Please help me revise an essay! Thank you

Updated on educate 2024-02-19
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  1. Anonymous users2024-02-06

    Some ideas can be added, such as:

    1.Build more, Art Museums and Music Performance CenterIt can improve the quality of people's lives. More exposure to different cultures.

    2. because the whole word is growing at an incredible speed.If you build these, in the same situation, the former (your point of view) can reflect the overall appearance of a country and a city, and the cultural literacy, because if a city is rich, it will have.

    You can go to your third point of view culture and go through these two in 1 or 2 sentences.

    The article is smooth and quite good. Found a situation where there is a fastening template...

    Also, such a one-sided article is not easy to write... Big Bull" just wrote...

    It is recommended to write both aspects when practicing.。。

  2. Anonymous users2024-02-05

    (It turns out that I'm also ordinary) Don't want it.

    When I was younger, I always thought I could save the whole world, but then I realized that the whole world couldn't save me!

    Recently, I've been hooked on hip-hop dancing and have seen the amazing performances of the masters, "Wow! Awesome wow! It's so easy to do!

    I thought I could do the same, just like watching "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" and feeling that I would also descend the dragon and eighteen palms! So, I started hip-hop dance!

    At first, I loved hip-hop to the point of madness! Get up early every day to practice, practice at noon, and practice at night, anyway, as soon as I have time, I practice Thomas, big loops and other "big moves", I can't eat hot tofu in a hurry, and finally I realized, just executed it as planned for two days, and then hung it up!

    But I haven't given up yet, I always feel like I can do it. However, it did bring me time and time to fall, and each time it was very painful. For a novice without any foundation, these "ultimates" are simply more difficult than climbing to the sky.

    That's when I realized that I wasn't superhuman, just an ordinary member. I'm really like an egg, it wants to fly, but no one can do anything about it, because it hasn't hatched yet! (That's when I realized how small I was) Plus.

    I really don't know how those hip-hop masters practice, and I'm afraid I can't even imagine what they have done! I secretly swore in my heart that I must become a superman and write an extraordinary life with my ordinary self. )

    I'm like a duck who wants to fly but can't. I know I'm a dandelion that's not ripe yet, but sooner or later it's going to have to fly away) Plus.

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