Abbreviation practice and sentence correction to answer know

1) China's cotton production has been unable to be self-sufficient for a long time.

The position of the definite and the central language is reversed, and it should be: the cotton produced in China cannot be self-sufficient for a long time. ）

2) The vast number of rural youths have shown incomparable enthusiasm for socialism.

The adjective "incomparable" is misplaced in the position of the adverbial and causes a sick sentence, and "incomparable" should be placed before "passionate". ）

3) In the cause of socialist construction, we should give full play to the role of broad knowledge.

The adverbial "sufficient" is misplaced in the position of the definite and should be placed before "play". ）

1> The adverb "no' is not in the right place. For example:

4) If we don't work hard to do a good job in our own domestic affairs, then it will be difficult for us to have a say in the international community. (The negative adverb of the word "put" should precede the word "put").

5) If you don't check the substitution work as soon as possible, you won't be able to hoe the land in front of you. (The word "not" should be moved before the word "take advantage of").

6) Not only do you study hard, but also help other students. ("he" should be moved before "not only").

7) Early in the morning, the students participating in the long-distance run are speeding on the road. ("Students" cannot be replaced with "gallop", but "run".) ）

8) The torrent of emotions is rolling, and the blood is whistling. ("Hot blood" can only "boil", not "roar").

9) His noble revolutionary qualities often come to my mind. ("Quality" cannot be "emerging", but can be replaced by "his great revolutionary image.") ）

10) These articles are full of Marxist ideas. ("Flashing" should be "light.") ）

Before liberation, the money earned by my father and brother was not enough to support the family. (It is only people who can be "fed", not "life.") ）

1. The teacher corrects the homework. 2. Soldiers defend the frontier. 3. Floods inundated villages.

4. Seagulls fly over the sea. 5. The brother and sister were intoxicated. 1. Our teacher Huang carefully corrected our Chinese homework.

2. Border guards defend the borders of the motherland day and night. 3. The roaring flood quickly flooded the village. 4. A flock of cute seagulls flew over the calm sea.

5. The kind-hearted brother and sister were intoxicated by the beautiful sound of the piano. 1. The spring breeze blows softly in her hair.

2. The platypus is a famous and rare animal in the world.

The sentence is revised as follows:

1. This idiom "worrying about the sky" is not used properly, and it should be used here to express worry, which can be changed to "worried" or "uneasy".

2. The sentence is not smooth, change the last sentence to "·· It's just a matter of letting the classical masterpiece be science fiction again. ”

3. Change the last sentence to "lose the broad and profound cultural connotation of the original work." ”

In the third sentence, the subject of the sentence "They are often full of assumptions about the original understanding" should be people, right?

There are a lot of abbreviated sentence exercises and answers, generally speaking, no one can get them all, but there is a rule here, after you remember it, you can deal with all kinds of abbreviated sentences, first of all, the subject + predicate + object in the sentence. The subject is the person and thing that makes the action, the predicate is the verb in the sentence, and the object is the object or result. Abbreviation is to remove the "branches and leaves" such as definite, adverbial, and complement, and retain the "trunk" such as subject, predicate, and object.

Specifically, "...."often acts as a definite,"...."地" often acts as an adverbial, "gott...""Often acts as a complement. In the abbreviation sentence, "...of", "land", "gott...The preceding words are all "branches and leaves" and should be deleted.

The early morning sun softly caresses the endless land. In the abbreviation, remove "early morning", "softly", "endlessly", and the remaining trunk is "the sun caresses the land."

1. Lack of subject. For example:

Through learning, we have improved our understanding.

Due to the limitations of Cao Xueqin's time and class, Xiao Neng is not reflected in his works.

2. Lack of predicates. For example:

Our ability to identify foot non-compliance.

The Chinese people are working hard to build a modern socialist power.

3. Lack of object. For example:

The General Assembly asked "what to do if the situation changes".

Beijing Department Store starts from the needs of the market and continues to mine people's goods.

4. Lack of definite language, this kind of language disease is less windy, but there is still none, such as:

It's a good idea to let college students find their own jobs and let them develop their own lives.

The word "pioneering" in the sentence cannot directly dominate "life", and a definite phrase should be added in the middle, such as "new", "own", etc., not only "pioneering......life" is so, by analogy, "pioneering......The world "pioneers......realm", "pioneering......situation", "pioneering......Heaven and Earth", "Pioneering......field" and so on. ）

4) Improper collocation.

Modify the sentence:

Reading this book made me feel a lot.

Mom bought a lot of vegetables, including: cabbage, radish, spinach, watermelon.

We discussed and listened to his advice.

If he studies hard, he gets good grades.

I'm going to fix the typos in my assignments.

Abbreviation: He rubbed his sleepy eyes and walked into the prime minister's office.

The birds in the trees sang merrily.

The grapes in Turpan, Xinjiang are delicious.

Dad ignores the crying child.

Mom had a smile on her face.