Help me revise this paragraph, how to modify this sentence?

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Your last sentence, with a lot of questions, is as follows:

1.I hope and can I say that it is repeated, at least a little verbose!

2.Possess here does not have appeal, to change!

3.Possession and fullness are the same meaning!

4.How can the ranking ratio in the back be more and more low-level! From confidence to carefulness, from challenge to problem! It's the first time I've seen such a ranking!

5.In the end, there is more concentration and carefulness, how does it sound and commemorate Wenchuan** is not very harmonious!

One moment a student, another a classmate, are you a teacher or a student? What kind of world is it in a world full of love? Awkward!

After that, there is more concentration and carefulness, how does it sound and commemorate Wenchuan** is not very harmonious!

One moment a student, another a classmate, are you a teacher or a student? What kind of world is it in a world full of love? Awkward!

Today is a special day, on this special day, let us walk through these ** silently, and the more than 60,000 compatriots who have come to the disaster with their hearts (cannot be shown here) will sincerely offer a flower, light a candle, pray for the living, and may the dead rest in peace. Here, I sincerely hope that everyone can remember this day, remember that moment, let us take this as a monument to our hearts, and thank us together for living in a world full of love; But at the same time, I hope that everyone can take this as a driving force, be full of confidence to cope with challenges in the future study, establish unswerving perseverance in the future life, and sprinkle kindness and love on the road of life in the future!

At the same time, I hope that students can be full of confidence to meet challenges, unswerving perseverance, concentration and carefulness in solving problems in their future studies!

But at the same time it should be right, with a full of words repeated deletion one.

2.Pass. Let. Through the **first anniversary**, let us use a special way to pay tribute to the more than 60,000 compatriots who died) is a typical lack of subject, arbitrarily remove the pass or let. May the dead rest in peace; Let's use a full stop.

There is another obvious mistake: but at the same time, I hope that students will have the confidence to cope with challenges in their future studies!

Pay attention to the confidence to meet the challenge, no, it is the confidence to meet the challenge!

Today is a special day, on this special day, let us go through these ** silently, and the more than 60,000 compatriots who have come to the disaster with their hearts (cannot be shown here) will sincerely offer a flower, light a candle, pray for the living, and may the dead rest in peace. Here, I sincerely hope that everyone can remember this day, remember that moment, let us take this as a monument to our hearts, and thank us together for living in a world full of love; But at the same time, I hope that everyone can take this as a motivation, be full of confidence to meet challenges in the future study, establish unswerving perseverance in the future life, and sprinkle kindness and love on the road of life in the future!

This sentence is modified to read: The teacher looks at us with kind eyes.

Wrong reason: Improper matching.

On the premise of not changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, modify the words and sentences with obvious language problems to make the sentences smooth, correct and more perfect. The content that needs to be modified includes all the components of the sentence, including the subject, predicate, object, definite, adverbial, and complement.

In this **, the author took the opportunity of an old house that was about to be demolished to convey the special atmosphere of the small southern town in that era of the recovery of all things (; Through the extremely daily life of a group of people, he has created a number of small people in the market.

**The landscape reproduces the unique social atmosphere and life scenes of that era, and (especially) writes the waves of cultural significance of the tide of reform and opening up in the old house.

Self-confidence makes you successful.

The journey of life is full of thorns, summon up your courage and stride forward, as long as you have self-confidence. Please believe that you will succeed, the road is walked by people, don't say "I can't do it", be confident, let you succeed.

Who was born to walk and write? Knowledge depends on accumulation, and courage depends on tempering. Stop blushing and say shyly, "I can't." ”

In class, when you have a problem, just stand up and speak, don't be nervous, don't be afraid. Be brave enough to express your opinions, even if it may not be correct, no one will laugh at you, even if you stammer, you will only be appreciative, and your classmates will only applaud you in their hearts. Because you are far braver than people who only dare to comment and whisper in class.

Oh, don't say "I can't". A warrior in life dares to show his shortcomings in front of others.

Everything is always difficult at the beginning, face the challenge without hesitation, take the decisive first step, followed by the second step, the third step, don't say "I can't do it".

On the sports field, please take steps to fight and struggle, and don't retreat because of your weak body. A fish that can't withstand the wind and waves can never jump out of the water; After all, the young eagles who can only hide in their comfort nests will not be able to soar in the sky. Don't be afraid of falling, it will only make your steps more steady and vigorous; Don't worry about failure, failure is the mother of success.

The road to victory was full of ups and downs, Edison experimented with more than a thousand kinds of filaments for the invention of the electric light, and every time he failed, he was not discouraged, and when others ridiculed him, he proudly said: "I have found more than a thousand substances that are not suitable for making filaments." What courage and pride that is!

Friends, difficulties can only be paper tigers in front of the strong. When you succeed, you will realize, "It's not hard, I can do it."

Don't let the beautiful youth staggered past in a "no" sound, and when you wake up, your temples are already gray. Don't let your life be idle, step into the road full of thorns and sunshine, and let life radiate light and heat.

Friend, please don't say, "I can't. "Confidence will make you successful.

Wow, you wrote it well!

One point, the first sentence of the second paragraph of the opening paragraph, "Who was born to walk and write?" Replace it with: "No one is born to walk and write." "A little better, I think.

Even if you stammer, you will only look at you with admiration, and your classmates will only applaud you in their hearts. And because you are far braver than people who only dare to comment and whisper in class. Since your classmates want you to steal your gaze, why are you still the whisperer?

Currently, FIFA tournaments define assists as one (or two) players who attribute the assist to the scorer. He gives the ball to the scorer, either by passing the ball in any form, or by hitting the lintel or post**, which means he/they"Assists"The goal.

If an opposing player gains possession, not just pokes or touches the ball and then loses possession to the scorer, then the ball is not"Assisters"。

Judging by this standard, even if a player relies entirely on individual performances, crossing most of the pitch to score the ball and passing the ball to him, his teammate (even the goalkeeper) is the assister; And player A shoots into the net after hitting the frame** and then B makes a supplementary shot, then A is also the assister. However, as with offsides and own goals, for this one"Assists"There is still ambiguity in the definition. If the ball touches an opposing player in the middle of the game, the passer is still considered an assister as long as the opposing player does not gain possession.

But all sorts of weird things happen on the football field. For example, if a player passes the ball and Party B makes a mistake in breaking the ball, and the ball is strongly refracted and scored by the player of Party A, according to the rules, the player of Party A's passing team should be counted as the assister. But in reality, in many leagues and ** statistics, this situation does not count as assists.

Even if the ball hits the opposing player and there is no obvious refraction, the passer does not necessarily count as an assister. There is also a special case where a penalty is scored by a teammate and the official FIFA also counts as an assist.

I really didn't come up with the picture you described.

I slowly descended the stairs. A picture of a small mountain and flowing water came into my eyes one by one, making me find the long-lost tranquility and comfort in the early morning. The rocky hill was washed by the creek all year round, forming a winding path for the stream to flow through ("I don't understand what this building rock means, hehe").

The stream rushing down from the top of the mountain, through the gravel, dripping on the small rocks, persistently hitting the mossy rocks, splashing one after another, like a running sprinter, swaying tenacious sweat. Until it falls in a small pool, the bouncing water column is like a thumb-sized water child, holding hands in the water to perform water ballet.

The tenacious stream gave me an inspiration, and that's what I'm looking for. Until the sound of cicadas in my ears stopped, I left here with such a feeling.

9What appeared to me was the view of the hill and the flowing water. The original miniature and delicate hill is in) very strange.