How to rewrite the book with Zhu Yuansi into a narrative

The world's best landscapes, ancient and modern push rich spring". Fuchun River Qililong, its beautiful scenery is like a fresh poem, an elegant painting; It is like a long river of history, pregnant with the splendid culture of the Chinese nation, so Fuchun River Qililong has the main characteristics of "green mountains, clear water, long history, and quiet environment", and enjoys the reputation of "Little Three Gorges". An empty sky, not even wind and smoke, let you move forward with the fluttering of the river, it is really unique and unique in the world!

The water of the Fuchun River is clear and white, and you can see it at a depth of thousands of feet, and you can see the swimming fish and small stones without any obstacles! The water is as fast as an arrow, and the waves are like a galloping horse!

The high mountains on both sides of the Fuchun River are full of chilling trees when you look at them, with steep roads, stretching upward, all straight into the sky, forming thousands of peaks! the sound of the spring hitting the stones; The birds chirped; The cicada never ceases to call; The same is true of apes, as if nature is having another huge party.

People who strive for fame and fortune like a kite flying into the sky, when they see this majestic mountain, they immediately stop their desire to pursue fame and fortune! When the rulers of government affairs see this beautiful valley, they will linger! The slanted branches of the tree shaded it above.

Even during the day, it is as dim as dusk, with sparse branches covering each other.

Nature has shown us a harmonious beauty, giving us abundant treasures and incomparable strength, and Fuchunjiang is giving us this beauty and complete expression! Zhu Yuansi admired!!

There was not a hint of wind, the smoke was completely gone, and the sky was the same color as the mountains. (My boat) drifts along the river, sometimes to the east, sometimes to the west. From Fuyang to Tonglu for a hundred miles (on the waterway), strange mountains and rivers are unique.

The water is all blue and white, and you can see the bottom even from a thousand feet deep, and you can see the fish and small stones at the bottom of the water. The turbulent river is faster than an arrow, and the stormy waves are like galloping horses.

On the high mountains on both sides of the river, all the trees grow verdant, revealing a chill. The mountains (overlapped) each compete with each other in their own terrain, as if to compete with each other to see who climbs the highest and stretches the farthest, thus forming countless peaks. The springs (in the mountains) crashed against the rocks and made a gurgling sound; The beautiful birds chirped in harmony with each other.

The cicadas kept calling, and the apes kept crying. Seeing these majestic peaks, those who tried their best to climb the heights calmed their hearts for fame and fortune; Seeing these deep valleys, those who are busy with worldly affairs will linger. The branches of the trees crisscrossed the sky above, and the forest was still dark in the daytime; In places where the branches are sparse, sometimes sunlight can be seen.

It's pretty much the same, you just need to combine the main points of the translation and narrative, and add some spoken language.

You can use this translation of classical Chinese as a benchmark and reference!

Just add a few modifiers before the nouns in this translation!

1. Writing techniques.

Writing water technique: a combination of movement and static. Metaphor, exaggerated rhetorical use.

Writing Technique: Static things are dynamic. Use of dual rhetoric. Side accent.

2. Introduction to the original text.

Book with Zhu Yuansi

It is a famous landscape sketch written by Wu Jun, a writer of the Liang Dynasty in the Southern Dynasty, and is a fragment of a letter written by Wu Jun to his friend Zhu Yuansi (a Song Yuansi, the word Yushan, life unknown), and is regarded as a masterpiece of writing scenes in the prose. The article not only contrasts the beauty of the landscape with people's feelings, but also expresses the disdain for fame and fortune, the boredom of officialdom and government affairs, and implicitly reveals the noble ambition of loving the beautiful nature and retreating from the world.

3. Brief analysis. This article describes what the author saw on the way from Tonglu to Fuyang by boat, and depicts the scenery of this section of the mountains and waters (Fuchun River), which creates a fresh and natural artistic conception, which makes people leisurely fascinated after reading, as if they also personally appreciated the beauty of the mountains and rivers in the meantime; At the same time, it also shows that he is addicted to the life of mountains and rivers. It exudes contempt for those who pursue fame and fortune, and implicitly conveys the noble interest of loving beautiful nature and retreating from the world.

4. About the author.

Wu Jun (469 520), the character Shuzhen, Wu Xing's hometown (now Anji, Zhejiang.

Person. He was a writer and historian during the Liang period of the Southern Dynasty. studious and talented, his poems are highly praised by Shen Yue.

His poems are fresh and mostly reflect social reality. His literary work is in writing scenes, poems and essays are self-contained, often describing landscapes, called "Wu Junti", creating a generation of poetry style. Received by Emperor Wu of Liang.

Appreciation, let it be invited. He is the author of 30 volumes of "Qi Chunqiu" and 90 volumes of "Book of the Later Han Dynasty" by Fan YeThere are twenty volumes of "Wu Junji", but unfortunately they have not been handed down. The preserved works are collected in "Quanliang Wen" and "Art and Literature Gathering".

Duality, exaggeration, contrast, rendering, contrast between movement and static, scene blending, contrast and other writing techniques.

Water is a combination of movement and static, and the mountain is to write static through visual, auditory and imagination, turning static into movement, and seeing the lofty and magnificent mountain. Side depictions are used in many places.

The first four sentences describe the slowness of the flow, and the last two sentences make full use of the rhetorical device of metaphor to vividly express the flow rapids.

The wind and smoke are all clean and ruined, and the Tianshan Mountains are colorful. Drifting from the stream, anything. From Fuyang to Tonglu, a hundred miles, strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.

The water is ethereal, and you can see the bottom. Swimming fish with fine stones, no obstruction to direct viewing. The turbulence is very fast, and the waves are rushing.

Sandwiched by the high mountains, all grow cold trees, compete with each other, and compete with each other;Striving for height, thousands of miles into Lu Feng. The spring water is rocky, and the sound is rattling;Good birds chirp and rhyme. The cicada is endless, and the ape is endless.

The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart;Those who are in the world are oblivious. Hengke is covered, and it is still dusk in the day;Sparse strips are intertwined, and sometimes the sun is seen.

The dust and smoke all cleared, and the sky and the mountains revealed the same clear color. Let the boat float with the river, let it go east or west. From Fuyang to Tonglu, a hundred miles of waterways, strange peaks and strange flowing water, unique in the world.

The river is all green, and you can see the bottom of the water at a depth of thousands of feet. You can see the fish swimming and the thin pebbles very clearly. The turbulent water is faster than the arrows, and the turbulent river waves are like galloping horses.

The high mountains between the two sides of the river are all covered with hardy evergreen trees. The mountains are competing upwards according to the terrain, comparing each other with higher and farther distances. Strive to reach high and point straight to the sky, forming thousands of peaks.

The spring water hits the stone Changqiao and makes a gurgling soundGood birds sing in harmony with each other, weaving into a harmonious melody. The cicadas chirp endlessly, and the apes chirp a thousand times. A person who soars to the sky like an eagle in his official career, a glance at such a beautiful peak will calm his heart of fame and fortune; Those who spend their days planning and governing worldly affairs will be fascinated by the sight of such a beautiful valley.

The slanted branches of the trees shade the day, and even the day is as dark as dusk; The sparse branches are intertwined, and sometimes some light spots are missed.

"The Book with Zhu Yuansi" is a famous landscape sketch written by Wu Jun, a Liang writer in the Southern Dynasty.

Full text: With Zhu Yuan Sishu (yǔ zhū yuán sī shū).

The wind and smoke are clean, and the Tianshan Mountains are colorful. Drifting from the stream, anything. From Fuyang to Tonglu, a hundred miles, strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.

fēng yān jù jìng，tiān shān gòng sè。cóng liú piāo dàng，rèn yì dōng xī。zì fù yáng zhì tóng lú yī bǎi xǔ lǐ，qí shān yì shuǐ，tiān xià dú jué。

The water is ethereal, and you can see the bottom. Swimming fish with fine stones, no obstruction to direct viewing. The turbulence is very fast, and the waves are rushing.

shuǐ jiē piāo bì，qiān zhàng jiàn dǐ。yóu yú xì shí，zhí shì wú àtuān shén jiàn，měng làng ruò bēn。

Sandwiched by the high mountains, all grow cold trees. Negative competition and mutual rejoicing; Strive for height, thousands of peaks. The spring water is rocky, and the sound is rattling;

jiā àn gāo shān，jiē shēng hán shù，fù shì jìng shàng，hù xiāng xuān miǎo，zhēng gāo zhí zhǐ，qiān bǎi chéng fē shuǐ jī shí，líng líng zuò xiǎng。

Good birds chirp and rhyme. The cicada is endless, and the ape is endless. The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart;

hǎo niǎo xiāng míng，yīng yīng chéng yù zé qiān zhuǎn bù qióng，yuán zé bǎi jiào wú jué。yuān fēi lì tiān zhě，wàng fēng xī xīn。

Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel. Hengke is covered, and it is still dusk in the day;Sparse strips are intertwined, and sometimes the sun is seen.

jīng lún shì wù zhě，kuī gǔ wàng fǎ kē shàng bì，zài zhòu yóu hūn shū tiáo jiāo yìng，yǒu shí jiàn rì。

"The Book with Zhu Yuansi" maintains the characteristics of the prose. The article basically follows the requirements of the prose, mainly using four-character sentences and six-character sentences, and makes extensive use of dual sentences in the second half of the article, such as "The spring water is cold; Good birds chirp and stop each other, and they rhyme"; The cicada is endless, and the ape is endless. This achieves a neat sentence structure, harmonious rhyme, contrasting ideas, and contrasting expressions, which are catchy to read and have a strong sense of rhythm.

The article "With Gu Zhangshu" describes the pleasing charm and spiritual interest of the landscape of his hometown, showing the author's joy of returning to nature and his active pursuit of a free life, and also reflecting his retreat from the world. Looking at the landscape from an aesthetic perspective, there are not only the heavy colors of the sunset and the melodious rhyme of the cranes and apes, all of which are in line with the author's unhindered free state of mind, thus creating a transcendent aesthetic world far from the pursuit of fame and fortune.

Wu Jun (469-520) was a Shuzhen. Wu Xing (now northwest of Anji County, Zhejiang) was born. Southern Dynasty Liang literary scholar.

From a humble background, he learned to be talented, and his writing was praised by the world. His career was not smooth, he once wrote "Qi Chunqiu", loyal to historical facts, and was dismissed by Emperor Wu of Liang by burning books.

Soon, he was edicted to revise the "General History", and the three emperors died before they could be completed. There are more than 130 poems in existence, among which many natural objects are used to express their feelings of anger and depression. "Gift to Wang Guiyang", "Yongci Grandma Rock Stone Pine", "Difficult to Walk" and so on are his representative works.

His artistic achievements such as "The Book of Zhu Yuansi" and "The Book of Gu Zhang" are relatively high, and they are famous pieces of writing scenes that have been recited by the past dynasties, "the style is clear and ancient", and it had a great impact on the literary world at that time. The people of the time followed suit and was known as "Wu Junti".

In addition, he is the author of a volume of the ** collection of aspiring monsters "Continuation of Qi Harmonic Records". The Book of Sui contains a collection of 20 volumes, all of which are lost. The Ming Dynasty has the "Wu Dynasty Qing Collection". There are biographies in "Liang Shu Literary Biography" and "Southern History: Literary Biography".

The smoke and fog on the river surface have dissipated, and the sky and distant mountains are showing the same color. (I take a boat) float with the current, let the boat go as a child.

To the east, sometimes to the west. From Fuyang to Tonglu, about 100 miles, the strange mountains and strange water, is a unique beauty in the world. The water is green and white, and the river water is crystal clear.

The fish and fine sand and gravel swimming at the bottom of the river can be seen clearly without any obstacles. The white rapids are faster than arrows, and the swift waves are like galloping horses. There are trees growing on the high mountains on both sides of the river, which makes people look cold; The mountains, by virtue of their (high) topography, are vying to reach upwards, and these mountains seem to be vying to stretch high and far.

The mountains) are all competing with each other for high and low, pointing straight to the sky, forming a thousand peaks. The water of the spring hits the rocks, making the sound of a clear spring. Beautiful birds chirp in harmony with each other, and the chirping is harmonious and beautiful.

The cicadas chirp for a long time, and the apes also keep calling for a long time. Those who fly to the sky like eagles (striving for high positions for fame and fortune) will calm their hearts when they see these majestic peaks; Those who govern social affairs will linger when they see these beautiful valleys. The slanted branches shaded it, and even during the day it was as dim as it was at dusk; The sparse branches are intertwined, and sometimes sunlight can be seen (through the gaps in the leaves).