How the author describes the tide of the Qiantang River

In terms of rhetorical devices, it is generally metaphorical, personified, exaggerated, compared, dual, quoted, questioned, rhetorical, repeated, intertextual, contrasted, borrowed, and irony. Expression: symbolism, contrast, contrast, setting up suspense, echoing before and after, wanting to promote and suppress, supporting the words and aspirations, borrowing lyricism, association, imagination, foil (positive lining, reverse lining) The angle of describing the scene:

Visual, auditory, tasteful, tactile methods of describing scenes: combination of movement and static, combination of generalization and concreteness, from far to near (or from near to far) Environmental description is divided into: natural environment, social environment 1, metaphor, anthropomorphism:

vivid image; Answer format: Write vividly about the object property. 2. Ranking:

Momentum, strengthened tone, all in one go, etc.; Answer format: Object feature 3 is emphasizedQuestioning: Draw the reader's attention and thinking; Answer format:

Draw the reader's attention and think about the characteristics of the object Rhetorical questions: emphasis, reinforce the tone, etc.; 4. Contrast: The ...... is emphasized...... highlighted5. Repeatedly:

...... were highlightedStrengthen the tone.

Suddenly, the tide rushed westward, but the aftermath was still surging in the sky, and the wind and waves were still roaring on the river. It took a long time for the Qiantang River to regain calm. Look at the embankment, the river has risen two feet high.

Original: The white line quickly moved towards us, gradually lengthened, thickened, crossed the river, and closer, only to see the white waves rolling, forming a wall of water more than two feet high. The tide is getting closer and closer, like thousands of white war horses marching in unison, galloping mightily; The sound was like a mountain collapsing and the earth cracking, as if the earth had been shaken.

Suddenly, the tide rushed westward, but the aftermath was still surging all over the sky, and the wind and waves were still roaring on the river. It took a long time for the Qiantang River to regain calm. Look at the embankment, the river has risen two feet high.

Writing "white line" quickly moved, "gradually elongated, thickened, and crossed the river" wrote the process of the tide getting closer and closer, and the water potential gradually increasing. When he then writes "closer", "the white waves roll to form a white city wall six or seven meters high", and the momentum of the tide is written from the two perspectives of color and height, which is due to the wide terrain in the east and narrow in the west, so that the rolling tide of the white waves forms a wall more than six meters high.

At the end, when I wrote "closer and closer", the tide was even more earth-shattering and swallowing mountains and rivers, "The tide is getting closer and closer, like thousands of white war horses marching in unison, galloping mightily; The sound was like a mountain collapsing and the earth cracking, as if the earth had been shaken. In this sentence, the author uses two figurative sentences, from the two perspectives of sight and sound, vividly and concretely writes about the great potential of the tide, the fierce momentum, which is really breathing mountains and rivers, and is extremely spectacular.

Suddenly, the tide rushed to the west, but the aftermath was still surging like a sweep in the sky, and the wind and waves were still roaring on the river. It took a long time for the Qiantang River to regain its calmness. Look at the embankment, the river has risen two feet high. "

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"Watching the Tide" is in the form of prose, describing the magnificent and majestic scene of the tide of the Qiantang River. The full text focuses on the "tide", based on the "view", and uses the penmanship of the lens to write the shape of the tide, the shape of the exercise, the trend of the tide, and the prosperity of the tide.

1. The first paragraph writes about the male of the tide. The opening sentence is "the tide of Zhejiang, the grandeur of the world", which is the first to catch people. Then explain the peak time of the tide, and then describe the tide from the four aspects of shape, color, sound and potential, and write the majesty of the tide from far and near.

The depiction is also made in a metaphorical and exaggerated way, with a few short sentences such as "like silver thread", "jade city snow ridge", "like thunder" and "swallowing the sky and fertile sun", which vividly express the shape, color and momentum of the sea tide rushing from afar to the front of you. Finally, Yang Wanli's sentence is used to summarize the above vividly, echoing the first sentence.

2. The second paragraph writes about the power of the army. At the beginning, it is still a general sentence, indicating that every year Jingyin has to coach the sailors at the height of the tide. Then the wonderful scene of the naval exercise was described:

There were a large number of ships participating in the exercise, the formation was varied during the exercise, the sailors were skillful in combat, the battle was fierce and the momentum was huge, and the retreat was rapid after the exercise.

In just one paragraph, it vividly depicts a complex exercise, and the still scene of "smoke and silence" is not only a way of writing with movement and stillness, but also paves the way for another unique water performance below.

3. Paragraph 3 writes about the courage of the tide. At this time, the tide has come, and many Wuzhong athletes made wonderful performances in the stormy waves, and at the same time, they also wrote the majesty of the tide from the side.

4. Paragraph 4 writes about the prosperity of watching the tide. The crowd of people watching the tide is so dense, which shows how attractive the river tide and water performances are, so the purpose of writing the prosperity of the tide watching is to line the prosperity of the river tide and the excitement of the water performance from the side.

5. Utilization of word classes.

1) The grandeur of the world.

Perception: a verb as a noun, landscape, scene.

2) The momentum of galloping and dividing into five formations.

End: Adjective as a verb, exhaustive.

3) All are tattooed.

text, nouns as verbs, tattoos and tattoos.

4) And there are those who ride and play flags, javelins, and dance knives on the water.

Mark: noun as a verb, establish, lift.