Little Zoo Narrative, Little Zoo 5th Grade Narrative

I believe everyone is familiar with composition, especially the most basic and common narrative in writing, the six elements of narrative are: time, place, people, events (passing), causes, results, etc. How should this type of essay be written?

My house is actually a miniature zoo with cute little animals, gentle herbivores, and ferocious carnivores, so let's take a look!

Dominant in my house are herbivores, Mom. My mother is like a gallant horse. You see her hair, curly and long, like a horse's mane.

Her limbs were as strong and powerful as a horse's four legs. Her voice was loud, and when she taught me, it was like a horse neighing. She is also very industrious, and she has never been tired when working at home.

Washing clothes, washing dishes, mopping the floor, she did it all. Just like a horse, he works hard. I still remember the last time I cleaned the glass with my mother, I was tired for a while, but my mother was still there to wipe hard, until she finished wiping all the glass in the house, and she was willing to insist like a horse.

Mom doesn't like meat, only vegetables and grains, which is especially like a horse! I love moms like horses!

Daddy is a typical carnivore, a tiger. Although he doesn't look like a tiger, when he goes berserk, he does. I remember one time when I was afraid of the cold and didn't want to go swimming, he dragged me directly into the room, locked the door, and at that time he was angry and roared in a low voice, as if he was going to eat me, it was terrible.

Dad loves meat, just like a tiger. I remember one time, my mother made a dish with a lot of meat in it, and my mother and I only ate the vegetables, but my father just gobbled up all the meat. He was also very nosy, and when he was doing homework, eating, and before going to bed, he would take care of me, like a tiger trying to rule the whole forest.

But my mother said that my father was actually a paper tiger, and he could be kicked away by a horse, hahaha......

I was just a lively little rabbit who was bouncing around the house all day, and one moment I would jump into the kitchen and ask my mom what I was eating today. After a while, I jumped into the bedroom and asked my dad if he could take me out to play. Jump into the study for a while and see if there are any good books.

My favorite thing is to jump into the wild and explore nature with my mom and dad. I love vegetables and turnips, I don't like meat, isn't it the same as rabbits?

Speaking of which, let me tell you a secret, the three animals above are actually the respective genera of our family of three, which is very vivid, right?

My favorite is the zoo, it is a part of Jiufeng Mountain, Jiufeng Mountain Zoo is built in the recess between the five peaks and the six peaks, covering an area of 6,000 square meters, there are many rare birds and animals in the Jiufeng Mountain Zoo, there are belonging to the national first-class protected animals: South China tiger, Yangtze crocodile; There are also national second-class protected animals: clouded leopard, python, black bear, macaque, turtle, sika deer, chameleon; There are also those imported from abroad:

African lions, ostriches, macaws.

Walking into the gate of Jiufeng Mountain Zoo, the first thing you see is the Peacock Garden, in the sun, a group of beautiful green peacocks stroll in the park, several male peacocks proudly display their gorgeous coats, beautiful feathers shining golden in the sun. There are also a few peacocks in the shade of the trees, and some fly up to the branches to soak up the warmth of the sun.

Coming out of the peacock garden, I walked up a slope and saw a wide carp pond in front of me. Colorful little carp swim freely in the clear water, and we can often see carp jumping over the dragon gate!

After seeing the little carp, turn left is the beast garden, which houses a fierce South China tiger and an African lion, the king of beasts trapped in the garden has long lost its former majesty, but from their occasional roar, I still feel their kingly demeanor.

Leave the beast park, and then walk up a few layers of the mountain is the monkey mountain, dozens of monkeys jumping around, some are swinging, some are climbing the mountain, some are catching lice from each other, the monkey king squats on the top of the rockery, looking down at its monkey monkey grandson, looking very angry.

Further up the slope, you will reach the ostrich park and the sika deer park, and the largest bird in the world, the ostrich, is so tall that I wonder how spectacular it would be if the ostrich could fly.