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Anonymous users2024-02-07Hello landlord! After reading your essay, I would like to give you a few suggestions.
1. Format problems. There should be a space between the full stop and the next word, so that there is no grammatical problem when placed in word. Otherwise, it will look crowded and uncomfortable.
2. The number of words is relatively small. Generally speaking, the longer the TOEFL essay, the easier it is to get a high score, because the length of the essay determines the persuasiveness of the essay to a certain extent. This brings us to the third point.
3. Opinions should be supported by facts and details. Every point of view should not just be reasonable, but should be exemplified. In this way, it also avoids the article being too dry, and the word count will go up.
4. In fact, when the real TOEFL writing test is too old, there will be no such (what, why) essay questions. There are only two kinds of essay questions that appear in the exam: 1. Give opinion 1 and point 2, and ask you which one you agree with.
2. Give point 1 and ask if you agree with point 1
Overall, this article is okay, but I suggest that you pay attention to the above questions.
I told the TOEFL test last year, the essay is 29 points, if you are interested, you can contact me, we can further **** ha
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Anonymous users2024-02-06I don't dare to give a few comments
1. The structure is relatively clear, furthermore, in addition, so what is used very skillfully
2. There are some small mistakes, such as adding the contrary or something;
3. There are also problems with grammar, such as the first paragraph of the person who....should be...
and with a respectful quality and virtue.——the person should be with a ..quality and virtue, regardless of the semantics, the landlord himself saw that the problem was Mao
4. Semantic.
For example, in the first paragraph, so i think yaoming is the best choiceI'm afraid it's not very appropriate to use so in this place, "based on this point according to it" is better. In addition, so i think....
It's really like a concluding sentence, and it's better to put it another way, like i will vote for .i would like to recommend ..
5. Yao Ming was the first to play in the United States? Or the landlord intends to say that the first to go to the United States and the ...... of the Houston RocketsIt's a bit of a twist, logically speaking, compound sentences are sometimes not as good as simple sentences, and it is good to be concise and powerful
6. My personal feeling is that there are a lot of chinglish ......Including some of the above, essay is not to translate each word and then concatenate the words into a sentence ah think in english, I will not give examples
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Anonymous users2024-02-051. Liu Wenyong reads? I have never heard of it, the best material for TOEFL reading is TPO, because all the real questions have been tested, followed by delta advanced reading, and the idea and difficulty of the questions are most similar to ETS.
2. The listening part of the old TOEFL is of high value, and the difficulty of speaking speed is no different from that of the new one, and the others are very limited, and the reading will not take the old TOEFL.
3. It's unreliable, most of them are out of range, but it's good to practice with it, and when you say dozens of articles, you can deal with any questions freely. There is no question bank for reading and listening.
5. I haven't heard of Longman's review materials.
It is recommended that you use TPO to practice, this is the best. In addition, delta redskin, that is, advanced reading, listening, speaking, and writing are all very good. TPO online is generally free**, you can look it up.
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Anonymous users2024-02-041) I've heard it, I don't know.
2) I think if you don't have enough time, you should do TPO directly, the old TOEFL will help, but the effect is too slow, there will be repetition in reading, and the speed of listening is getting faster and faster year by year, which is difficult!
3) Basically, there is no such thing as a question bank.
4) I don't think any review materials are as useful as the past questions, so doing TPO seriously is the king.
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