Appreciation of the original passage of the Water Margin 20

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1, Lin Chong looked back, Hong Jiaotou rushed in, lifted the stick, and came down again. Lin Chong saw that his steps were out of order, so he jumped the stick from the ground, and Hong Jiao's head was caught off guard, and in that jump, he turned around, and the stick swept straight on the bones of Hong Jiao's head, skimmed the stick, and fell to the ground.

Chai Jin was overjoyed and told him to bring the wine quickly. Everyone laughed in unison. Hong Jiaotou struggled. All the villagers smiled, helped Hong Jiao's head, were ashamed, and went out of the village.

Appreciation: This passage is an action description, narrating the scene of Lin Chong hitting Hong Jiaotou, reflecting that our protagonist is wonderful and beautiful, and he is above board.

2. When I looked back at the sun, I gradually fell, Wu Song walked all the way, and the alcohol was attacked, and he became scorched. With a whistle stick in one hand and a chest in front of him in the other, he staggered straight through the woods. When he saw a big bluestone with a tart, he leaned the whistle stick to the side and turned his body over, but when he was about to sleep, he saw a gust of wind coming.

It turns out that in the world, the clouds are born from the dragon, and the wind is born from the tiger. When the gust of wind passed, I could only hear a sound from behind the chaotic tree, and a big white-fronted insect jumped out. Wu Song saw it and shouted:

Ahh "I turned over from the bluestone, and I took the whistle stick in my hand and flashed it on the side of the bluestone.

Appreciation: Here the author only used two sentences to set off the atmosphere and mood at this time: "When I looked back at the sun, I gradually fell", and Wu Song "staggered straight through the chaotic woods", which not only wrote the time of tiger activities, but also wrote the environment where tigers were infested.

In two sentences, a terrifying and sad atmosphere and mood are expressed, making people feel that a live tiger will suddenly jump out of the here and now, and the "flash" highlights Wu Song's fast movements.

3. The big insect was hungry and thirsty, so he pressed his two paws on the ground slightly, pounced on his body, and pulled them down from mid-air. said that it was too late, it was fast, Wu Song saw the big insect pounce, only a flash, flashing behind the big insect. It was the most difficult to see people behind the big insect, so he put his front paws on the ground and lifted his waist and crotch, and Wu Song only dodged and hid to the side.

When the big insect saw that he couldn't lift him, he roared, but it was like a thunderbolt in the middle of the day, and it shook the hill and moved, and the iron rod was also like a tiger's tail, and it was upside down and only cut it. Wu Song flashed to the side again.

Appreciation: Written very expressively, writing about the fight between people and tigers, writing about the tiger's ability to pounce, lift, and cut three times, and the roar of the sound of the mountain, a live real tiger jumped on the paper.

This clip is very good, the point is what the protagonist's wit and bravery, strong and never admit defeat.

Outwitted the Birth Gang Pan Jinlian Ximen Qing.