Essay Requirements: 1 Score, 2 Deficiencies, 3 Strengths, 4 Goals, 5 What to Do, 55

Harvest can be written around the theme of unity, when grouping, there are many people, they can brainstorm, work together, help each other, and reflect collective strength.

The disadvantage is that the division of labor is not clear and does not involve every member.

Improve: Mobilize members to participate in activities and make everyone actively participate in the group.

Feel that unity is strength, water drops are pierced, and the iron pestle can also be sharpened into a needle.

Children in poverty-stricken mountainous areas: Hello! I am a student in Class 5 (2) of the Experimental Primary School, my name is Dong Yingchu.

Today, I saw your emaciated figures on TV, and I saw your helpless eyes. Most of you come from very difficult backgrounds and often do not have enough food and clothing, but you are very eager to go to school and learn something that you have always dreamed of. Take a look at your school!

The dilapidated houses, the desks made of dirt, the broken benches of various sizes brought by the classmates from home, no electric lights, no books, not even chalk! None of this is something we can imagine. Some students write densely on the words in the exercise book, erase them with an eraser after writing, and use them again; Some students use their pens so long that they are reluctant to throw them away; Some of my classmates' schoolbags were sewn by their mothers from some old cloth; After a few semesters, some students' books are still like new, and the corners of the books are not rolled up at all; Some students ......You still insist on studying under such difficult conditions, and some of your classmates' grades are surprisingly good!

We are truly impressed by your spirit of learning. Look at us again. We have a variety of study supplies, beautiful books, brand new stationery boxes, pens with different functions, colorful school bags ......Numerous.

Many of our classmates are little princesses and little emperors in the family, and the family revolves around us all day long, but we are still in the blessing and do not know the blessing, do not study well, think about playing all day long, and have to look at something, which always makes the adults angry. Through our "Hand in Hand" activity, we can all truly feel that society is a big family, and everyone should help if one person is in trouble. Through assistance, we can help students in need no longer feel lonely and make them feel warm.

Maybe what we donate is insignificant. But whatever it is, maybe it's a school bag, maybe it's a pencil; Maybe it's a little book, maybe it's a clean undershirt; Maybe it's the ...... of coins that have accumulated over timeBut on the scales of love, they are always equal. I believe that when you receive our small gifts, you must have experienced warmth and infinite joy.

We are all the flowers of the motherland, we must learn from you, grow up to better build the motherland, and make the motherland's tomorrow better! I hope to join hands with you and make progress together! I wish you progress in learning and making progress every day!

A classmate who cares about you: Dong Yingchu.

For everyone all these years, so I will add you.

Leave some for yourself, you can try a lot, such as time, happiness, space, etc., many nouns can be used.