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Bai saw his father and uncle playing chess. I was so interested in playing chess that I persuaded my father to play chess with me. When the chess game was set, I went out first, and my father followed me.

I got out of the car, and he jumped off his horse, and then he was shot. My opponent will eat my cart with a horse, and I will eat his cart with a cannon. Then he ate mine again, and I was very anxious and thought to myself:

How can I eat his pieces? But before I could think that he had eaten my horse again, I was even more nervous, but I calmed down, because the teacher had said that I couldn't solve the problem in a hurry, so I ate his cart with a cannon. But in the end, I was caught off guard by my father one after another, and I lost this chess game, but I was still very happy because my father said that my chess skills had improved a lot!

Famous teacher's comment: This essay describes the process of the young author and his father playing chess. The author explains the cause and effect of the incident very clearly, and the language in the text is fluent and fluent.

The little author used more detailed pen and ink to describe the scene of playing chess with his father, when the situation was unfavorable to him, the author"Very anxious"Later, "I was even more nervous" accurately described my mood at that time. At the end of the essay, the full text is summarized: "I lost this chess game, but I am still very happy because my father said that my chess skills have improved a lot!"

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Good words: plump, plump, burly, slim.

Standing posture graceful appearance dignified extraordinarily robust manners elegant and polite.

Good sentence: A group of Dai girls walked over, carrying a small spinning wheel on their shoulders, holding a small lantern in their hands, and their tight-fitting and dragging tube skirts were swaying in the wind. Their figures are so slender, their steps are so light, and their demeanor is generous, like a group of beautiful fairies falling from the sky.

We stood on the playground, proudly and proudly looking at the losers, like mighty generals who had won a great battle, and we were very happy.

My dad was the first mate of the merchant ships of the Ocean Company. He was tall, with slightly yellow hair naturally curly, a pair of eyes full of wisdom embedded in his white square face, and a pair of nostrils that looked particularly large under the high bridge of his nose.

He is my English teacher, surnamed Zhou. In the short year he led our class, he won the love and respect of our class with his superb teaching skills and humorous classroom style. I remember the first time we met, it was during the summer vacation make-up class from the second to the third year of junior high school.

It may have been that my former English teacher told him about me and asked me to meet him on the first day I arrived at school. When I walked into his office nervously and curiously, I saw a middle-aged man with a smile on his face, thin in stature, but with a pair of spiritual eyes, as if full of wisdom. Seeing that I was nervous, he spoke first.

He said that he had learned that I was a good English student in our class, and he hoped that I could cooperate with his work this semester to improve the English of our class. I felt very kind to this teacher, who had high hopes for me before I had never met.

2. From a distance, you sit on a movable rattan chair, staggering and staggering. Look closely at your kind face and a little haggard, the messy short hair has turned gray, the sideburns are even more messy when the breeze moves, it looks like it has 60 flowers, and the small eyes that are still bright and bright have become cloudy and shrunk only to see the uneven forehead; The face is no longer as shy as before, I heard my father mention, you are a gentle, introverted and virtuous woman, but in my sight, you appear in front of me again and again are so haggard and desolate, and every time you appear so suddenly and so different. Could it be that I saw it wrong, I slowly approached, and I suddenly felt that my vision was blurry, and I vaguely didn't know how you had changed in front of me; I talk to myself; No, no, no, the black cheongsam embroidered with a dark chrysanthemum, how could I forget the pros and cons; How could that row of T-shaped buttons on the diagonal side ignore my presence for you, and suddenly I quickened my pace again, and ...... step by stepRun ......I couldn't help but call my grandmother, she was surprised that her eyes suddenly looked directly at me, and I felt that now I knew my view of her, she immediately relaxed the haggard mood with a trace of shyness, and smiled at me, at this time my face also bloomed with the joy of childhood, I was about to close my eyes and shout in shame Grandma I love you, but my vision became more blurry and blurred and couldn't even see the ...... of my hands

If it's just a fragment of a character's special personality traits, you have to see which aspect of a person to describe, does he give you a range and an area?