The child wrote an essay of gratitude to his parents, and the teacher asked some parents to comment

1. I don't think it matters how you write your comments. Yes, how can others judge themselves when they write about their own good or bad? Especially children, how can they understand adults? Personally, I think it's OK to write it around.

2. The important thing is that you can get a lot of things from the child's essay (not just this essay) (if it is a copy, it is meaningless): how is the child's writing, the child's ideals, interests, hobbies, thoughts and behaviors, identify or disagree with some aspects of the parents, and even do some bad things that you don't know (express regret) ......

3. Finally, may you progress with your children!

Write it yourself! I can't be with you for a lifetime! (Smart people will understand).

I feel very touched to write and understand children. Write it yourself.

Parents' Essay Comments for Their Children:1.The ending is apt to point out the center, the language is simple and the meaning is profound and intriguing.

2.Ending with a feeling switch and a feeling. In this way, the article is coherent from beginning to end, and at the same time, the topic of the article is reincarnated, and it is very infectious.

3.The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.

4.The article's implicit ending is both point-to-point and intriguing.

5.At the end, emotions are expressed in a concentrated manner, which not only follows the beginning, but also summarizes the whole text. Coherent from beginning to end, all in one go.

6.The portrayal of detail and expressiveness is the opposite, revealing the inner world of the characters, which is the success of this article.

Thanksgiving to parents essay plus comment one.

Who conceived me in October and gave birth to me? Mother. Who is working hard to earn money to support his family? Father. Who raised me without expecting anything in return? Parents ......

I'm a very headstrong girl, I have to appear in front of me immediately if I want anything, if not, immediately cry, Mom and Dad can't do anything about me. My family didn't have much money, and I saw that my classmates' stationery boxes were beautiful, that other people's toys were interesting, that the goods in the store were novel, and that I saw ......I will immediately ask my parents for money, and I will ask for 5 or 8 yuan at a time, and after buying this one, I will go to buy other things before I use it up.

I also often lose my temper with my mom and dad. When something unpleasant happens, no matter how much anyone pleases me, I still won't listen. When my mom and dad talked to me, I yelled at them to do something, and I stayed where I was, confronting my mom and dad, sometimes stamping my feet and throwing my things on the floor.

Mom and Dad were often so angry that they finally couldn't help but beat me. As soon as I did, I shouted, "I'm not done with you!"

In one day, no matter how long you haven't seen your parents, as long as you meet again, you will either ignore them or contradict them.

In the middle of my mom and dad's hair, I occasionally saw three or four white strands, and occasionally a trace of wrinkles on my forehead. This is not the traces left by the years, but my deep depth, my willfulness, my confrontation, my ......It is they who carved the ...... of tolerance for me and their deep love for me

Beating is pain and scolding is love, my grandmother often said to me.

Mom and Dad, you've done so much for me. From now on, I will no longer make you angry, I will listen to you well, I will study hard and get a good score to repay you!

Mom and Dad, I love you guys!

Brief comment] This article, by writing about the willfulness of "me", writes about the tolerance and love of parents for "me", which contrasts with the remorse of "me" in the later text. The language of the article is simple and plain, the emotions are sincere, and the use of action description and language description shows the willfulness of "me" to the fullest. At the end of the article, the author expressed his apologies and love for his parents, and stated that he would study hard to repay his parents.

Thanksgiving parents for a comment, that is, reflecting the parents for us is a support on the road to growth, because thanks to them in our growth path, we can live a better life, because without them, there may not be, now we, we must thank them for our dedication, everything, because their pay, is the real pay, so what they say, I feel that they are assisting us, Thank you parents for all our future dedication, and thank you parents for our best expectations, so these words feel cheap are just a better comment to say, thank them for their support and dedication to all our future.

Thanks to the comments of our parents, we said that our parents gave us life, and we should respect and filial piety all our lives, and they are the people who care for us the most in their lives, so when they are old, we must do our best to let them live in peace.

1) The beginning of the article: At the beginning of the article, you can say the topic or express a certain emotion, if you can accurately grasp the theme and emotion of the article, you can get 5 points;

2) The middle and end of the article: The middle and end of the article should be able to effectively express the author's heart, and the language should be able to express sincere gratitude, and the content should be carefully expressed clearly, which can score 4-5 points;

3) The content of the article: The content of the article should choose specific examples to illustrate your gratitude to your parents, and express the content of the article, which can score 4-5 points.

2) Language expression: The language used in the article should be accurate, rich and vivid, and be able to express the author's true feelings, which can be awarded 3-5 points;

3) Article style: The style of the article should be authentic, substantial, and powerful, and you can get 4-5 points.

3. Grammar: 1) Accurate language: The language should be accurate, and there are no grammatical errors in each sentence, and 3-5 points can be awarded;

2) Novel sentence structure: The sentence structure should be novel and express the author's true feelings, which can score 3-5 points;

3) Sentence coherence: The sentence should be coherent and there is a natural connection between the sentences, and 4-5 points can be awarded.

Fourth, the overall score: