If you find the right logical errors in the small essay of the management joint entrance examination

1. Analysis of the validity of the argument.

2) Points are given according to the degree of argumentation, article structure and language expression, accounting for 14 points.

Divided into four categories of volumes are awarded:

Volume 1 (12 14 marks): strong argument or rebuttal, well-structured, well-organized, concise and fluent language.

Category 2 (8 11 points): The argument or refutation is relatively strong, the structure is still complete, the organization is clear, the sentences are relatively smooth, and there are a few language problems.

Category 4 (0 3 points): obviously deviates from the topic, the content is empty, the organization is not clear, and the sentences are seriously incomprehensible.

3) Points will be deducted if the word count is not met, or if there is a typo. The writing is neat and clear, and 2 points are added as appropriate, but the total score must not exceed 30 points.

The scoring criteria for justifying validity analysis require that a defect be identified and then further analyzed why it became a defect. Finding the flaws is the key to solving this type of question. In addition, in the grading grade of the test paper, it can be seen that the degree of analysis and argumentation will also affect the level of the score, so this aspect cannot be ignored in the usual practice.

2. Essays.

1) Score according to the three aspects of content, structure and language.

Volume 1 (30 35): Profound in conception, prominent in the center, sufficient in argumentation, complete in structure, and fluent in writing.

Category 2 (24 29): The center is clear, the structure is more complete, the hierarchy is clearer, and the sentences are smooth.

Three types of volumes (18 23): the center is basically clear, the structure is still complete, the sentences are relatively smooth, and there are a few language problems.

Category 4 volumes (1l 17): the center is not clear, the structure is not complete, the sentences are not smooth, and there are many language problems.

Five types of papers (less than 10 points): off-topic, incomplete structure, chaotic levels, and incomprehensible sentences.

2) 2 points will be deducted for missing questions.

3) 1 point will be deducted for every 3 typos, and no more than 2 points will be deducted for duplicate mistakes.

4) If the roll is untidy and the punctuation is incorrect, 1 2 points will be deducted as appropriate.

Judging from the grading criteria, it is bound to be unworkable if you want to write a essay directly without examining the topic. The meaning comes from the text, and the text returns to the meaning, so as to complete the reincarnation of the writing of the essay. The grade of the test paper and the corresponding scores, from five types of papers to one type of paper, although there is a huge difference, but it is also an objective evaluation of the effort.

Before this, the dream of going to school was waiting, and after that, the dream of going to school was approaching!

My dream of going to school is probably more realistic for me, but it ...... for othersI think that a person's dream of going on to higher education has a certain degree of reality for the individual, but it is ......It's just that ...... can't be achieved yet

My dream of going to higher education is very good, and it is the beauty when I was admitted to a key high school. Isn't it nice to greet your parents with smiles and encouragement at the school gate, and to talk to your parents on the way home. It's the chic of walking out of the school gate, letting the breeze blow on the face, a touch of gentleness, it's really cool......

You can follow the train of thought.

In the blink of an eye, I have been promoted to junior high school, and I am still nostalgic for the life of elementary school, I have been promoted to junior high school, I used to think about junior high school when I was in elementary school, because I saw my brothers and sisters in junior high school and high school readers, it was very enviable, and I realized that it was very difficult to read high school in junior high school, let alone high school, my mother said that I should study well in junior high school, in order to enter a good high school, in order to enter a good university, in order to be admitted to a good university; I think it's necessary to get into a good university, but sometimes it's also important to get together with my elementary school classmates. Because after all, after graduating from elementary school, sometimes I want to go out with my classmates and see the elementary school teacher or something, which is also the right thing, after all, it is our enlightenment teacher.

I think that primary school teachers are our important teachers, we should have time to see them, without our teachers, we would not have the foundation to learn today's mathematics, English, Chinese ......

Although we graduated from elementary school, we still keep in touch with my elementary school classmates often, and sometimes we even come out to meet and see the primary school teachers together. I have a classmate named Yang Chang, who is now in junior high school in Lengjiang No. 7 Middle School, and he will go to Loudi to live in a few years, and now we are in the same building, because I am in a boarding school, so I rarely have time to meet him, but when I am on vacation, I often meet with him.

I really want to finish the three years of junior high school and three years of high school as soon as possible, and be admitted to the best university as soon as possible!