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Grandpa Lu is over 80 years old this year, he wears a black cotton jacket and an old cotton hat, and still maintains a hard and simple style. During the Liberation War, he pushed a small cart to transport food to the front line, and he didn't know how many places he walked. As a result, he was named a "model of support".

He often said to us: "(I) have experienced the old and new (two) societies, and I know that today's happy life is not easy to come by, you must cherish it!" ”

Grandpa Lu is over eighty years old this year. He wore a black cotton jacket and an old cotton hat, and he still maintained his hard and simple manners. During the Liberation War, he pushed a cart to transport food to the front line, and he walked through many cities and villages.

He was once awarded the glorious title of "Model of the Front". He often said to us: "I have experienced the old and new society, and I know that it is not easy to live happily today, you must cherish it!" ”

Old cotton hats are not "worn".

After maintaining the hardship and simplicity, add "tradition".

Millet, wheat and grain"Repeat.

I don't know how many cities and villages I have walked through? Medium? Wrong use, use.

The past and present are the scriptures.

Rated should be awarded.

He should be "me".

Xin Fuzhong should be "lucky".

Remove the "more" in the 80s

He wore a black cotton jacket and an old cotton hat "on his head".

It still maintains a hard and simple "style".

Remove "millet, wheat and" in "he pushed a trolley to transport millet, wheat and grain to the front".

I don't know how many cities and villages I have walked through? The question mark was changed to an "exclamation mark".

As a result, he was given the honorable title of "exemplary support" and changed the title of "obtained" or "removed".

He has experienced the old and new societies, and knows that today's happy life is not easy to come by, you must cherish it!

He changed it to "I".

Note, quotation marks are the contents to be modified.

Summary. What did I correct in my language?

What did I correct in my language?

You can take a picture and send it.

Modification: We will participate one by one before that.

It's a combination of these, isn't it?

Which question won't?

To this end, we should establish and practice a low-carbon life and build a green and harmonious home.

Taizong likes the right army, Xiao Yi designed to earn Lan Pavilion and the double quotation marks on the authenticity of Lan Ting's whereabouts are all deleted The correct one is: Taizong likes the right army, Xiao Yi plans to earn Lan Pavilion and Lan Shouting Zhiting Pavilion's whereabouts, true and slow infiltration, debate.

Becoming a long-lasting cultural talking point (punctuation in the middle is removed) is done, can you see? Kiss.

Taizhi Lingzong likes the right army, Xiao Yi designed to dismantle and make Lan Pavilion and the double quotation marks on the authenticity of Lan Ting's whereabouts are all deleted, and the correct one is: Taizong likes the right army, Xiao Yi plans to earn Lan Pavilion and Lan Ting's whereabouts, authenticity, and debate: It has become a long-lasting cultural talk (the punctuation in the middle is deleted).

1 Changing the subject, it should be changed to The injection is very effective, and the potion immediately stops the patient's pain and regains his consciousness.

2 Correct. 3 Defective ingredients should be changed to Under the old medical system, there were often cases where one person enjoyed public expense** and the whole family received free medical treatment and medicine, which not only caused great waste to the state, but also caused harm to the patients themselves.

4 Defective Composition Changed to In the face of the challenge of the rapid development of science and technology in the world, we must raise the work of enhancing the nation's ability to innovate to the height of the rise and fall of the Chinese nation.

1 The injection was very effective, and the potion immediately stopped the patient's pain and restored the patient's consciousness.

2 It turned out that she was the daughter of Mr. Zhao, a professor of the Department of Chinese at Dongfang University, and a young writer who had already made a name for herself in the literary world.

3 Under the old medical system, there were often cases where one person enjoyed public expense** and the whole family saw a doctor and took medicine for free, which not only caused great waste to the country, but also caused harm to the patients themselves.

4. In the face of the challenge of the rapid development of science and technology in the world, we must enhance the national innovation ability, and realize that the national innovation ability is related to the rise and fall of the Chinese nation.

"Bread on"This word is not used well, it means to read someone else's work or an honorific letter, and it is not appropriate to use it to recommend one's own work to others. It should be replaced by "teaching".

In the six years of primary school life, I read a lot of books in my spare time, and my favorite reading is "Five Thousand Years Up and Down". I wrote a review of the essay I wrote in this year's "June 1st" essay contest held by the school and won the first prize.

Literature is the expression of human feelings and the record of human history. Reading literary works can significantly increase and improve our knowledge and literacy. To this end, the school has launched the "Make Friends with Good Books" campaign.

The teacher wants us to read more good books. The general enthusiasm of the students for reading is high.

In my six years of primary school life, I read a lot of books in my spare time, and my favorite reading is "Five Thousand Years Up and Down". After reading it, I participated in this year's school auction to welcome the "June 1st" essay competition, and won the first prize.

Literature is the expression of human feelings and the record of human history. Reciting literary works can significantly improve our knowledge and literacy. To this end, the school has launched or coded "Make friends with good books".

The teacher hopes that we will read more good books. The general enthusiasm of the students for reading has increased.

"Many" is repeated with "not a few", remove one.