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The heart says. In a quiet room, people will hear their own heartbeats. At this moment, you will know very well that the only thing that accompanies you is a heart. You don't have anything else at this time but the heart.

You may wonder how it is that you only have a heart, and don't you still have legs? And hands? And brains? And how much, so much?

Yes, there are legs, but the legs are just at the command of the heart, to run, to chase, and most importantly, to be still at a certain heartbeat.

Yes, there are hands, but the hands don't seem to have the right to decide, and can only cooperate with the legs to fulfill the wishes of the heart.

Not bad, and brains. But the brain is a part of the heart, the translator and recorder of the heart. If the mind is compared to a railroad, the brain is a railroad worker.

Yes, there are other attachments, stomach, eyes, mouth, etc., they are ruthless and ignorant, without merit.

The only thing we have is our heart.

In the dead of night, the starlight is hidden, there is no street lamp, at this time only the heart can illuminate for you, in the cold winter there is no heating equipment around, at this moment, only the heart is warm for you, in the deep mountains and old forests, you are lost, and the heart will not, if the heart is also lost, the person has become a statue.

I have had the experience of walking through the canyon, there are cliffs on both sides, and from time to time there are unprecedented fearful sounds in front of me, at this moment, I heard my heartbeat, and from that moment on, I also understood what the true meaning of human life is, this life of man is to find the heart, do more good deeds, protect the good heart, make the heart purer, play a greater role.

Today, the teacher asked our classmates to write about each other's strengths and weaknesses. I think that when you write to others, you have to look at the strengths of others, and when others write to you, you have to look at your own shortcomings, and you have to correct your shortcomings, so that you can unite as one and your friendship will last forever.

In the second session, I am going to write it to the Soviet side, and this is the first one I have written. I just sat there and wondered, what is the merit of writing about her? It wasn't until class that I figured out what was good about her.

It's not that she doesn't have merit, it's that there are so many that I don't know what to write about. When I was about to write about her merits, the teacher had already come in, and I thought: this is not good, it's not good to be found by the teacher, forget it, I'm still writing after class!

But it's not a good thing to be writing after class, because I was thinking about it all the time: will she accept it after I finish writing, will she be angry? Because in addition to writing the advantages, it is also necessary to write the disadvantages of Xianggaopin!

Jingle Bell ......

A long lesson is finally over. I took out a pen and paper and wrote: "Su Fang, hello!

You are a little girl who studies well and has a cheerful personality, but you love to beat people, I hope you will correct it in the future, Wang Hairong, April 11, 20xx". Then I wondered if she would accept it. Will it be angry?

I carefully rolled the paper into a roll, walked over and said to Su Fang: "This is the note I gave you, you can take it!" "Okay!

She was cheerful. I walked back to my seat and saw that she was reading the note, and my heart was pounding, only to see her smile slightly, pick up the pen and write on the paper. I mentioned that my heart finally fell like a stone to the ground.

After a while, she also gave me a note and left without saying a word, and I began to worry again, will she be angry? I quickly opened the note, which read, "Thank you for helping me point out the shortcomings."

On April 11, 20xx on the Soviet side", I was relieved again. At this time, the class bell rang, and I took the class seriously.

Since then, my relationship with the Soviet side has become even closer.

The ending is not good enough, so it is recommended to change it to "This beautiful note transformed into a minute and a second will be an incomparably joyful song in my heart." ”

At the same time, the "only" in the title is wrong, right?

The fourth paragraph is a bit wordy, and it's still very naïve, it shouldn't be the first level of junior high school, right? You'd better describe more mental activity and your own language.

The penultimate paragraph, this dialogue paragraph, makes people look uncomfortable, and you still use another way of expressing it, like:

Said words, "said words", "said words".

The eggplant still has thorns, so let's let it go. "It's not clear how you express it, but there's a thorn on the eggplant stalk, right? And it's a thorn, so there's no need to pick it up because of the thorn, right?

The second natural section "leeks are densely overgrown all over a field, more vigorous than grass." "First of all, it's more vigorous than grass, and it's the wrong match. If it is changed to "more vigorous than the vitality of grass", it is barely clear, but in this way, the vitality of leeks and grass is very tenacious, how to compare?

Furthermore, it is not possible to communicate with the front. It is suggested to read "More lush than grass." ”

What does "why don't you come" in the fourth natural paragraph? If it's a lyric, you can't use it, you have to change it to something more beautiful. Your lyrics are seriously not worthy of the name of the first year of junior high school.

You shouldn't be very good at using a computer, right?,Direct pasting leads to segmentation problems.。 It's just on the Internet, it doesn't matter, I believe it will definitely be divided in real life, right? That's not too much of a problem.

As soon as I entered the house, my grandmother shouted at me to sit down: "Child, where have you been, run out early in the morning and don't say a word to your grandmother." This sentence is not used correctly. The original meaning of shouting is to sell, change the word, friend.

I have to say that there are many loopholes.........

Hello classmates! First of all, the subject matter of the article is very good, true, but there are individual feelings in the middle, as if it were an account, a simple description of the experience, the main content of your experience and feelings!

First of all, go to grandma's house to play in front of adding a regional name, and then grandma's house has a vegetable garden, and the back should add words or short sentences that describe the scene in the vegetable garden "I love **", and I also love to eat vegetables in the vegetable garden, the second paragraph, the metaphor is not good, the description is still very good, I feel that it is mainly about picking vegetables and mental description, if you add a little story, it is better, at least rich in content, attractive, and then use this story to support the end, saying that you can do it yourself or something,

Hehe! It is not an easy task to write a good essay, and it requires long-term and multifaceted efforts. Read a lot, look at it and pay attention to what is around you. To write more is to practice more pen and achieve "practice makes perfect".

Just looking at the article is a simple narrative composition, but if you add a lively title to him, there are some words that don't make sense. Writing is not just about narrative, it's about being lively.

The analogy of tomatoes is good, but the analogy of eggplants is not satisfactory.

The first paragraph should be concise and memorized... Grandma's house has a vegetable garden, delete it.

You this ...

First of all, what grade are you?

This article is more detailed and uses more details. However, the criterion for judging the article is to ask for positive, and such an article has a negative connotation, which is not conducive to being positive and will lose some points.

Starting from the concept of loneliness, analyze the similarities and differences between loneliness and loneliness. Loneliness is a way of being alone, and its highest spiritual activity is probably to the extent of longing; Loneliness also presents a lonely survival situation, but it is not easy to obtain, not everyone has it, it is far away from and beyond reality, the spirit of the lonely person keeps going up, always moving forward, reaching a height that is difficult for ordinary people to reach, is a symbol of nobility. Writing from this perspective requires strong logical analysis skills and the ability to control the material.

Starting from the lonely subject, you can write about the loneliness of people, but also express the loneliness of things, people can not only be familiar friends around themselves, but also celebrities from ancient and modern China and foreign countries. From this perspective, students have more room to play.

Starting from the perspective of analyzing the pros and cons of loneliness, we can think that loneliness is a kind of beauty, praise loneliness, and enjoy loneliness; Also available.

To think that loneliness is a kind of pain, to criticize loneliness, to stay away from loneliness.

The essay on the first year of junior high school is mainly a narrative essay, like this one, although the description is detailed, it does not account for a lot of points in the first year of junior high school. The article is negative, has no upward meaning, and does not clearly understand the main idea to be expressed, and does not match the topic. So I can't judge how many points there are in this article, but from the perspective of the first year of junior high school, this article is really not good.

1. The number of words in the article is a bit small, and the number of words required for the first year of junior high school is more than 600 words, and the details of what happened to him and the people who came in to beat him should be expanded.

3. The connection of the article is more natural, that is, there is less environmental description, and the examples can be used, and then modified and modified.

The first year of junior high school will write this kind of article, hehe.