I have written an essay on the Sail and I would like to ask you to comment on it.

Another day passed, and the master put me, Sister Pocker, Little Mushroom, Brother Fire Monkey, and Brother Julian into a large backpack, saying that he was going to hunt the rare elf, Little Bean Sprouts. The master set Sister Pokel as the first choice, and gave one of us 10,000 refinements, and the rest of my brothers and sisters learned new skills, and I, not only learned new skills, but also evolved into a cloth flower, and the flower on my head was completely in full bloom, and even Sister Pocker praised me for being much more beautiful than before.

Ready to continue, the host took us, got on the spaceship, and flew towards Cross. When I arrived at Cross Star, I entered the Clos Star Swamp, the little bean sprouts had not yet appeared, the master took the opportunity to put on the tracks, and just put them on, suddenly, the little bean sprouts appeared in the swamp, and the master sent Pokle sister to fight, and his subordinates were merciful, and the advanced capture capsule, ok!Sister Pokel immediately handed over the little bean sprouts to the owner, who was very happy to reward Sister Pocker with 5,000 experience points, and then asked me if I would like to merge with the little bean sprouts and become Lisa Bubu.

If I can serve my master, of course I would like to! So, the master took me and the little bean sprouts to the laboratory, put them in the fusion reincarnation warehouse, and after a while, the Yuan Shen Bead composed of me and the little bean sprouts fused fell into the master's hands, absorbed the energy, put it into the no no to hatch, and received the elf a day later.

A day later, I stood in front of my master with a new look, and the master decided to take a risk - let me fight Rios. In order to ensure that I do not fail, the master first gave me 50,000 experience, and then asked me if I was sure to win, I said confidently: I will not fail, please believe me.

After listening to my words, the master was relieved. I came to the side of Ríos, golden branches and green leaves, super strong absorption. Get!

The host found out and rewarded me with 20,000 points of experience and let me sleep well.

Time flies, 3 days have passed in the blink of an eye, and as soon as I get up, the master has given me another task - to defeat Axia. For me, Akxia is not easy to mess with, Akxia is the king of the ice system. Anyway, I came to Akhya.

But a flash of the Holy Spirit in Axia defeated me, and I returned to my master in despair, who comforted me and said, "It doesn't matter, as long as you do your best, you are still the best." The master's words greatly encouraged me, and since then, I have trained harder.

This is me, an ordinary Sail Elf Boob.

Haha, but the landlord, do you only have these 4 elves? I can't write about defeating Rios and narrowly defeating Akxia, and besides, your elf level is not very high, so ......

It's pretty well written, isn't it? But don't use your mind too much on this, and ms is a little naïve ......

That's good, but the teacher won't talk about you!

It's well written, if only there was Rey.

Well written! It would be better to add a group beating to Rios!!

Yes, it would be better to add a group of Nadore.

Yes, post it on the forum.

Yes, try handing it in.

It's okay, it's just too straightforward.

Great, why don't you post it on the forum?

The game taught us to be united and fraternal. We have our own clan, as well as our own bases and Cell's friends. He let us know that money (Celdou) is hard to come by. It also lets us know which of our materials is slowly decreasing, and we must be diligent and thrifty.

The game of Sail shows us that the power of unity is endless, and it makes us dance happily while enjoying the fruits of victory after completing one mission after another. Here, without the help of parents and others, let yourself explore this world of ignorance. There is only the care and support of robots such as the mechanic Sissi, the captain and Alice.

Although it is just a small game that is not important in the eyes of adults, we have learned so much in this little game for us little children.

In the Sail mini-game, there is also a group of elves that we all want to get, and when Sail can't accomplish things, almost all of them have to be completed by cute elves. Cute elves can be summoned when we need help. Pokemon will level up or evolve as they defeat the Wild Elves.

When our elves have no "blood" and lose the battle, we can only muster up the courage to upgrade and evolve again, and when we are very strong, we can defeat the wild elves that we can't defeat before. It is also possible to grab it with the tools in our backpacks. The game process teaches us to be well prepared before doing anything.

Because I learned to be united, conserve resources and cherish the little things around me in the Xell, I would like to thank the producers of the Xell. Finally, I would like to make a suggestion that the makers of the Sail game should not design a super nono, but let some children who have no money also feel the benefits of the game.

Write your blessing to the Sail and imagine what it will come out of.

Brothers..

It's okay to write this.

Not afraid of being p-p-ed by the teacher??

And what you wrote was handed over to the teacher (hypothetically) I guess the teacher can't read it. I wrote it in vain.

Rely on you to play the Sail and play crazy, I'm not afraid of being killed by the teacher.

Won't you? Think for yourself!

Write, one of the things you did on the Sail's mission. Write down all the situational dialogue elf characters, and there are battles plus battles. Add to that the psychological depiction of yourself. That's it!

Ideas can be given to you, such as the decisive battle between the xx elves and the xx elves, or the battle of old enemies.

lz your article is good, just pay attention to the next paragraph and the like, and finally add some descriptions of the scenery, more good words and good sentences, if lz you are still relatively young, ignore my next few sentences.

The teacher will also assign such an essay? It's so interesting!