An essay is about 410 words, and it is reduced to 380 words.

Set off fireworks. It's another night of saying goodbye to the old and welcoming the new. Night is falling, and the moon is rising.

The earth was shrouded in darkness, and a few small stars jumped out of the dark sky, like naughty children, blinking their eyes in a flash, and were greedily ** the lively scene of people's family reunion. Today is Chinese New Year's Eve, and every household is lit up with lights. In the streets and alleys, the sound of firecrackers.

Today is the thirtieth day of the Chinese New Year's Eve, and the lively atmosphere of the Spring Festival is everywhere, and every household is jubilant. In the evening, I had a Chinese New Year's Eve dinner, and the whole family was together for the ** Spring Festival Gala. Just as I was fascinated by it, "crackling", a burst of firecrackers came into my ears.

The clock was about to ring at 12 o'clock, and the sound of firecrackers in the distance began to ring. The sound of firecrackers, fireworks, and firecrackers came and went, as if they were saying goodbye to the past year. The dazzling array of fireworks is like flowers to welcome the New Year.

Night has fallen! My sister and I, who had been waiting for a long time, happily took out the "kaleidoscope". I excitedly grabbed the fireworks and lighters and prepared to implement our first plan for Chinese New Year's Eve - fireworks.

The first shot we fired was "a roar into the sky", and with a loud bang, the sky suddenly became like day, so spectacular! This was followed by "Heavenly Maiden Scattered Flowers", which must have been a very beautiful scene. You see, as expected, the fairies scattered a basket of flowers in the sky without pity.

Those flowers fluttering in the air are so beautiful! In an instant, the sky became a colorful world. My sister and I danced with joy.

Subsequently, we put "parachute", "seven fairies", "flowers unrestrained" ......

In the eyes of students, winter vacation is the happiest vacation of the year. It is like a leaf, and it is like a brook, and it flows away in the blink of an eye. But there is one thing that impresses me and makes me happiest, and that is setting off fireworks.

On the evening of the fifteenth, our family was ready to go and see the flowers. As soon as I finished eating, I couldn't wait to drag my father and mother to watch the fireworks first. The fireworks are so lively!

Silk! Silk! "Huh!

What is this sound? Oh! It turned out to be a "flower nest", only to see that when the "flower nest" began to be released, it was still a little shy and did not come out, gradually, gradually, it became bolder, and flew higher and higher.

From a distance, it resembles a golden fountain, and the "fountain" is accentuated by the surrounding fireworks. Everyone looked up and was amazed. Suddenly, a "parachute" came, and this "flower" was no stranger to it from the beginning, "Whoosh!

Like the "Shenzhou" No. 5, the ground flew into the sky, stayed for two or three seconds, and then "snapped!" With a bang, a parachute-like flower was formed in the sky, and one by one it ran down. The child slapped excitedly, jumping and screaming.

This "parachute" spreads in the sky like a splashing wave and an unattended vine, and it is very beautiful!

It's so much fun to set off fireworks this year! While I was very excited, I thought that Chinese technology is like this "flower", which is getting higher and more beautiful.

Your ending is too abrupt and the transition isn't natural enough. The description of fireworks in the middle is very good, just modify it in some places, but there is a problem, that is, in the paragraph of watching fireworks, why is there no description of yourself, such as describing whether you are happy? Excited?

Did you cheer, what did you think when you watched it, did you think it was beautiful? Feel like a bystander? You know, this is the thing that writes "you" happy.

How can you do it without "you"?

1,000 firecrackers on the first day of the new year, fifteen to see the flowers, these are all "stormy waves", in short, this winter vacation life is too pleasant, let me remember more than once, one of the things that makes me feel more happy winter vacation - flowers.

On the evening of the fifteenth, our family finished dinner early and prepared to see the flowers, because I couldn't wait, I dragged my father and mother to watch the fireworks first, it was really lively! Silk! Silk!

"Huh! What is this sound? Oh!

It turned out to put a "flower nest", only to see that when the "flower nest" began to put it, it was still a little shy, not out, gradually, gradually, it was not stranger, the higher the thorns, from a distance, it was like a golden fountain, the "fountain" set off more beautifully, everyone looked up one by one, and the mouth was amazed. Suddenly, a "parachute" came, and this "flower" was no stranger to it from the beginning, "Whoosh! Like the "Shenzhou" No. 5, the ground flew into the sky, stayed for two or three seconds, and then "snapped!"

With a sound on the ground, a parachute-like flower was formed in the sky, running down one by one, the child clapped his palm, jumped and jumped, this "parachute" was like a splashing wave in the sky, and like an unattended tree, spreading everywhere, very beautiful.

From this incident, I realized the rapid development of science and technology, the wisdom of our country, I think, China's technology is like this "flower", higher and higher, more and more beautiful.

In the eyes of students, winter vacation is the happiest vacation of the year.

It was a sunny day, and I was very happy, because I had to take an open class, and I liked the Chinese open class the most, because Mr. Yao would interject a joke from time to time to make us happy.

Jingle bell" The class bell rang, and Teacher Yao strode into the classroom with the textbook in hand.

Teacher Yao began to talk about Yan Zi's life and deeds, and the topic was 108,000 miles away, and he began to talk about history.

It is said that Yan Zi was petite, and the state of Chu wanted to insult him, so he closed the city gate and opened a small hole next to it, wanting Yan Zi to enter through the "dog hole".

Teacher Yao: Teacher asked us that there are three idioms hidden in them, let us find them. I don't think many people raised their hands on this question, so I took this opportunity to show my performance and impress Mr. Yao. Sure enough, Teacher Yao really called me, and I accurately said the three idioms, Zhang Yuan Cheng Yin, Sweat into Rain, and Shoulder to Shoulder, and the teacher praised me.

The teacher asked us to summarize the main content of the whole text, and the students raised their hands to show their talents, and I was not to be outdone and raised my hands. But in the end, the teacher still didn't call me. I just wanted a few more questions. But the bell rang at this time.

Jingle bell "I am happy and depressed. I'm happy that I've shown my talent, and I'm frustrated that I didn't have a few more questions.

That language lesson.

A student was not ideal in three subjects in the midterm exam, and he was listless. During a Chinese class, the Chinese teacher noticed his abnormality. So he took a piece of paper, put it on the ground, and asked him what do you think of it?

He may be listless or surprised, and said, if you throw it on the ground, it will become a piece of waste paper.

The teacher was obviously not satisfied with her answer, so he stepped on it twice and repeated the previous question. He said that when you step on him twice, he is a real waste of paper. There is no use for it anymore.

At this time, the teacher picked up a paintbrush and drew a galloping horse on it. Finding the verification number turned into a field of horse galloping to life.

The crocodile was the teacher who asked that question again, and the classmate really had bright eyes and said, "Teacher, you have made a piece of waste paper really valuable!"

Since then, the student has been admitted to the master's degree in mathematics.

One day, my mother and I took the train to my aunt's house. On the train, I suddenly had a fever. Mom was very anxious, immediately took off the luggage, hurriedly found the medicine, and said to herself:

Yikes! Why did I forget to bring my fever reducer? The aunt sitting opposite heard her mother's voice and said to her daughter, who was about 6 years old

Baby, can you go and ask the flight attendant for a cup of hot water? Without thinking, the little girl ran to find hot water. I saw that the aunt also took down her luggage to look for medicine, and she didn't forget to say to her mother

Don't worry, there will be a way. "I felt like I was carrying several tons of sandbags. After a long time, the sister came running back and said that there was no hot water.

Now there is a child with a high fever, can anyone help her? As soon as he finished speaking, the bustling carriage fell silent for a moment. I was disheartened by the fever and my whole body was sore, and there was no one to help me?

I'm so uncomfortable! Help me! Subsequently, there was a sound of "sparse noise" looking for luggage in the carriage.

I have fever reducers! An aunt said. "I have hot water here!

A big brother also lent a helping hand. One after another, people gave me things ......

My fever subsided, because I was cared for by the whole car, and my mother led me to thank the people in the whole car. "When one side is in trouble, all sides support. "There's a warm current in my heart.

One day during the summer vacation, my mother and I took the train to my aunt's house. For some reason, on the train, I suddenly had a fever.

My mother was very anxious, so she immediately took off her luggage, looked for medicine, and said to herself: "Ah! Why did I forget to bring my fever reducer?

The aunt sitting across from us heard her mother's voice and said to her daughter, "Baby, go and ask the flight attendant for a cup of hot water, okay?" Without thinking, the little girl ran to find hot water.

I saw that the aunt also took her luggage and hurriedly looked for medicine, and did not forget to say to her mother: "Don't worry, there will be a way." "I felt like I was carrying several tons of sandbags.

After a long time, the little sister came back panting and said that there was no hot water. The aunt also did not find a fever reducer. In a hurry, she was in a hurry, stood up and shouted to the people who thought about the whole car:

Please be quiet! Now there is a child with a high fever in the carriage, can anyone help her? As soon as he finished speaking, the originally crowded carriage fell silent for a moment.

I was suffering from a fever and my whole body was sore, and I felt disheartened, and there was no one to help me? I'm really uncomfortable! Help me!

Subsequently, there was the sound of people in the carriage looking for luggage. "I've got fever reducers here! An aunt said.

"I have hot water here! "A big brother also lent a helping hand. One after another, people gave me that thing.

Then, I felt a chill in my head. "Sister, this is the ice water I just bought, it would be better to put it on my head, right? "A childish child's voice echoed in my ears, as if I had listened to an evocative song.

Help followed ......

My fever subsided, because I was cared for by the whole train, and my mother led me to thank all the people in the car, whether there were people who helped or not. "When one side is in trouble, all sides support. "There's a warm current in my heart.

One day, my mother and I took the train to my aunt's house, and on the train, I had a fever.

My mother hurriedly looked for medicine and told me that she had forgotten to bring it, and when my aunt heard it, she asked her daughter to ask for a cup of hot water and help me find it. But there was no hot water, and the aunt didn't bring medicine, so she asked people for help in the carriage. People were very enthusiastic and helped me find medicine, one of the aunts brought me her cup of hot water, a little girl covered my head with ice water, and one after another someone gave me a piece of help.

My fever subsided, because I was cared for by the people in the carriage, and I was grateful to them, and I felt a warm current in my heart.

Fang Zhongyong met Lu Meng by chance.

On that day, Zhong Yong, who was in his twenties, was working in the farmland and was lamenting the loss of his talent, when a man in a general's uniform suddenly fell from the sky and dared to ask where this was? The man asked Naka-young, who ran over.

This is Jin Xi, and I'm Fang Zhongyong. What is your last name? ”

My name is Lu Meng, and my name is clear. ”

Lu Meng? Yes! Could it be that you are Lu Meng, the general of Wu during the Three Kingdoms? ”

It's me. How do you know about me, though? ”

Oh, there is a teacher who told the story of 'Sun Quan's persuasion', Sun Quan persuaded you to study many times, but you repeatedly didn't listen, and finally listened to Sun Quan's advice and studied hard. ”

Right! As soon as Lu Su left, I somehow came here, by the way, you just said that you are Fang Zhongyong, how can you cultivate the fields here? ”

Alas! When I was five years old, I suddenly had the inspiration to write poetry, crying and asking for pen, ink, paper, inkstone, although my father felt strange, but still borrowed it from a neighbor's house, I went down a pen, wonderful pen and flowers, and suddenly became famous in the county, many people clamored for money to buy the poems I made, and my father only cared about the money, and did not care about sending me to school, just like that, my talent diminished day by day, and finally disappeared ......Speaking of sadness, Zhongyong actually cried.

It turns out that this is the case, but I believe the old man's words, as long as you study hard, you will definitely realize your dreams. With that, Lu Meng disappeared into thin air. Only Zhongyong was left alone to talk to himself:

Kindness! I must study hard! Make your dreams come true!

Ten years later, Zhongyong was admitted to the top prize with excellent results, and the emperor rewarded him with countless treasures, which fulfilled his dream and became an immortal legend.