Urgently ask for an excerpt from the 10th paragraph of the Water Margin and appreciate the kneeling

1, I was framed for evil to Captain Gao, and I fell in love with a lawsuit, and I was assassinated here.

Appreciation: Lin Chong was originally framed by Gao Yu and sent to the army, but he said that he had a bad relationship with Gao Yu and did not dare to express his anger, which vividly showed Lin Chong's character of Gou An, a lower-level feudal **, who swallowed his anger in the social life of officialdom in order to survive.

2. It is the severe winter weather, the clouds are dense, and the wind is gradually rising, but it has already swept up the next day's heavy snow.

Appreciation: Write beautiful sentences, words such as gold, describe the tomb into the gods, write soothing and calm, fine taste such as the environment, a volume, the snow flying in the sky soothing and solid.

4. Enter the temple gate, and then cover the door, there is only a big stone on the side, and the general will come over and lean against the door.

1. When I looked back at the sun, it gradually fell, Wu Song walked all the way, and the alcohol attacked, and he became scorched. With a whistle stick in one hand and a chest in front of him in the other, he staggered straight through the woods. When he saw a big bluestone with a tart, he leaned the whistle stick to the side and turned his body over, but when he was about to sleep, he saw a gust of wind coming.

It turns out that in the world, the clouds are born from the dragon, and the wind is born from the tiger. When the gust of wind passed, I could only hear a sound from behind the chaotic tree, and a big white-fronted insect jumped out. Wu Song saw it and shouted:

Ahh "I turned over from the bluestone, and I took the whistle stick in my hand and flashed it on the side of the bluestone.

Appreciation: Here the author only used two sentences to set off the atmosphere and mood at this time: "When I looked back at the sun, I gradually fell", and Wu Song "staggered straight through the chaotic woods", which not only wrote the time of the tiger's activities, but also wrote the environment of the tiger's infestment.

In two sentences, a terrifying and sad atmosphere and mood are expressed, making people feel that a live tiger will suddenly jump out of the here and now, and the "flash" highlights Wu Song's fast movements.

2. The big insect was hungry and thirsty, so he pressed his two paws on the ground slightly, pounced on his body, and pulled it down from mid-air. said that it was too late, it was fast, Wu Song saw the big insect pounce, only a flash, flashing behind the big insect. It was the most difficult to see people behind the big insect, so he put his front paws on the ground and lifted his waist and crotch, and Wu Song only dodged and hid to the side.

When the big insect saw that he couldn't lift him, he roared, but it was like a thunderbolt in the middle of the day, and it shook the hill and moved, and the iron rod was also like a tiger's tail, and it was upside down and only cut it. Wu Song flashed to the side again.

Appreciation: Written very expressively, writing about the fight between people and tigers, writing about the tiger's ability to pounce, lift, and cut three things, and the roar of the sound of the mountain, a live real tiger jumped on the paper.

3, Wu Song pressed the big worm's mouth straight into the yellow mud pit, and the big worm ate Wu Song and lost some strength. Wu Song grabbed the top flower skin tightly with his left hand, stole out his right hand, raised a fist the size of a hammer, and did his best to fight. Fifty or seventy punches were punched, and blood burst out from the eyes, mouth, nose, and ears of the big worm.

That Wu Song did his best in the past, and with the martial arts in his chest, he beat a bunch of big bridge insects in half a break, but it seemed to be blocking a brocade bag.

Appreciation: After several fights, the tiger's majesty gradually decreased, and in the end, how to be held down by Wu Song, how to struggle, how to be killed by Wu Song, written vividly and vividly, very realistic.

4, Chao Gai and others don't want Lao Hail to do such a big thing! robbed the Birthday Gang, killed the father-in-law, and injured He Tao to observe; He also damaged many officers, soldiers, and horses, and captured Huang An alive on the mountain Such a crime is the deed of exterminating the nine clans! Although they are persecuted by others, they have to be a last resort, but they cannot be forgiven in the law.

Appreciation: There are two messages conveyed in this psychological activity: first, Song Jiang, as a person who understands the law in the imperial court, knows that Chao Gai has committed a series of incidents, and every thing is the crime of the Nine Clans. Second, Song Jiang was worried about Chao Gai and others, afraid that they would be negligent and misguided, and there was a faint worry in his heart.

Hong Jiaotou"Put the stick to make a bang, spit out a portal, and call it a fire to burn the sky"Seeing that he was only cowardly, he was bullied into doing it in his stomach, and he was waiting to use the stick when he lifted the stick. Chai Jin shouted:"。

Let's stay. "Tell the dealer to take out a piece of silver, weighing twenty-five taels, and come to the front at no time. Chai:

Jin Naiyan:"The two heads of the sect competed, not the other, and the silver ingot was a profit. and if he wins, he shall take the money.

Chai Jin was in his heart, as long as Lin Chong showed his ability, he deliberately threw the silver on the ground. The head of the Hong Sect was deeply strange to Lin Chong, and he wanted to fight for this big silver, and he was afraid of losing his spirit, so he made a big effort to make a stick to the ground, spit out a portal, and called it a fire to burn the sky. Lin Chong thought:

Chai Daguan only needs me to win him in his heart. "also horizontal stick, make a portal, spit out a momentum, and call the grass to find the snake potential. Hong Jiaotou shouted:

Come, come, come! "Then the lid of the rod will come in. Lin Chong stepped back, and Hong Jiaotou rushed in, lifted the stick and came down again.

Lin Chong saw that his steps were out of order, and Lin Chong jumped the stick from the ground, and Hong Jiaotou was caught off guard, so he jumped and turned around, and the stick swept straight on the bones of Hong Jiao's head, skimmed the stick, and fell to the ground. Chai Jin was overjoyed and told him to bring the wine quickly. Everyone laughed in unison.

Where is the head of the Hong sect struggling to get up? The bankers smiled and helped. Hong Jiaotou was embarrassed and went out of the village.

Appreciation:) The passage also shows the artistic characteristics of the author's language, 1) in the writing style is good at using intricate techniques to avoid flat and direct description. It's going to be a competition, but it's not a competition, eat and drink first, and start the competition seriously, but it's half-truths and half-truths, and finally it's a real competition.

2) Concise and strong, only more than 100 words are used to write the competition process very vividly, and the different personalities of the characters are also about to come out.