About the author of the Nine Products and One Bureau

He is an excellent ** author, his works include: "Fortune Telling", "Fortune Telling", etc., this book is a fine book, every word is beautiful, and the author has nine products.

The ** plot created in a game is ups and downs, exciting, and the plot and writing are excellent.

The following are personal criticisms and some of the main opinions I hope you understand.

There are many typos and there is no good correction.

The author writes more bluntly, and the male protagonist is written as a young child, with no ability to associate, and there is a lot of foreshadowing, but you obviously can't handle it, which is the reason for the blunt supplement.

The inner dialogue of the male protagonist If you consider writing the thinking dialogue, it will be more interesting to add it to the foreshadowing, and it can also let the reader see why things are going on.

If you don't know what is clear, put it in the article to make it feel abrupt and inexplicable.

There are a lot of paragraphs that often end with the use of "了] [of] maybe your dialect there, but I am very skeptical that your descriptive power and the sense of immersion of the words make me feel very uncomfortable reading them, so I will give some examples below.

Example: [Blood came out of Lao Yue's mouth, and his whole face was already extremely scarlet, and he even rolled his eyes] This sentence is just a passage that I saw casually in chapter 456 I feel that there are many flaws here If the second half of the sentence is changed to [The whole face is already extremely scarlet, and even the eyes are rolled up] will make people read very coherently, comfortably, and neatly.

As in the previous paragraph, I still turned to the chapter at random in chapter 456, and I saw the flaws in the use of the word [of] again: Example: [You can't be counted as someone present, you can't! If it is changed to [You can't count everyone present, with your strength, it will never be possible!]

The tone of a sentence like this is obviously a lot more substitution and anger than you might use.

Just a little bit of use of words can make words so vivid, but as an author, you don't know how to use them at all, your writing is muddy, there is no tension, and your ability to express itself is not enough, although the story of the article is very good, but your writing obviously can't keep up with your imagination.

If you want to bring us a more vivid story, please reflect on it to add some knowledge.

I feel that you are a relatively young author, so I have high expectations for you, after all, the imagination is very rich, if the writing is improved, the character's personality, psychology, and words at that time are clearly described in the insertion time, it will be a hot online **.

Note: [Advice against the ear].

"Fortune Telling" in the first game of nine products, I am reading it. The story is very realistic, and the penmanship is very close to the people and easy to understand. However, there is foreshadowing everywhere, and selling off is a must, but too much is very annoying.

There are also places where the average reader can understand and know how the story develops and who is behind the scenes. There is no need to sell it anymore. And it sells very bluntly.

This is something I personally find annoying. A good book, but with a hint of an insult to intelligence.

I am reading "Fortune Telling", and I feel that the author's writing skills are good, and the character creation is also very successful. But it may be due to the Internet**, there are too many typos and incomprehensible sentences. There is also a bit of confusion in the logic, and even Chen Sandao is said to be Li Tian's grandfather later, which makes people feel a little sloppy.

"Counting Death" is good, but I feel that my IQ is insulted, and I can't move my bank card to transfer hundreds of millions, and it arrives in two seconds.

Although there are shortcomings, but in general it's pretty good, I just feel that the author is squinting, and it's okay if the two of them are peers in the fate, and the idea of beating his master in the yin fate, I'm also drunk!

Qingyue's tone is quite similar to Tang Man's, and I feel that the author's works tend to be stronger than women, and weaker men.

I have read it well, Zhuge Liang, Liu Bowen, Li Tian, tenth-level fortune tellers, once in a thousand years.

This person is very talented, but he seems to have a woman plot (compared with Cao **). The heroines in other works are all tall, and Li Ziyang in "Jiupin Xiangzi" revolves around women every day, and the women are either affectionate or arrogant to "Why not mine if it's so good?" It should be me!

And men are almost exclusively mad or unreasonable!

I really hope that the author will continue to come out, and he will continue to write Li Tian, Tang Man and Li Xiuwen, Qingyue and their later stories are all good, and I like the two books "Fortune Telling" and "Fortune Telling" very much.

Fortune telling, I've finished reading it, and I'm still stuck in it and can't extricate myself It's a pity that the ending is not satisfactory There is a feeling that half of the words are said I hope there will be a sequel It will be more perfect to explain everything clearly Love is waiting in Seven Cats**.

It feels like the author is a child or a woman.

What triggered the author's inspiration to write such a fortune telling, it feels like the content is really the same.

This author is very likable in the language dialogue between the male and female protagonists, but in some routines are too exaggerated, and the plot design at the beginning of the nine pins is really too much, and the back is not bad.

I think all the works are pretty good, but I've been very uncomfortable since Aozuki got pregnant.

I think the author is very talented, and I really like the author.

I spent a year reading the book Fortune Telling, and I can say that it incorporated a lot of my feelings.

I like it very much, I am obsessed, I can comfort the depths of my soul, I feel relieved, its realm is very suitable for my taste, I would like to meet this author. Wondering how old she is and looking forward to getting to know her.

Watch "Fortune Telling" first, and then watch "Fortune Telling". One for the first and one for the second. I didn't see the other works. I don't know if there is.

It's a good fate, I'm looking forward to putting it on the screen, I've been thinking about who is the right heroine to play?

I wish there were many books like Fortune Telling, Fortune Telling.

It is said that the land is greater than the position of the city god, and it is doomed.

Why hasn't Hades been updated?

I'm really fascinated by the storyline in this **Tell the Dead**, this is the first one I've watched**, I personally feel pretty good, I hope there will be a second one.

I can understand the harshness of the author's writing, but I personally appreciate the author's imagination.

I like it very much, although there are typos that are not surprising, it takes up a lot of my time, I am obsessed, I can comfort the depths of the soul, I am relieved, its realm, very suitable for my taste, I would like to see this author. Wondering how old she is and looking forward to getting to know her.

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The first recommendation Shouting in the drizzle is also written by Yu Hua Personally, I feel that the writing is more delicate, like the rhythm of **, writing about the anxiety, helplessness and hope of childhood.

Lu Yao's works "Ordinary World" and "Life", "Life" is a novella, which is relatively short, and it is really well written......Alas, life ah......

Haiyan's died of youth.

Recommend literary works and authors.

Siege of the City", "Bathing", "Four Worlds in the Same Hall", "Border City", "White Deer Plain", "Red Sorghum", "Crossing to the East and Returning to the West", "Life", "University", "Fog, Rain, Electricity", "I Am a Cat", "The Family of Gold Powder", "Half Life", "Camel Xiangzi" and ......

Zong Pu, Shen Congwen, Zhang Ailing, Zhang Hatshui, Qian Zhongshu, Yang Jiang, Lao She, Lin Yutang, Ji Xianlin, Zhang Xiaofeng, Chen Zhongzhong, Jia Pingwa, Lu Yao, Xi Murong, Sanmao ......

Disorderly arrangement, what you like is self-pleased, and you want to adopt it