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The soldiers trekked through mountains and rivers and marched towards the Shanhaiguan Pass. At night, the accommodation tents are lit up in each tent. It was windy and snowy at night, and the soldiers couldn't help but miss their hometown. The hometown is warm and quiet, and there is no sound of cold wind and snow.

Sauvignon Blanc is just a word card, and many people have written about it. You'll have to tell us who wrote it.

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The minimum thing to fill in the word is to pass the law, and the rhythm of "Sauvignon Blanc" is as follows:

Zhongzhongping (rhyme), Zhongzhongping (rhyme).

中仄平平中仄平 (rhyme), 中平中仄平 (rhyme).

Zhongzhongping (rhyme), Zhongzhongping (rhyme).

中仄平平中仄平 (rhyme), 中平中仄平 (rhyme).

This is the basics of word filling.

There is also a kind of hazy beauty in the words, which are too straightforward and fall into clichés.

Personal opinion ...

Good words! Strong.

It is suggested that the word be changed"Pity"

Tang Rhyme" and "Ji Rhyme"."Pity"The sound is spiritual, and it has the meaning of love and pity.

The level is limited and can't help you fill it in.

The last sentence! What is there to envy when you see you once a year, you have an oath and a mountain alliance, and the beautiful woman is just "returning", and it is not a farewell, the two in the sky envy you. The format is whatever you write, don't care.

The word "not" is used unqualifiedly.

The same goes for the word "phase".

The comparison of the bead curtain is quite innovative, but the third sentence is not coordinated.

The lower rungs are too explicit and not stable enough.

The advantage is that the love truth is new, but it lacks classical charm.

No more compliments.

To be honest, the lower que is too vernacular, and the upper que is inverted, and it still needs to be worked on.

The sentence structure rhymes, and I think the emotion should be reflected in the lovesickness.

Good overall.