Rewriting prose with Zhu Yuansi book 20

There was a hint of wind, the smoke disappeared completely, and the sky was the same color as the mountains. I was alone in a boat drifting along the river, the boat in the wind, to the left and to the right, admiring the mountains on both sides. It's really fun!

From Fuyang to Tonglu, a hundred miles of waterways, steep peaks and strange flowing water, unique in the world. Such a day, such a mountain, who can say who is more preferred?

I sat on the bow of the boat, and my eyes were full of blue and white, and when I found such a beautiful scenery, I couldn't help but sigh that the water was blue and white, and the water was so clear. Even the thousand-foot-deep place can be seen clearly. Fish are frolicking at the bottom of the water, and tiny pebbles lie quietly in the water.

The turbulent river is as fast as a flying arrow, and the stormy waves are as fierce as a flying horse.

On the high mountains on both sides of the river, all the trees grow verdant, revealing a chill. The many peaks each rely on their own terrain to compete upwards, as if to compete with each other, to see who climbs the highest and stretches the farthest, and countless peaks are straight into the sky. The springs in the mountains crash against the rocks and make a gurgling sound; The beautiful birds are chirping at each other, which is so beautiful.

The cicadas are crowing in the branches, and the apes are singing in the mountains. Is there such a place in this bustling world? Presumably, people who are keen on officialdom and economic sophistication will forget their worries when they come here.

It seems that such a landscape, such a landscape that does not stain red dust, must be guarded. Those lush trees stretched out their branches, hiding the landscape, and only the sunlight peeked out through the cracks, illuminating the blue color of the river, and enjoying the beauty of this treasure.

The dust and mist all cleared, and the sky and the mountains showed the same clear color. Let the boat float with the river, let it go east or west. From Fuyang to Tonglu, a hundred miles of waterways, strange peaks and strange flowing water, unique in the world.

The river water is all green, and you can see the bottom of the water at a depth of thousands of feet. You can see the fish swimming and the thin pebbles very clearly. The turbulent water is faster than the flying arrows, and the turbulent river waves are like galloping horses.

The high mountains between the two sides of the river are all covered with hardy evergreen trees. The mountains are competing upwards according to the terrain, comparing each other with higher and farther distances. Strive to reach high and point straight to the sky, forming thousands of peaks.

The water of the spring crashes against the stones, making a gurgling sound; Good birds sing in harmony with each other, weaving into a harmonious melody. The cicadas chirp endlessly, and the apes chirp a thousand times. A person who soars to the sky like an eagle in his official career, a glance at such a beautiful peak will calm his heart of fame and fortune; Those who spend their days planning and governing worldly affairs will be fascinated by the sight of such a beautiful valley.

The slanted branches of the trees shade the day, and even the day is as dark as dusk; The sparse branches are intertwined, and sometimes some light spots are missed.

The author Wu Jun, whose name is Shu Zhen, was a native of Wu Xinggu in the Liang Dynasty (now Anji, Zhejiang). studious and talented; The article is clear and ancient. Some people imitated his article and called it "Wu Junti".

His "Book with Zhu Yuansi" is a well-known essay.

The wind and smoke are clean, and the Tianshan Mountains are colorful. Drifting from the stream, anything. From Fuyang to Tonglu, a hundred miles, strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.

At the beginning of the book with Zhu Yuansi, he always talked about the beauty of the mountains and rivers from Fuyang to Tonglu, and then described the strange waters and strange mountains, especially the mountains, springs, plants, trees, birds and beasts on both sides of the Fuchun River, as well as the attraction of these scenes.

This letter written by Wu Jun to Zhu Yuansi about what he saw during the trip is only more than 140 words, which depicts the mountains and waters in the Fuchun River area vividly and vividly, making people leisurely and fascinated, as if they are in the strange mountains and different waters. The scenery is interesting, and the flow is beautiful and deep.

Most people who read "The Book with Zhu Yuansi" read her beautiful and picturesque writing, while some people can read the taste of life in it.

Writer Xue Xiaozen said:

In the world of people, we live too roughly, too rigorously and rigidly, and carry too many burdens for all kinds of names or vanity. Wu Jun is not degraded, and the sentence "the wind and smoke are clean" can't be written, the world is subtle, and it has been put down, and it can be seen through and through anything.

Natural landscapes purify the mind.

the lowest grade, "sleep in the car, climb the mountain to see the temple"; Medium grade, looking at flowers and trees, refreshing and pleasing to the eye; At the highest level, facing nature, being grateful and in awe.

The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Those who are engaged in economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget about it.

The kite, a bird of prey, is similar in shape to an eagle. 戾, to. Economy, planning, governance. Peep, look. Instead, return together, return.

Those who want to learn from the kite to ride the wind and clouds, in the face of the majestic peaks, their desire for fame and fortune will also be subsided; Those who work for all kinds of heavy tasks see the depths. When you travel through the valley, you will also be reluctant to forget to go home.

Let's go out into nature. "Drifting from the stream, anything", "Looking at the peak and resting the heart", "Peeking the valley and forgetting the rebellion".

When we read the prose of the ancients, we should not be satisfied with appreciating the beauty of the words and the exquisiteness of the techniques, but should taste the things behind the words and comprehend the realm reached by the author.

Original sentence:"There was not a hint of wind, the smoke was completely gone, and the sky was the same color as the mountains. (My boat) flutters with the river, the cherry blossoms flutter, sometimes to the east, sometimes to the west.

From Fuyang to Tonglu for a hundred miles (on the waterway), strange mountains and rivers are unique. "

Translation: "When they see these majestic peaks, those who strive to climb them calm their hearts for fame and fortune; Seeing these deep valleys, those who are busy with worldly affairs will linger. ”

Analysis: This sentence vividly describes the charm of the mountain and expresses the author's pride when he can see the land scenery of Menadong.

"The Book with Zhu Yuansi" maintains the characteristics of the prose. The article basically follows the requirements of the prose, mainly using four-character sentences and six-character sentences, and makes extensive use of dual sentences in the second half of the article, such as "The spring water is cold; Good birds chirp and stop each other, and they rhyme"; "The cicada is endless, and the ape is endless." This achieves a neat sentence structure, harmonious rhyme, contrasting ideas, and contrasting expressions, which are catchy to read and have a strong sense of rhythm.

The article "With Gu Zhangshu" describes the pleasing charm and spiritual interest of the landscape of his hometown, showing the author's joy of returning to nature and his active pursuit of a free life, and also reflecting his retreat from the world. Looking at the landscape from an aesthetic perspective, there are not only the heavy colors of the sunset and the melodious rhyme of the cranes and apes, all of which are in line with the author's unhindered free state of mind, thus creating a transcendent aesthetic world far from the pursuit of fame and fortune.

Wu Jun (469-520) was a Shuzhen. Wu Xing (now northwest of Anji County, Zhejiang) was born. Southern Dynasty Liang literary scholar.

From a humble background, he learned to be talented, and his writing was praised by the world. His career was not smooth, he once wrote "Qi Chunqiu", loyal to historical facts, and was dismissed by Emperor Wu of Liang by burning books.

Soon, he was edicted to revise the "General History", and the three emperors died before they could be completed. There are more than 130 poems in existence, among which many natural objects are used to express their feelings of anger and depression. "Gift to Wang Guiyang", "Yongci Grandma Rock Stone Pine", "Difficult to Walk" and so on are his representative works.

His artistic achievements such as "The Book of Zhu Yuansi" and "The Book of Gu Zhang" are relatively high, and they are famous pieces of writing scenes that have been recited by the past dynasties, "the style is clear and ancient", and it had a great impact on the literary world at that time. The people of the time followed suit and was known as "Wu Junti".

In addition, he is the author of a volume of the ** collection of aspiring monsters "Continuation of Qi Harmonic Records". The Book of Sui contains a collection of 20 volumes, all of which are lost. The Ming Dynasty has the "Wu Dynasty Qing Collection". There are biographies in "Liang Shu Literary Biography" and "Southern History: Literary Biography".