Describe a picture with an ancient poem, how to describe the picture in the poem

Here's how to paint a picture in a poem:

1.Describe the scenery presented in the poem, i.e., the image.

2.According to the main scenery in the poem, the picture is reproduced in your own words. When describing, we should be faithful to the original poem, and we should also use our own associations and imagination to recreate it, and strive to make the language beautiful.

3.Summarize the characteristics of the atmosphere created by the scenery. Two two-syllable words are generally used.

For example, it is lonely and lonely, quiet and beautiful, majestic and magnificent, bleak and desolate, clear and gorgeous, quiet and deep lonely, etc., and pay attention to accurately reflect the characteristics and mood of the scene.

4.Analyze the thoughts and feelings expressed by the author. To answer specifically, for example, it is not enough to simply answer "expresses the author's sentimental feelings", but to answer why it is "sentimental".

Paint a picture from a poemExamples:

In early spring, the water department was outside the eighteenth member.

Tang) Han Yu. The light rain in the sky street is as moist as a crisp, and the grass color is close but there is none. It is the most beneficial spring of the year, and it is absolutely better than the smoke and willows in the imperial capital.

Choose the sentence "The light rain in the sky street is as moist as a crisp, and the grass color is close but there is nothing": the light rain over the Beijing Avenue is numerous, it is as fine and moist as cheese, and the grass color is vaguely connected from a distance, but it seems sparse and sporadic when you look closely, as if you are playing hide and seek with us.

When describing, we should pay attention to two points: first, we must be faithful to the original poem, use our own words, and avoid direct quotations; Second, we should use our own associations and imagination to recreate, to describe the main scenes, not to write every sentence or every scene, but to write about the main scenes, and strive to be beautiful in language.

"Poetry is a flowing painting, painting is a still poem", to depict a picture is to use association and imagination to describe the picture shown in the poem in vivid and vivid language. Common questions are: "What kind of scenery does a certain poem depict?" and "Use your own words to describe the picture presented by a certain sentence (couplet)".

The mistake of students doing this kind of question is that they lack imagination, and they answer the questions that depict the picture into a translation of the poem, and they do not enter the artistic conception designed by the poem, and they do not incarnate as the author and understand what the author sees and feels.

Let's do two questions.

1.Please imagine the picture shown by depicting the tide on both sides of the river, and the wind is hanging. (The original poem is Wang Wan's "Under the Solid Mountain in the Second North").

Analysis: This question tests the ability to depict a picture of poetry. When answering, according to the picture described in the poem, first imagine the scene of "the tide is flat" and "the wind is right", as well as the situation of "the two sides of the strait are wide" and "one sail hanging", and then describe it, polish and process, and finally narrate it with beautiful words.

Sample answer: Spring tide**, the river is flush with both banks, and the river surface is wider; The boat is in the river, the spring breeze is blowing, the sails are hung high, and the boat is smooth and brisk.

2.Please describe Qin Guan's "Xing Xiangzi": "The small garden is a little bit, and the spring is harvested." There are peach blossom red, plum blossom white, cauliflower yellow. "The picture that was presented.

Analysis: This question tests the comprehension of the poem and the description of the picture. To answer this question, first understand the meaning of the sentence, and then grasp the image described in the poem:

Small garden, peach blossoms, plum blossoms, cauliflower flowers, and the characteristics of imagery: harvest all the spring, red, white, yellow, and then add your own associations, and depict them in figurative language.

Sample answer: Although the garden is small, the spring is infinite. As far as the eye can see, the flowers are gorgeous, the peach blossoms are as red as the glow, the plum flowers are as white as snow, and the yellow cauliflower is like a brocade spread out.

To answer the picture description questions, you need to start with the following four steps:

The first step is to perceive the poetry as a whole and understand the content of the poem, and find out the image that you want to depict the scope of the picture (find the whole picture). For example, the image of "the tide is flat and the banks are wide, and the wind is hanging" has the tide, the river, the shore, the wind, and the sail; "The small garden is a little bit, and the spring is gone. There are peach blossom red, plum blossom white, cauliflower yellow.

The imagery is a small garden, peach blossoms, plum blossoms, cauliflower and so on.

The second step is to add appropriate modifiers to the image according to the characteristics of the image, and form a sentence with conjunctions. For example, the image of "the tide is flat and the banks are wide, and the wind is hanging" adds modifiers to spring tide, river, both banks, spring breeze, sails, etc.

The third step is to associate and imagine, depicting the picture in vivid and artistic language (be careful to be faithful to the original poem).

The fourth step is to reveal the thoughts and feelings that the poet wants to express when necessary, so as to achieve "the harmony of the environment and the feelings".

Picking chrysanthemums under the east fence, leisurely see the South Mountain. "From the Jin Dynasty poet Tao Yuanming's "Drinking".

Drinking. The knot is in the human realm, and there is no noise of cars and horses.

How can you ask you? The heart is far away from itself.

Picking chrysanthemums under the east fence, leisurely see the South Mountain.

The mountain weather is good, and the birds are returning.

There is a true meaning in this, and I have forgotten to distinguish it.

Appreciation of works: Picking chrysanthemums under the east fence, leisurely seeing Nanshan", this is a famous sentence that has been popular for thousands of years. Because of the spiritual realm of "self-deviation from the heart", I will leisurely pick chrysanthemums under the fence, look up and see the mountains, it is so comfortable and self-satisfied, so extraordinary!

These two sentences set off the poet's leisurely mood with the description of objective scenes, and the word "leisurely" is used very well, indicating that what the poet sees and feels is not intentionally seeking, but unexpectedly encountered. Su Dongpo praised these two sentences: "The time of picking chrysanthemums, I saw the mountain by chance, and I didn't have to care at first, but the environment and the meaning will meet, so it is gratifying."

The word "see" is also used wonderfully, "see" is an unintentional occasional meeting, the beautiful scenery of Nanshan is just set off with the leisurely mood when picking chrysanthemums, and the composition of the "realm without me" that I forget. If you use the word "hope", it means that you have Nanshan in your heart first, and then you have the intention to look, and it becomes "the realm of me", and you lose a kind of innocent interest in forgetting the opportunity. What is the beauty of Nanshan that makes the poet praise it so much?

The next is "the mountain air is good, the birds are back to each other", this is also the scenery that the poet inadvertently saw, in the beautiful dusk scenery of Nanshan, the birds fly back to the mountains and forests together, all things are free and easy, and move appropriately, just as the poet gets rid of the shackles of officialdom and is leisurely, the poet here realizes the true meaning of nature and life. There is a true meaning in this, and I have forgotten to distinguish it. What did the poet realize from the birds, the South Mountain, the sunset, and the autumn chrysanthemums of nature?

Is it the natural law that everything works and gets its place? Is it a yearning for an ideal society that is simple and self-sufficient? Is it a philosophy of life that is left to its own devices?

Is it a straightforward and sincere character? The poet does not explicitly express it, but only implicitly asks questions for the reader to think, while he "wants to discern himself and forgets to speak". If we combine the previous "knot in the human realm, without the noise of cars and horses" to understand, "true meaning" can be understood as the true meaning of life, that is, life should not be drawn from fame and fortune, should not be polluted by the filth of officialdom to their natural nature, but should return to nature, to appreciate the infinite freshness and vitality of nature!

Of course, the connotation of this "true meaning" is very large, the author does not say all of it, and there is no need to say it, these two philosophical summaries give the reader the imagination of the words have been exhausted, and the meaning is endless, which is endlessly evocative.

No one has ever fallen on the fence, only the dragonfly Liangchang accompanies the stupid fly. Reading these two lines of poetry, the following scene comes to mind: in the summer, when the days are long and the nights are short, the shadow of the fence becomes shorter and shorter as the sun rises, and there is no one coming and going next to the fence, only dragonflies and butterflies flying leisurely there.

These two lines of poetry, on the surface, are depicting the scene, but in fact, they write about the busy labor of the peasants from the side. In early summer, farming is busy quickly, and farmers go out early and return late, so pedestrians are rarely seen during the day. "Only dragonflies and butterflies fly", the surface is written and moving, but the actual is quiet.

With movement against stillness, there is movement in stillness, and it appears quieter.

None of these two poems talk about farming, none of them write about labor, but through the lines of poetry, we can see the real face of the busy countryside. There is not a single word "busy" in the whole poem, but the busy scene of the peasants can be seen. The scene of the poem also contains a kind of emotion, a love for rural life, and a deep sympathy for the working people.

The picture seen in each sentence is as follows:

Black clouds do not cover the mountains: In summer, the sky is uncertain, and suddenly the dark clouds roll and spread like splashed ink, and at first, they do not cover the green mountains.

The white rain jumped into the boat: the black clouds continued to expand, and after a while, the downpour began to fall. The white raindrops hit the surface of the boat, like jumping pearls rolling into the boat.

Suddenly, a strong wind blew and scattered the black clouds.

The water under the Wanghu Tower is like the sky: after the rain, the sky is clear, and the lake water is as clear and clear as the clear sky when looking down from the Wanghu Tower's smock.

On June 27th, Su Shi was first in the boat, and then at the head of the building, quickly capturing the rapidly changing natural scenery on the lake: clouds, rain, wind, and sunny weather. When you read it, you will feel like you are there—as if you have experienced a sudden and muffled shower in the middle of the lake, and then come to the top of the lake to enjoy the beautiful scenery of the water and sky.

Each line of the poem "Begonia" is a painting, seeing the moonlight, the flowers in the courtyard, and the burning candles, the original text is as follows:

The east wind curls up and spreads the sublime light, and the fragrant mist is empty and the moon is in the corridor.

I was afraid that I would fall asleep in the middle of the night, so I burned high candles to shine red makeup.

Translation: The wind-blown east wind touched the faint clouds, revealing the moon, and the moonlight was also faint. The fragrance of the flowers melted into the hazy mist, and the moon had moved through the cloister in the courtyard.

Because I was afraid that the flowers would fall asleep in the middle of the night, I lit a high candle and refused to miss the opportunity to enjoy the begonias in full bloom.