Help analyze this essay and help me analyze the essay topic

The story of bees and flowers provided in the title tells the truth: in the face of life, we should not think about problems with stubbornness. Bees think that the flowers that have had nectar will always get nectar on the pair of flowers, just like waiting for a rabbit.

But we can't just because we have a rabbit and stay under the tree every day waiting for one after another. So when the bees suck the poisonous juice, they blindly complain about others and the world. As everyone knows, in fact, as long as it flies higher and gives up this flower, it can gain a new world by itself, and it can find the second and third flowers in its life.

If you're writing prose, the title can be "Fly a little higher", "Two worlds", "Looking for the second flower in your life".

If you're writing a narrative, you can use the title "The bee at the bottom of the well" or "The low-flying bee".

This ** is a specific story about this fable, you can take a look, it will help a lot! o(∩_o

Four bridge crossers.

There is a treacherous canyon with rushing water at the bottom, and the so-called bridge is a few bare iron cables running between the cliffs.

A group of four people came to the bridge, a blind man, a deaf man, and two normal people who were deaf and clear. One by one, the four men grabbed the rope and marched through the air.

The result? The blind and deaf crossed the bridge, one of the deaf and sighted crossed the bridge, and the other fell into the abyss and died.

Is it not as good as a blind and deaf person who is deaf and deaf?

Yes! His weakness stems precisely from his deafness and insight.

The blind man said, "I can't see with my eyes, and I don't know the dangers of mountains and bridges, so I climb calmly." ”

The deaf man said, "I can't hear with my ears, I can't hear the roar under my feet, and my fear is much less." ”

The deaf and clear-eyed man who crossed the bridge said, "I cross my bridge, what does the dangerous peak have to do with me?" What does the rapids have to do with me? Just pay attention to the stable footing. ”

Oh, yes! Having a normal, calm mindset is the key to success. No matter how sinister the surrounding environment is, don't be intimidated, analyze it calmly, actively explore, and then take it one step at a time.

Don't be afraid, don't retreat, keep going firmly, I believe that we will be able to go through difficulties, move towards success, and go to glory.

I don't know in what capacity you evaluate this article, the teacher evaluates the students? Bu Zaikai or is he a student in the evaluation?

Although this article has many flaws, and the theme is a little cliché, it is okay as a student essay. The idea of the whole article is nothing more than to praise family affection through the careful care and warm care of my mother who was hospitalized in an accident, even if it is ordinary, it is a great human emotional experience, mainly in the form of narration, interspersed with descriptions, and a little discussion on the tail.

Let me help you analyze the second topic: "The Beautiful Flowers in My Heart".

Step 1. Review the topic.

As far as the title is concerned, it is a phrase with a partial structure, and the center of the modification is "flower", "flower" is a metaphorical statement, a metaphor for a beautiful thing, a story or an idea, a person of high character, and this thing or this person's actions deeply move me, move me, inspire me, make me ripple in my heart, and feel the existence of beauty.

Step 2. Conception.

Whether it is writing about things or writing about people, the foothold should be positive and positive, not only to move oneself, but also to move others with positive social significance, so that only when writing can there be depth and breadth.

Step 3. Selection.

According to the above requirements, choose typical, representative materials, if it is written about people, around this person to choose two to three things to write, one thing seems too thin, but the selection of several things can not be even, there are details and omitted, so that through a few things to show the character more plump, more prominent character.

Step 4. Plotting.

Lay out the plot and organize the materials. Consider how to begin, whether it is a narrative or a flashback. I think it's best to use flashbacks.

Bixing's technique is a foreshadowing, and as soon as the pen turns to the topic, "One thing has moved me for a long time, like a beautiful flower blooming in my heart, smelling her fragrance, stirring my heart--- naturally turning to the next paragraph of the description of things or characters."

There should be three or two paragraphs in the middle part, not too few, pay attention to the details, and pay attention to the topic. At the end, pay attention to the correspondence and point to the topic.

That's all, there is too much knowledge about writing and it will be difficult to explain for a while, practice more until it becomes natural, I wish you progress!

Empathy, change of thinking, the focus is indeed on the maybe.