Take a look at an article by King Ye and rate it

He is gentle, even gentle to the point of vulnerability; He was strong, but he was lonely and strong. He's so powerful, so powerful that he hurts himself, and yet he still smiles.

En's sentence is particularly fond of occasional feelings, but there is a wrong concept

It was not that he wanted to destroy humanity, it was humanity that abandoned him.

Wrong, wrong, completely wrong! The more people who think like this, the more they will be sentenced! This sentence prescribes his end.

He is the one who wants to destroy humanity, and if he doesn't trust humanity, how can he ask others to trust him. It is important to note that he is cynical and cannot be changed.

He is human in his own right.

The article is very well written, and the language is super feel-like.

OK Done.

That's so well written! Not only is the words appropriate and the sentences rich, but it is also a very profound and poetic article. It fully reflects the mood of "good" and makes me feel that "good" is not as bad as we imagined!

It's not dead. Landlord, you wrote it so well, but it didn't die.

People are born without absolute good people and absolute bad people, whether a person is good or bad is mainly affected by acquired factors, King Macang Ye is actually a character full of contradictions, he is struggling with life on the one hand, and on the other hand, he is also struggling with his own heart.

The Leaf King was born for the sake of the Macang Leaf.

I think King Ye is so miserable.

King Ye will never die! ~~

That's the end of the psychic king. Infinite resentment....

Very well written, commendable, very deep and poetic, a good article, really !!

I think it's very good, the words are appropriate, the sentences are rich, and the model text is a model article!

What do you think?

It's so good, so touched.

Not bad. It's written very realistically. It's just that. He didn't die.

So impressed. Write a good heartfelt voice.

It's so strong, Your Royal Highness King Ye, I will always love you!

I envy the landlord, the writing is too good

It's so rightly written.

But will a good adult be reincarnated?

First consider the rhetorical aspects, such as metaphor, personification, exaggeration.

Then look at the theme structure of the article, such as the total score, the total score, the total score, some beautiful sentences, you can comment on the expressions used, such as borrowing things lyrically, borrowing scenery lyrically, supporting things and so on.

Finally, at the end of the article, you can say that the chapter shows its ambition or corresponds to the beginning.

It is also necessary to grasp the theme of the article, and its deep meaning must be elaborated.

Structure, content, innovation, style, emotion. Structure is your skeleton, content is your flesh, style is your words, feelings are your thoughts, and innovation is your decoration. A perfect person, an excellent article.

It's good, there is a story, a plot, an environment rendering, and more importantly, there are correct values.

A little white text full of flowery words.

I don't feel like I have a good enough reason to back him up and reveal that he has to compromise himself for what he wishes before you set the danger. A lot of things are introduced, which leads to too many tragic endings.

I don't feel like I have a good reason to cheer him on. Maybe write about what he had to compromise with himself before you revealed it. Writing too many introductions leads to too many endings.

Probably so.

The thing that fell out has something to do with Xiao Zhang's mother coming back? If you want, write this story as a micro**.

How do you rate your current articles?

To evaluate an article, we must first look at whether the text is in order, then look at the idea, and finally look at the style.

First of all, the central idea, the theme, or something, evaluate it, and then say how good the structure is, and then say the diction, just this routine...

Blowing all over my clothes, they were like a thin layer of tulle in the cold wind, and they blew through.

Suddenly, I heard a sound in the distance. When talking, put brothers, I can't move! And hey, brother, we can't get by!

In other words, it's you who asks for help like this, and the logic is a little smoother. Moved me to the front of the island where you were and then wrote that the situation was critical, the earth began to break apart, and there was a sea of fire around me. Connected, all in one go.

At this time, some strangers appeared behind me, and they tried to befriend Hungry Kin, but I never agreed.

This sentence feels like it pops up out of nowhere, and it's a bit nondescript. It is advisable to add something else.

What about the article? Another headline party.

Probably every day to appreciate the fate of nature, with a little sentimentality.

It may be that his body is not as good as day by day.

I checked it, there are only a few chapters, eunuchs, so why don't you read it?

In the courtyard, he ate the saffron that made rouge, and his mouth was so red that he seemed to have eaten human blood, and he was so frightened that the servants who came to the store to fetch rouge for the palace ran away. The next day, it was rumored in the city that the woman who sold rouge was a man-eating monster, but the beautiful man was still the same, and he believed in her. Because the beautiful man often cares for him, his beloved wife is jealous and often comes to the woman's shop to make noise, like a shrew, and the man always has no choice but to take his beloved wife home.

The man's beloved wife is as beautiful as a fairy, peerless.

I'm the author of this book, may I ask you, what do you do? I'm still hesitating whether to continue writing or not.