How to Write a Difficult to Write Composition Classroom Teaching Record

1 All "How to Write a "Difficult to Write" Essay Teaching Record: He Jie, Second Affiliated Primary School of Fuzhou Institute of Education Comment: Special Teacher Liu Renzeng 1

Talking about "difficult to write" essays Teacher: (Board book: "difficult to write" essays; Reading with students on the topic "'Difficult to Write' Essays") Today, we will dedicate ourselves to "difficult to write" essays.

First of all, please tell me what kind of essay you think is very "difficult to write"? Sheng: I think I often write, old-fashioned essays.

Teacher: "Old-fashioned" essays are "difficult to write" essays, which makes sense. (Board book:

I'll tell you a story about a child who said that when he entered the school from the first grade, the teacher asked him to write an essay called "My Mother". In the sixth grade, the teacher also assigned the essay. He told a joke that I only have one mom and it's really hard for you to ask me to write six different moms.

Is there any essay that is difficult to write? Sheng: We are asked to write about things that we have never experienced before.

Sheng: I was forced to write an essay. Raw:

The range of topics is too large and beyond the reach of our elementary school students. For example, "The Story of Hometown". Raw:

The love of parents, introducing themselves, memorable things - essays that do not like to write.

1 6 If you want to get an ideal score in your essay, you must not make mistakes first, because if you make a mistake, you will be deducted points, and it is the most basic score. Most of today's students make the following mistakes in their essays:

First of all, the most basic mistake, and that is typos. Composition is inherently very rigorous and requires great care. When grading, a typo is likely to deduct one point.

Moreover, typos are very difficult to read, and sometimes they can cause a lot of misunderstandings, which makes your essay feel tiring to read. In addition, the grading teacher is very disgusted with typos, and if there are too many typos in an essay, it will give a bad impression on the whole. Naturally, the score will not be high.

Therefore, you must be careful when writing your essay. When you put down the pen, you should ask yourself why you are writing this word, what this word represents, and whether it is correct. Check it yourself again when you're done writing so you don't get caught in the net.

2 6 In addition to typos, there is another mistake that is also very basic. That is, the sentence does not make sense.

Composition is a test of the student's ability to express, if you can't write sentences beautifully, then don't force it, but if you don't make sense in the sentences, stammering in reading, and the words don't reach the meaning, then it's too much to watch. After reading your essay, the teacher will not have the patience to continue reading slowly, so he can only randomly type an average or low score and skip it directly.

Therefore, when students write essays, they should read each sentence by themselves, and they can only be satisfied with the smoothness of the sentence.

These are all very basic mistakes that should never be made.

The following errors in 3 6 are a bit more advanced.

The first is the misuse of idioms, afterwords, and so on. Sometimes a sentence is good, but it often makes people laugh and cry because of a misused idiom or afterword. Here I suggest that if you want to use idioms or afterwords, you should make sure that its meaning is accurate, and if it is not clear, or ambiguous, then it is better not to use it than to use it indiscriminately.

The second is the use of internet terms. With the development of the Internet, many Internet words are now very popular, such as "powerful", "can't hurt" and so on. These words are all wrong words in the composition. Therefore, it is important to pay attention to the use of Internet words in your composition.

The third is the mistake in the examination of the question. The title clearly asks you to write Zhang San, and you write Li Si. And most of today's essays are open-ended propositions. Therefore, students must take the time to review the questions before putting pen to paper. Figure out what exactly the topic wants you to write about, and then start writing.

4 6 Of course, it is not enough to be free of mistakes, you want your score to be higher than others, and you also have to have your own outstanding points.

First of all, the most basic thing is that your handwriting should be neat and neat. If the handwriting is not good, the teacher is not in the mood to read it carefully, so he will just give a general score. If the handwriting is good, first of all, the teacher will be comfortable to look at, and the impression score will be a little higher than others.

Then there's typography. The layout of the composition is very important. Keep the beginning short and get straight to the point. The ending should be concise and not tedious and verbose. The so-called dragon head and phoenix tail. The middle paragraph should also be arranged reasonably. It can't be a long long paragraph

There are two reasons why it is difficult to write essays, one is that I do not observe enough life, I usually read few books, and I don't accumulate enough; The second is because there is not enough thinking and not enough summarization.

If you find these two reasons, you will have a solution, one is to read more books, especially some books recommended for primary and secondary school students to read, some of these stories and cases will enrich your mind. At the same time, it is necessary to observe life more and pay attention to some hot topics through the Internet, TV, etc. The second is to develop the habit of thinking, usually for some things and problems, to think rationally, be good at summarizing, analyze one, two, three, and develop a fixed logical thinking mode.

FYI.

English or Chinese?

However, the idea is very important, and 5W is very practical at any time

There's no good way, mainly by "accumulation", and learning has to start little by little (*

Or look at the composition more optimistically, learn their ideas, and feel life more attentively.

Read more books, accumulate more, and record when you feel touched, and accumulate a lot.

How to write a good essay.

1. A good article comes from life, write about what you see and hear; Write about your personal experience; Write your true feelings, such an article will be vivid and touching.

2. Writing is not something that can be achieved overnight. But in the face of today's test-taking education, you might as well learn some skills. For example, memorize more good paragraphs, good beginnings and endings. Try it out for exam preparation.

4. Establish a novel and unique article title. Sometimes it can do more with less.

5. Insist on writing a diary, which can not only practice writing, but also accumulate materials.

6. Learn to quote famous quotes and quote the poems and songs of immortals to make your essay more convincing.

7. The use of good words and sentences, good words and good sentences are used in the article, which can add color to your article and sublimate the article. But it should be just right, not too much, too much will seem flashy.

8. Learn to apply, that is, the ability to be flexible, so as to respond to all changes.

9. Get close to nature, go out during holidays, and see more to be more knowledgeable.

10. Getting close to Songmin's nature can also make the materials you collect more wild and colorful.

The mountains and flowing water, the place where the carving is bent, how can we interpret the tenderness contained in the pipa sound?

Dongfeng Chibi, when the end of the song ends, how to tell the little sadness engraved in the sound of the guqin?

Let's listen to the east wind whispering, singing and thinking. A wisp of dreams, the ups and downs of the world, not the death after the prosperity has fallen, the memories bit by bit, but the sound of no makeup after the fireworks have dissipated.

In this way, the fingertips fall on the strings, plucking a little poignant, but they are scattered with the wind among the pear blossom trees on the other side.

If you give me time to play a bamboo song, can you cross the height of the red cliff, look at the breeze, and listen to the flowing water?

The secluded strings, the sound of the pipa, a trace of music, the heart is intoxicated, borrowing a trace of the coolness of the east wind, wearing a plain clothes, drinking a cup of camellia, strolling under the pear blossom tree on this bank.

The wind is crossing, the sound is tactful, and it is far away several times. Ren Xin is like glass, and the dust and fragrance are exhausted, just to play a song to break the east wind.

The east wind surrounds, the pear blossoms float, the pear blossoms dance together in the east wind, play a song of ecstasy, sing and harmonize, see all the divisions and combinations of the world, a little sentimentality, still just the softness of the red dust. Although there is no flower before the moon, there are pieces of memories that are light. The east wind is too intoxicating, so I can only listen to the withering of pear blossoms, who listens?

The east wind is gone, the red cliff is still there, gradually moving away, the fate is scattered, I am still waiting, who knows that the pear blossom is still lightly blowing, like flowing water, the flowing water is still chanting the east wind, I don't know who the east wind is with?

You Zhen Lu listened attentively, and a stream of water invaded his heart, and he didn't feel a little chill. Listening again, the east wind was already drifting away, without a trace, just gently brushing through, across the shallow sorrow.

One song of the east wind breaks, two songs of reminiscence, the pear blossoms fall, and the thousands of threads are gone, who is sighing? Who whispered softly in the passing years, burying the memories of the past.

The water poured down from the red cliff and flowed eastward, but it was also the direction in which the wind blew, thinking that it would flow to the deepest flowing years, and then gradually turn into memories and hide in the bottom of my heart forever.

Who is playing a song with the pipa, the pear blossom dyes the memory, I have seen through the ending, but can it be geometric?

Who stroked the strings and called me to the shore to listen to the east wind?

Who leans on the pillow of the piano, dreams of the full moon at night, and listens to the fragrance of dust?

The years have passed, the dust has been scattered, and the thoughts have been lost, and there is nothing to be done. Touch the strings, like the slenderness of the wind, the strings interpret the words, the sound of the piano recalls, who is the thought for? The affection around the fingers, the love of a lifetime, in the pipa and the song, deduced the rhyme of the years one after another.

Love to the depths, lonely music, the whisper in the ear is like the sound of flowers falling, falling lonely for a lifetime. The love locked Xiao Yin, but it spread into a clear shadow in the haze. Picking up a stream of flowing water, carrying a breeze, swaying thousands of wisps of style in the flower paper.

The sound of the piano is melodious, graceful heartstrings, plain clothes are like lan, and playing, and breaking, but the thoughts are wet by the wind and flowing water of the East God Bench. Suddenly, the strings suddenly broke, the song ended, and the people dispersed.

The east wind is slow, the flowing water is murmuring, the fragrance of flowers is faint, looking back at the past, remembering the pear blossoms. A song of piano is accompanied by the east wind, the clouds are light and the wind is light, who knows that only the falling flowers are left alone.

Lu Hong's song of the east wind broke down, it was the scar of me drunk and fell into the red cliff, and now there is only half a world of dust and fragrance left, who is still clinging to that expectation?

Teach you two tricks. One of the best tips: stay calm and build self-confidence. Psychological tension will make one's thinking suppressed, and only by being relaxed can one's thoughts flow freely.

1.Be observant.

Composition is to speak with a pen, and if you can speak, you will compose. And if you want to have something to say, you must pay attention to the people and things around you, and avoid making things up nonsense. Due to the lack of observation and analysis of the things around him, there is a lack of material in his head, so he feels that he has nothing to say and cannot write.

What is Observation? Observation is to see with your eyes. It is necessary to "observe" from afar, "observe" from afar, pay attention to everything, pay attention to it from time to time, and develop a habit.

2.In terms of language, it is necessary to establish a "vocabulary base". Vocabulary is the cell of the article. In a broad sense, vocabulary refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups.

There are two ways to build a "vocabulary base": the first is reading. Usually read books, newspapers and periodicals, and make reading notes, excerpt some beautiful words, sentences, and paragraphs in a specific book, and you can also make reading cards.

The second is life. Usually we should capture the vivid language in the spoken language of the public, and write down these words in a small notebook or card that you carry with you, so that over time, you will be able to speak and become a chapter, and your composition will be brilliant.

3.It is necessary to strengthen the accumulation of materials. The material is the flesh and blood of the article.

If conditions permit, you can bring a video camera or tape recorder to observe life in depth, actively participate in life, and record what you have seen and heard in family life, campus life, and social life in a timely manner in the form of sketching, writing diaries, and writing observation notes. When recording, it is necessary to grasp the details and grasp the characteristics of people, things, objects and scenes. In this way, the articles written are flesh and blood.

4.It is necessary to strengthen the accumulation of ideas. Opinion is the soul of the article.

First, be thoughtful. "One more thought, one more gain. "Usually think deeply, and ask "why", "what", and "how" when encountering problems.

In this way, we can see the essence through the phenomenon. It is also necessary to record the "spark" of thinking and the conclusion of thinking at any time. The second is to compile, that is, to extract famous quotes, aphorisms, aphorisms, etc.

In short, the accumulation of composition should be strengthened, and the three major writing warehouses of "vocabulary library", "material library" and "think tank" should be established, and regular inventory, sorting and categorization, and constantly enriching and expanding, so that your writing level will be greatly improved.

Be interested, observe life more, and think more in your leisure time

Composition, is our child Pi Yuanzi feel that composition is very difficult to write, the teacher always says to read more extracurricular books, the level of composition will improve, but how can not believe in the calendar, we don't know why, just can't progress, just feel difficult, to write when can't think of a way to slip the grip search, it seems, only hard to learn, hard to read the composition book to improve their composition level!