Sample text with things as clues 3QOrz! Little brother is grateful! 30 points are awarded

30 points is still a big prize? I thought it was 300 percent.

Take "I" feelings for the blooming wisteria roses as clues, first write about the flower waterfall, then write the flower spike, and then write the flower. It is described in order from the whole to the part, and is divided into three sections. The article revolves around wisteria roses to express feelings.

by looking at the flowers (paragraphs 1-6); Remembering flowers (paragraphs 7 and 9) and thinking flowers (paragraphs lo ll). Look at the flowers--- blossoming flowers--flower waterfalls, flower spikes, flowers Focus on describing the scenery of vine roses in full bloom. The feeling of remembering flowers --- thousands of thoughts--- appreciating flowers The calamity of remembering flowers and the vitality of singing flowers The writer is relieved to see things, and the anxiety and grief in his heart turn into spiritual tranquility and joy of life.

The author realizes the eternity of life --- the author of this experience.

From what aspects does the author describe the blooming wisteria tree?

Discuss and summarize: Write from three aspects.

1) Color: A brilliant lilac, deep shade of purple, purple banner with a little silver light, like a splash of water.

2) Shape: Like a waterfall, hanging down from the sky, its beginning and its end are not seen. A glittering, blooming vine. Flowers are clustered next to each other, one after the other.

3) Status: It seems to be flowing, laughing, and growing. They are teasing each other with the sunshine, pushing and squeezing each other.

1.The writing thread of the text is Wisteria Rose, 2The author describes it from the aspects of flowers, trees, spikes, and flowers!

Idea 1: (Finally the rewriting of the original work) is to translate the original text and add some modern words.

For example, the beginning can be written:

In the past, I had heard that there were famous eight views of Zichuan in Zichuan County, and the most famous of them was the mountain market of Huanshan, but it was not easy to see it, and it often only appeared once in several years, but unfortunately I was not able to see it in person, until one day my friend Sun Yunian Gongzi told such a scene (I wrote later).

Idea 2: (bold rewriting, different from the original).

But I can write like this, one day I was drinking with my friend Zichuan's restaurant, and suddenly saw the "magical mountain market" (self-described), when I was surprised, a local person, the secret said: This is one of the eight local scenery "ghost market" so I was really frightened, I couldn't help but believe that there are ghosts, go home and talk to people, and people can't help but laugh at it, it turned out to be a "mirage". So I came to the conclusion that you can't do it without learning.

Haha, okay, I hope it can help you.

There is such a voice.

Cai Lu Rain, wisps broke into my sight, the same place, but the time was changed.

I was a sophomore in high school that year, and he was in his junior year of high school. I originally thought he was a very hard-working person, but the next time I got along with him, I knew that I was wrong, he was very talkative, he had nothing to shout, and the most unbearable thing for me was the thunderous closing of the door every morning. I think the whole building should be able to hear it!

For this reason, I often complained to my mother: "The person next door is so strange, they are all in their third year of high school, why is they still so noisy?" It's certainly not good to learn!

Mom didn't say anything, just smiled flatly.

Time passed unhurriedly with the sound of the door closing and opening every day, until one night. When I returned to the dormitory the next night, my mother hadn't come yet, and I was still doing my unfinished homework after eating as usual. Suddenly, I heard a loud door shut, mixed with the crisp and loud sound of the hangers colliding.

Is it windy? Why hasn't Mom come yet? "I was muttering to myself, when there was a loud bang and the electricity went out, what should I do?

What if mom is still on the road? What if it rains all the time? My heart went up and down.

A knock on the door brought me back to reality. I quickly opened the door. How could it be him standing in the doorway?

Do you have candles? "Did you see me ordering?" "I'm not angry.

He went downstairs without saying anything. After a while he came up panting and handed me half a lit candle, which filled the room with a light that made me feel no longer afraid. Looking at the black back of his departure, it was really not a taste in my heart.

A man who was not at all equated with the heavy sound of the door closing.

Soon, he graduated, but the sound of the door closing did not seem to have gone away, it still stirred in my heart for a long time, motivating me like a wake-up call. For a long time, I would lie in front of the window and look at the candle that was almost lit and wonder, why not the heavy sound of the door closing? It always appears at a fixed point in the morning, wakes people up, and then disappears silently on the other side of the world.

There is such a voice, look at you, need to be rippling.

Cao Cao. In "Romance of the Three Kingdoms", Cao Cao is a traitorous male, and the creed of life is "I would rather teach the world to bear the world than teach the world to bear me", which is a typical villain who is treacherous, cruel, willful, and suspicious. Those who have read the "Three Kingdoms", when they mention "traitorous male", everyone knows that it refers to Cao Cao.

But Cao Cao in real life has the pursuit of ideals, which is a complex body of contradictions. I thought Cao Cao was a generation of traitors, but I thought he was just a martial artist, but after reading his poems such as "Short Song Xing", I knew that his inner world was extremely rich. "When you sing about wine, life is geometric!

For example, the morning dew is bitter in the past. Be generous and unforgettable. How to solve the worries, only Du Kang.

Cao Cao has a very high literary attainment, and poems such as "Watching the Sea" and "Turtle Although Shou" are all written by Cao Cao. Cao Cao cherished talents, had great ambitions, and had outstanding military talents, which are worthy of our learning.

By depicting the boundless, unfathomable, and bottomless bamboo forests and the leisure, tranquility, peace and happiness of the people of Bamboo Township, the text expresses the praise of the magnificent mountains and rivers of the motherland and the abundance of products, the praise for the thriving life, and the love for the industrious and simple people of the mountain villages.