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Personally, I don't think that ending you added is very suitable for this article. You end this paragraph with a discussion about not having a heart for embankments, which could be used as a paragraph of the article.
Topic: Safe and Complete.
The ending can probably be like this: when we improve our safety awareness, we can truly become joyful in life and protect ourselves; When we have a sense of safety, we can truly assume the responsibility entrusted to us by the society. Peace, so that we can be perfect!
When we are truly comfortable using the skills to keep ourselves safe, our lives can be perfect!
That's probably what the end means, and in my personal opinion, the central thesis of your article is not very clear!
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1. "The trip to the avenue is also ......Speak of faith and harmony. ”
This layer is a programmatic explanation of the "Datong" society.
2. "The deceased does not kiss his relatives alone......You don't have to do it for yourself. ”
This layer expounds the basic characteristics of the "Datong" society.
3. "It's a reason to close up and not prosper......It is said to be the same. ”
This layer is the general summary of the whole text. The article chooses a special way of summarizing, that is, comparing the real society with this ideal "Datong" society, so as to logically point out that many dark phenomena in the real society, such as conspiracy, theft of property, and rebellion, will cease to exist in the "Datong" society, and will be replaced by a peaceful and stable situation in which "outsiders do not close themselves."
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Unconsciously, once again facing "graduation". Another "graduation", different times, different ages, and different feelings. Looking back on the three years that have passed in a flash, I have cried, laughed, but I have spent them happily, and now, I am about to graduate.
The word "graduation" is loaded with a lot, including the ignorance of the year, the efforts of the year, and the ...... of the yearMany of those years are about to get a result tomorrow in July. Don't look at the year, but at the moment, it is still loaded with the hopes of parents, the expectations of teachers, and the ......own future.
I always want to ask, in the fourth year of junior high school, do I still have the opportunity to giggle all day long? This is loaded with a lot of the past, a lot of the present, a lot of the future. In the fourth year of junior high school, is it possible for me to discuss this boring soap opera with my classmates in front of the TV?
Is it still possible to discuss the movements of such and such a star with friends in front of the newsstand? The answer is obvious – no. So the upcoming "graduation" is still loaded with countless pressures.
Think about the "graduation" three years ago, although it is a graduation, but it is still spent in hip-hop, but now, I am no longer the child I used to be, and I also know that in the next year, hip-hop-ha will no longer exist, and the rest is only hard work, hard work! I have fantasized about countless "patterns" for me to enter the graduating class, but when I actually stood at the door of the graduating class, I realized that this is not something that can be used to "think". It's only when you're really in this space that you can really feel something.
To say that you are not afraid is absolutely false; To say that I dare not and to be inaccurate may not be able to express this in the words I have: nervousness, happiness, excitement ......Others, unable to express. Remember an essay from three years ago:
The content of the essay is still vivid, but I am about to say goodbye to middle school, and the "graduating class" is the final sprint point for me to say goodbye to the results of middle school. All living and non-living things make a sound: jump over, you have to jump over!
At this time, we suddenly understood the cruelty of the high school entrance examination. The high school entrance examination is elimination! In front of the high school entrance examination, all illusions seem pale and helpless.
In front of the high school entrance examination, the only one who can help himself is himself. We who are about to face the graduating class, whether we like it or don't like it, we all have to face it and embrace it. Whether we want it or not, it is already in front of our eyes, so we can only hold our heads high and declare war on it - on the fourth day of the first month, I am here.
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I write myself.
I had big bright eyes, black hair, and a skinny face. Looks clever.
I have many shortcomings. The biggest disadvantages are: slow eating, slow writing, procrastination in handing in homework, slow dressing and washing ...... faceOne day at noon, my mother and I started eating at 12 o'clock, and halfway through eating, I couldn't help but run to the living room to watch TV and eat at the same time, and by the time I finished eating, it was already half past 12.
Once, I was writing, my mother was doing the laundry, and my mother finished washing a plate of clothes, and I only wrote a few words. That time, my mother beat me severely, saying that I had no sense of time and no self-control at all. Slowness has become a habit, and in order to get rid of this bad habit, my mother has set me time for everything I do.
I've changed a lot now, but I'm going to keep working hard to get rid of this "slow" bad thing.
I also have the advantage of using my brain, and I actively raise my hand to speak in class. Once, Teacher Yan asked, "What is 832 divided by four?" I was the first to raise my hand and say, "Two hundred and eight," and Mr. Yan said, "Correct, awesome." ”
That's me, a smart little boy.
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I am a ——— kid and love ———
I'm such a kid, hehe, I'll make you like me more.
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Playing badminton.
Yesterday, my sister came to our house to play. Her badminton skills are so good that I was not convinced and decided to try it against my sister.
Early this morning, my sister woke me up, and we came downstairs with rackets and shuttlecocks.
The air downstairs is so fresh, with a smell of earth in the morning mist, do a chest expansion exercise to take a deep breath, and smell the faint fragrance of plum blossoms wafting in the distance. I couldn't be more excited.
After my sister and I chose the position to play badminton, we stood face to face at each end. First, my sister serves. I saw my sister gently throw the ball into the air with her left hand, and catch the ball firmly with her right hand holding the racket, and hit the ball to my side at once.
My sister played very high, so I had to lift my racket up to catch the ball. With a "ping" sound, the shuttlecock flew quickly to my sister's side. The ball I played was a little crooked, which caught my sister off guard.
However, my sister made a "sharp turn", cleverly caught the ball, and delivered it to me accurately. My sister's ball flew so fast that I didn't react and didn't catch it. Alas, I lost this game.
The next few rounds, I still lost. My sister gave me a "flying dragon transfer" or something from time to time, which caught me off guard, and I really convinced my sister.
My sister's badminton skills are really worthy of the name, and today I finally saw it. Although I lost this match, I was still happy in my heart because I finally knew my sister's "trick" to play badminton. It's a secret, my sister told me to keep it a secret, of course I can't tell you, hehe!
My badminton skills will definitely increase greatly under my sister's "secret". It was truly an unforgettable morning.
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