500 words for writing an excellent essay for the sixth grade of primary school

My mom, medium shapely.

Figure, fair face, big eyes under thick eyebrows, and a few white hairs sandwiched between long black hair.

Mom always tries to accommodate my reasonable requests. Once, my little friend Sun Zhichao bought a basketball. I begged my father to buy me one too, but my father said that my family's living conditions were not good, so he refused to buy it.

I begged my mother, who readily agreed and quickly bought me a basketball.

My mother was very concerned about my physical condition. At the beginning of last month, I had a severe cold and had a high fever that never went away. Mom was as anxious as an ant on a hot pan.

During the day, she took me on personal leave to take me to the doctor, give me medicine, and take my temperature. In the evening, she got up several times to cover me with a quilt. As soon as he heard my cough, he told me to get up and drink water.

My mother has very strict requirements for my behavior and habits. I remember when I was in the first grade of elementary school, I came home from school one day and bought a pack of snacks on the way to eat. I thought I could hide it, but something unexpected happened.

As soon as I entered the door, my mother first said to me kindly, "Baby, did you have any snacks today?" Good baby, don't lie half-lying!

I was stunned for a moment, hesitated for a while, and said to my mother, "No ......."There is a ...... to eatMom stared at me, "Really?

I was so frightened that I said to my mother, "I ......"I ......I eat ......Snacks ......Finish.

My mother stroked my hair with her hand and said to me kindly, "If you do something wrong, admit it boldly, don't lie, you are a good child." No snacks, good boy.

Remember? "Remembered. I said.

Mom looked at me and smiled happily.

If I do something wrong and try to hide it from her, she will find out and I will be severely punished. It was a math test in the first semester of the third grade. I only scored 89 points because of my carelessness.

When I got home, I didn't dare tell my parents. I don't know how my mother knew the truth, she was so angry that she slapped me several times in a row! At that time, I screamed and screamed, and tears came out of my eyes.

I felt that my mother was too ruthless.

Gentle and stern at the same time, this is my mother.

1. Pay attention to preparing an accumulation book at ordinary times, and accumulate more good words and sentences when reading. 2. And most importantly, the written composition must have highlights. You can do more imitation sentence exercises.

When encountering good anthropomorphic sentences, figurative sentences, and comparative sentences, it is best to have both, or use imitation sentences of ancient poems and imitate them according to the format of the original sentence. 3. The number of written words is not in the many, but in the fine. Proper use of good words and sentences will make the article vivid and exciting.

4. The topic should be novel, don't make people feel that it is an old-fashioned kind of topic at first glance, and there is no idea of even reading it. 5. Be positive. Let's start solving your problem 1, characters.

The most important thing is to grasp the physical characteristics. If you want to praise him for a certain quality, pay attention to the details of the portrayal, combined with specific examples, there will be unexpected effects, 2, items. This one is simple.

The host observes the shape. And say its function, combined with beautiful words, 3, scenery. Needless to say, it's important to use a lot of good words and phrases to enjoy the scenery and say how it makes you feel.

4. Activities. Important portrayal scenes. It is a ...... of bustle, serious silence, warmth and romance5. Things.

It's important to write about how you feel about what happened, or what inspiration it has.