Because he has read poetry and books since he was a child, he is so knowledgeable. Modify the sick s

Revision: Reading more good books can enrich our understanding. Sentence Type:

Improper matching. The collocation of "enrichment" and "knowledge" in the sentence is reasonable, but "improvement" mostly refers to the improvement of quality and quality, and it is inappropriate to collocate with "knowledge" here.

Improper collocation of the type of sick sentence:

1. Improper subject-verb collocation.

For example, the rustling of the waves and the glittering silver of the sea make for what a beautiful picture. ("Waves" and "sea" are both subjectives, in which "waves" cannot form a subject-verb relationship with the predicate "composition", and "rustling waves" should be removed or a subject-verb relationship should be formed).

2. Improper collocation of moving guests.

Example: Warriors brave heavy rain and muddy paths to move quickly. ("Risking" and "path" do not constitute a predicate-object relationship).

3. Improper collocation of additional ingredients with the central language.

Example: We have carefully studied the suggestions of our employees. I humbly solicited the opinions of the experts. （'Serious'As an adverbial, it cannot be modified or restricted'Research', which can be changed to'Seriously'、'Be cautious'etc.).

4. Improper collocation of subject and object meanings.

Example: We firmly believe that one day China will become a developed country in industry and agriculture. (The object of this sentence is a subject-verb phrase, but the backbone of this subject-verb short job is "industry and agriculture become the state.")

The meaning of the object of subject is obviously inappropriate, and "country" could be replaced by "industry", etc.).

Sentence modification:

1. Understand several common types of sick sentences, especially the 6 types pointed out in the "Examination Instructions": improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete or redundant components, chaotic structure, unclear meaning, and illogical. Be familiar with the usual way of correcting sentences.

2. When modifying the sentence, the original meaning must be retained, and it cannot be changed. Because the purpose of modifying the sick sentence is to make the sentence expression accurate and the sentence clear.

3. Start from a grammatical point of view and grasp the main stem of the sentence. Whether it is a single sentence or a compound sentence, if you grasp the main stem of the sentence, you will also grasp the basic meaning of the sentence, which is conducive to retaining the original meaning when changing the sentence. When grasping the trunk, pay attention to identify whether there is something wrong with the trunk, such as whether there are defective components, improper collocation of subject-verb and verb-object, etc.

Improper matching.

"Enrichment" can be paired with "knowledge", but "knowledge" cannot be "improved".

Try modifying it.

Reading more good books can enrich our knowledge and improve our abilities.

Words are mismatched. Enrich your knowledge and improve your level.

Reading more good books can enrich our knowledge and improve our writing.

Reading more good books instead can enrich our knowledge and improve our writing.

Reading more good books can enrich our knowledge.

It is the level that removes and improves, and raises.

Reading more good books can enrich our knowledge.

Go to Nima than to come to embarrassment.

It is revised as: Reading more good books can enrich our knowledge and improve our understanding.

The ** of the sentence here is an inappropriate version. The collocation of "enrichment" and "knowledge" in the sentence is reasonable, but "improving" mostly refers to the improvement of the quality and quality of lead mining, and the collocation with "knowledge" here is inappropriate, and can be modified as: reading more good books can enrich our knowledge and improve our understanding.

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Revised to: We must study hard, in order to become learned people.

Explanation and analysis: According to the original sentence "We must study hard in order to become knowledgeable and learned", you can find repetitive expressions. The meanings of "knowledgeable" and "knowledgeable" are repeated, so here we only need to delete "knowledge" and modify it to:

We have to study hard in order to become learned.

This sentence "read more, write more" and "accumulate over time" conflict, just remove one.

Only by reading and writing more can you learn the language well and modify the sentences as follows:

1. Only by reading and writing more can you learn Chinese well.

2. Only by accumulating time can you learn Chinese well.

The fault with this sentence is logical: "Modify the sick sentence."

It belongs to "learning the language well", and the words "modify the sick sentence" can be removed or the words ", in particular, can be added in front of it.

It is revised to read: Reading more books will help us improve our academic performance and broaden our knowledge.

Explanation and analysis: According to the original sentence "reading more is conducive to improving our academic performance and knowledge", it can be found that the unsmooth place in the sentence is "improving academic performance and knowledge", and it can be found that the words in the sentence are not matched, and "improving" and "knowledge" are not properly matched and deleted", and", and "broadening" is added before "knowledge", which is revised as: reading more books is conducive to improving our academic performance and broadening our knowledge.

Revised to: The Great Wall and the Palace Museum are the monuments that Chinese and foreign tourists yearn for, and the Nanjing Yangtze River Bridge is not a monument, but a modern building.

**Analysis: The associated words are misused, and only ...... are used......

Suggestion: Only by studying hard can we learn our homework well.

Change only to only, and add a handle after the can.

In order to do your homework and learn your homework well!