The joyful laughter startled the foraging birds to change the sentence without changing the meaning

1.The birds flew into the valley. (changed to anthropomorphic sentence) - the bird went back to its home in the valley.

2.The sad bird sings the song it sang last year and listens to the lights (abbreviated sentence) - the bird sings.

3.The bird's best friend, the tree, is gone, and she is sad. (Changed to a rhetorical question) - how can the bird's best friend tree not be sad when she is gone?

The birds smiled and flew into the valley.

The birds sing to the lights.

Isn't she sad that the bird's best friend tree is gone?

The birds sing to the lights.

Isn't she sad that the bird's best friend tree is gone?

The sentence should be revised to read: "A little bird chirps and flies in the sky".

There are two errors in this sentence:

First, the measure word of the bird is used incorrectly, the bird is generally one, two, three, and the measure word "one" cannot be used.

2. The original meaning of this sentence should be to emphasize "the bird flies", not "the bird calls", so "chirping" should be used as an adverbial for "flying by", that is, "twittering and flying".

So the revised sentence is: "A little bird chirps and flies in the sky".

The problem with the phrase "a bird flies over the sky and chirps" is that there is an additional dynamic particle "over", because the sky is boundless, and the bird can never fly "over". The modified sentence could look like this: "A little bird is flying in the sky, chirping".

Hello, the birds are chirping in the branches.

Modified: Birds chirping in the branches.

Analysis: Twitter and shouting are repeated, typical words are cumbersome, just delete one.

The bird chirped ,—— added a sentence.

Topic: The bird is chirping,——

Additional sentence: The birds chirped, and the whole forest was bustling.

The bird chirped, as if playing a cheerful tune.

This sentence uses anthropomorphic rhetorical devices.

The chirping of the lark in the original sentence is personified, and it is possible to have a conversation like a human. The anthropomorphic rhetorical method is to personify things, to turn things that do not have human actions and feelings into things that do not have human actions and feelings.

The lark is endowed with the characteristics of human behavior, vividly expresses the author's emotions, makes the reader feel that the lark described is more lively and close, and makes the article more vivid and vivid.

"The joyful laughter startled the foraging birds" instead of the words:

The joyful laughter startled the foraging birds away.

The word sentence is an active verb predicate sentence in Chinese. This form of sentence is also called "disposition" because the action indicated by the verb "disposes" the object, such as changing its position or state. The basic structure is: subject + "put" + object + action.

Climb big trees, drill jungles, laugh, play, laugh, and startle birds.

1. The birds chirp excitedly in the branches, as if singing about the hard work of the farmer's uncle.

2. The bird chirps excitedly in the branches, as if calling for its mother, who has gone to hunt for itself.

3. The birds chirp excitedly in the branches, as if thanking all those who love them.

4. The birds chirp excitedly in the branches, as if they are sad and angry that humans have destroyed their homes. 5. The birds are crying excitedly in the branches, as if singing the beautiful rivers and mountains of the motherland.

The birds chirped excitedly in the branches, as if singing for the picturesque beauty.

In the early morning, a cute little bird stands on a branch and chirps happily, as if welcoming people passing by.

The birds chirped, and the whole grove was bustling.

The bird chirped, as if playing a cheerful tune.

The birds chirped, as if singing a beautiful song in the trees.

The bird chirped, mischievously showing off its beautiful singing voice.

The birds chirped and invited all the little animals of the forest.