Ask a professional to comment on some wedding couplets, and sincerely hope for a quick recovery

I haven't paid attention to the couplet for a few days, and it seems to be too late. The level of my writing is not high, and the level of appreciation is acceptable.

The first picture of the word "attached" is not used well, and there is a suspicion of male superiority and inferiority of women. "Drill Wedding Palace" and "Five Sons Dengke" are debatable. It is also inappropriate to change the phrase "smooth sailing" to "smooth sailing" for the sake of law.

It is better to have the law because of the will, than to harm the will because of the law. And the word "dragon" is at the key point of syllable conversion, the flat sound is not loud enough, it is advisable to use the sound of the voice, and the "dragon" should be changed to the corresponding word of the lower link to the sound of the voice, so that it is more powerful to read. My couplet is not doing well, try to change it for reference:

The golden dragon with the jade phoenix is in love with the sea waves and turns over the crystal hall.

Talented people will be beautiful people in love with the waves of Tsinghua Garden.

I think the second joint is generally very good, but there are also things that can be modified, if you want to tidy up, it is recommended to change "Wanjing" to "Vientiane" to be more smooth, and change "Plain Spring Song" to "Hundred Flowers Show" to be more confrontational. However, the flowers have nothing to do with the mountains and flowing water, and it is not as good as the "double-string symphony" that is not only in line with the allusions of the mountains and flowing water, but also in line with the auspicious language at the time of marriage. I don't know what "jade belt" means, can I change it to "jade rule"?

Echoing the artistic conception of the piano soulmate? Although "Huayu Ruiqi" is good, but the relationship between the two words is inherited, there is no charm of "high mountains and flowing water" juxtaposed, it is better to simply change it to "Ziyan Spring Breeze", "to" the word is better to use "He", if you use the word "to", you have to change the word "knot" to "He" or "Zhu" to be smooth. In this way, the couplet is as follows:

The double-string symphony of high mountains and flowing water is combined into a bosom friend vibrating jade rhythm, and the purple swallow spring breeze is auspicious and wishes a good fate to the mandarin ducks.

Although it is not very rhythmic, but the joint meaning is very good, the rhythm of each group of words in the upper link is all equal, and the lower link is all flat and closed, and the charm is enough.

The white head is full of eyebrows, the mandarin ducks are winged, the flowers are bright, and the silver lanterns are dancing;

Qingyang Qirui peach and plum concentric spring return painting Dong Yan amphibious.

Yingge Yan dance, five-color auspicious clouds, colorful buildings, distinguished guests, guests raise gold bottles to congratulate the famous family, Junyan, Long Tengwu;

The flowers are good, the moon is full, the three-star Rui Qi is ying, the courtyard is full of red plums, and the smiling faces of the plum are happy to welcome the jade chariot and the phoenix to return to the nest.

The white head is full of eyebrows, the mandarin ducks are winged, the flowers are bright, and the silver lanterns are dancing; Qingyang Qirui peach and plum concentric spring return painting Dong Yan amphibious. Yingge Yan dance, five-color auspicious clouds, colorful buildings, distinguished guests, guests raise gold bottles to congratulate the famous family, Junyan, Long Tengwu; The flowers are good, the moon is full, the three-star Rui Qi is ying, the courtyard is full of red plums, and the smiling faces of the plum are happy to welcome the jade chariot and the phoenix to return to the nest.

Do you need a hall couplet (long couplet) to ask a question, and you can write it according to the season.

1, uplink: snow plum blossom embroidery pavilion downlink: Linfeng Lanyun into the incense 2, uplink:

Yongxue Ting welcomes the lady in the lower link: Shenghua's pen is a talented man 3, the upper link: the legacy of the wind and the finch downlink:

Bright Moon Phoenix Fly 4, Uplink: Shake off the red plum felt paving Downlink: Floating snowflakes 5, Uplink:

Snow geese double fly and retreat from the cold Downlink: Red Plum and Put the Ice Melt 6, Uplink: Snow Drift Double Flying Butterfly Downlink:

The lights are reflected and the head plum 7, the upper link: the red plum in the snow put the lower link: the newcomer in front of the door comes 8, the upper link:

Snow case at the beginning of the talented woman flocculent downlink: jade basin new water supply fairy 9, uplink: the new year couple concentric knot downlink:

Lingxue plum blossom and open 10, uplink: green pine branches and white cranes for the couple Downlink: kingfishers in the purple bamboo garden in pairs.

The question also needs two door couplets, and two door couplets, both of which are used by the man to get married.

These are fine.

For marriage in winter.

The question should be at least 15 words long.

The door of the [upper link]: under the candles, the guests are full, and they praise the simplicity of doing things [lower link]: In the cave room, the newcomers are a couple, and they are diligent and thrifty.

Question: Can Changlian still help me send two pairs?

Hand in hand, the partner looks at the corners of the eyes, the eyebrows add joy, and talk side by side, the Long March, the happy lamp, the moon has a bosom friend horizontal criticism: love is sincere, the white head is aligned, the eyebrows are eyebrows, the mandarin ducks are winged, the flowers are bright, the silver lanterns are dancing, Qingyang, Qirui, Taoli, and Li are concentric, and the spring returns to the painting, Dong Yan is amphibious, and the horizontal criticism is glorious.

Uplink: Long Xianrui Yushu Linfeng Heavenly Combination Tie the knot Downlink: Feng Chengxiang pours the country and the city into the eternal knot for a hundred years.

2014 Newlywed Couplet.

The mandarin ducks play with each other and the water is beautiful, and the piano plays the gospel a lot. Harmony and auspiciousness Good birds are always good, and the safflower is red every day. Celebrate the newlyweds.

There are still few kisses a hundred times, and there is no need for more eugenics. Affectionate agreement The golden rooster will report later, and I hope Yuyan will surrender as soon as possible. Newlywed honeymoon.

The flower path has not been swept by guests, and the pengmen is now open for you. From now on, the corners of the eyes and eyebrows are love, and the flowers are best known before the moon. Love is eternal.

The wedding night is all about love, and the yang and the future are even more brilliant. Love spring, embroidered pillow, early flying bear dream, cave room audition of the sound of the phoenix. A bumper harvest is in sight.

Qingyun stretches out in the blue sky, and the beautiful phoenix loves to live in the green tree. The warmth of the veins and veins of the jade mirror is passed on in the world, and the Milky Way crosses the twin stars in the sky. Hit it off.

Luan Feng and Ming Chang Baishi, Mandarin Duck Chorus celebrates more than three more. IKEA and you keep a hundred-year covenant and sing a song with me. Forever united.

Seize the new stronghold in the center and launch an all-out march. The battle is up to Dan, Yunhan Bridge becomes a cow and a female crossing, and the spring Tai Xiao leads the phoenix to fly. Born to marry.

Respect each other and love each other's partners, and marry with one heart and one heart. Respect each other like a guest, willow leaves reflect the eyebrows, makeup mirror, peach blossoms shine on the face of the cave in spring. The cave house is warm in spring.

The cave room is celebrated with candles, and the courtyard is fragrant. Sweet and good dreams, jade orchid field thousand autumn celebrations, silk embroidery twilight hundred years. Liuhe marriage.

Mandarin ducks are newlyweds, and dragons and phoenixes are auspicious flowers and candles. Cave house flower candle hand in hand to draw colorful phoenixes, side by side to raise new seedlings. Birth.

Cherish every inch of land and carefully cultivate the pillars. Live up to the Spring Festival poem title, red leaves and heart flowers, jade blue fields are sleepy and fragrant. A bumper harvest is in sight.

The sheng flute plays Qi Tianle together, and the piano and the piano are full of Tingfang in the same tune. The bell and drum friends are really brave and happy, like a fairy. How much fun.

Born in a fairy cave, infinite happiness is in the heart. There are no vulgar guests on the Yellow Crane Tower, and there are beautiful women in the green radish tent. Gold House Storage.

Hunan Xinxin flowers and candles, elegant room Tingting Lan Guifang. Liu Xiangxing got married.

Good birds, amphibious jayfish flounder, fairy flower and tirimu branches. The red lotus and green leaves are festive, and the white cranes and purple orchids are dependent on each other.

The spring is warm in the cave room, and the full moon is full and the fish and water are deep. The lotus blooms and stalks in the candlelight, and the sound of the sheng spring is concentric.

The clouds embrace the dressing table and the wind is warm, and the flowers welcome the treasure and the fan is beautiful. The sea is dry and rotten, and the earth is wide and the sky is higher than the wings.

Mai Lang Fang Fei Ying flowers are colorful, and Taotan is full of fish and water acacia. The autumn cinnamon is fragrant and the full moon flowers are good, and the cave house is like-minded.