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Updated on culture 2024-03-07
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  1. Anonymous users2024-02-06

    1..The wind kept blowing, turning slightly to the northeast, and he knew that this meant that it would not abate. The old man looked ahead, but he could not see the sails, nor the boat, nor the smoke coming out of the boat. Only.

    Flew out from the bow of the ship, and flew away in a hurry to both sides, and there were clusters of yellow.

    He couldn't even see a bird.

    Comment: This is a negative paragraph.

    It seems that there is no scene, but in fact there is a scene, how the old man wants to see all this, he is too lonely, but he doesn't see anything, so he is in love.

    2.Big. Began to surround quickly.

    The boat swam and wound the cable in.

    The old man held the steel fork high in his right hand, and the moment it jumped out of the water, he threw it at its heart with all his might, and a wail ended the life of the big fish, and it floated quietly on the surface of the water ......

    Comments: My heart also fell to the ground like a big rock. I greatly admired the old man's fearless and persevering spirit, and although he knew that his opponent was strong, he did not flinch in the slightest, but rose to the occasion. Because of this spirit, old.

    to get this.

    of victory. We also have to learn to be old in life.

    The spirit of doing things without fear of difficulties can lead to success.

    3.One fish food was sent to a depth of forty inches, a second fish food was sent to a depth of seventy-five inches, and the third and fourth fish envoys were sent to a hundred and twenty-five inches below the sea, respectively.

    Comments: "The visual image produced has a strong sense of picture, which is inseparable from the author's application of some cinematic techniques. The work was used at the beginning.

    The camera shows the sail and the old man's face. The close-up view is most fully reflected in the details of the old man's fish food: the action of putting the fishing line one by one is so careful and real.

    4.Excellence is not made for failure," he said, "and a person can be destroyed, but not defeated." ”

    defended the soul and dignity of the human person" - undoubtedly this is exactly that.

    The values of the ** kill big.

    The life of the old man is that of the elderly.

    The big fish and the old man became sharks again.

    And sharks will eventually become natural.

    This is. Stubborn.

    Reflection of the complex. If life means a sacrifice, there is nothing humanity can do about it. But.

    He was extremely sensitive and self-respecting, and he insisted on making the old man's actions meaningful, and although the old man's efforts became a victim of nature, the old man's spirit triumphed, his.

    Beyond the previous life at sea, beyond the material ending. At this level, the old man has achieved harmony in his soul and is no longer depressed.

  2. Anonymous users2024-02-05

    I don't know what kind of sentence you are talking about? I may be able to help you if I ask Xu, and by the way, I will send you a Nalan word: If life is only as first seen, why bother painting a fan in the autumn wind; Write about love.

  3. Anonymous users2024-02-04

    If a person does not think beyond the environment, he cannot do much.

    To love someone means to rejoice in his happiness .

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