willow branches of the hometown are unforgettable;

Go away and stay, scatter a thousand sorrows, and finally get tired of the birds and return to the forest, how can you get it, don't see Chang'an to make people sad, but see Chang'an, people are still the same.

Huanghua has quietly lost weight like that, but there is no change in people, walking through thousands of rivers and mountains, but always feeling that the willow branches of their hometown are particularly exciting; Just stop and go, the original pleasant trip ended with a thousand sorrows, and finally returned to his hometown, but he didn't know that he didn't see Chang'an to make people sad, and when he saw Chang'an, people's hearts were still the same.

Lyric poetry is a discipline of peace.

Even limerick poems need to rhyme, the ancients wrote poems according to the rhyme of flat water, and today people have made up new rhymes, but few people use them.

First of all, your sentence "not seeing Chang'an makes people sad" Pingqian corresponds to "Pingpingpingpingpingping 'Sorrow' is based on the next flat eleven especially.

From the ordinary point of view, the word 'make' has rhymed, but it doesn't hurt to learn it for beginners.

Because the end word 'sorrow' is a flat sound, it can only be placed in the first.

I. Second or fourth sentence.

Semantically, the first sentence is not very appropriate, and it is better to put the end of the last sentence.

Poetry creation is very rare for today's people, since they like to use poetry to express their feelings, why not learn more?

Otherwise, piling up words will only destroy the beauty of the poem and go off topic

I have a song here, inspired by watching the movie. In the painting, there is a dream of reincarnation, and the remnants are separated by two vast walls. The peony peony is beautiful, and the son is so ruined!

When life and death part, the flowers on the other side are also melancholy. In the middle of the night, the lonely dream is gone, and the heavens and the earth will meet.

Heaven and earth, it is very difficult to meet.

Why is the love so deep, you must turn against you.

Not seeing Chang'an makes people worried!

Do you know that a piece of true love is hard to find!