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1. Essay comments should not be too long. The student base in rural primary schools is different from that of urban students, and some students' essays are only about 100 words, but I found that some teachers write comments that are longer than students' essays. When the composition is sent, the student's eyes are red, but they only glance at it roughly, or stuff the desk, or look straight ......Isn't the teacher's hard work in vain?

There are some wonderful parts of the article, I am interested to know more details, this needs your help, I believe you will fulfill my wish. When students see such comments, they know that their composition still has merit, and they believe that they will be able to make it more concrete than the previous essay by revising it.

2. Essay comments should not be too esoteric and abstract, and should vary from grade to grade and from student to student. Rural students have a narrow range of knowledge and do not have a good understanding of some scientific terms, and some teachers write comments that do not care about poor students and excellent students, such as: "The composition is not vivid and specific enough, and the cohesion of the context is not handled very well."

Some students have to look up the dictionary before they know what "cohesion" is. As far as I know, there are very few students who look up the dictionary, and the rural students are not bold enough, so they slip through the composition training again and again with a lot of incomprehension. When students have wasted their good time, how can teachers have peace of mind?

In the face of such a situation, before writing, consider the differences of students and write simpler and clearer comments, which will definitely have different degrees of gain for both teachers and students.

The writing of this article is better, and he writes about his loneliness such as a high ruler and yearning through the heavenly scenery, but this article seems very monotonous, he wants to abstract his emotions from the scenery in the sky, but he does not write deeply, and the article is scumbag and does not contain deep meaning, and it reads some.

It's well written, the sentence is smooth, and if you change it, remove the previous sentence and it will be perfect.

First, it can improve our observation ability.

When writing an essay on looking at pictures, before putting pen to paper, you should first observe the picture in front of you, so that you can write the article. How to observe? What to look for first?

What to observe after that? What are the main observations? Which ones are secondary?

In this way, after long-term training in picture reading and composition, the observation ability can be exercised and improved.

Second, we can use our imagination.

Looking at the picture composition, we are not like a camera to take pictures of the content of the picture, but to make it a central, organized, specific and complete structure of the article, so that the characters in the picture come alive, so that the story in the picture has a beginning and an end, we must through association and imagination.

Picture composition is the foundation of propositional composition, which is a comprehensive training of observation, thinking and expression ability, and occupies a very important position in the composition training of primary school. In some provinces, cities, districts and counties, in the primary school graduation examination, and even in the high school entrance examination and college entrance examination, the form of picture composition often appears. Therefore, it is very important to train good picture composition from elementary school.

There are two types of picture essays in terms of form: single-picture essays and picture-linked essays. Single-picture composition requires to focus on the central expression of the picture, accurately and hierarchically write the content of the picture, and the picture composition requires to first understand the content of each picture, study the connection and changes between the picture, and then grasp the main content of these pictures as a whole.

Picture composition is divided from the way of expression. It can be divided into several categories, such as narrative, descriptive, illustrative, and rational. In primary school, the main training is to train narrative picture writing, but descriptive, illustrative and relatively simple and rational picture reading composition should not be neglected.

So, how do you write a picture essay? Picture composition is also composition, it is the same as other forms of composition, it requires to achieve mental health, clear center, specific content, clear organization, appropriate details, smooth sentences, neat writing, pay attention not to write typos, and use common punctuation marks. However, after all, a picture essay is a picture essay, and it has its own differences from others, and it has its own characteristics to look at pictures.

We believe that in order to write a good-looking picture essay, we should start from the following aspects: